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Horserider2005.11.04 - 06:53PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
Being the Lecterphile that I am, I found it of particular note that you used aubergine in this story...glad to see this up! You really had me going with this chapter...*phew*! ~HR

Author's Response: I did not intend to use eggplant for that purpose, but I'm glad you found enjoyment of it being included. LOL!

sglgiles2005.11.04 - 06:30PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
GAH! She should just give i. I mean honestly... if she thinks magic and moonlight are going to strike her and Ron on their anniversery she has to be mistaken. She is NOT happy, he is not happy, Severus is not happy. Ron would be happy free and Herms & Serverus would be happy together... and Harry.. well... oh bother... only person I sont see being happy in all this is Harry :(

Author's Response: Yes, Hermione should give in, but she's a witch of principle. You are right, so many people would be happier if Hermione and Ron split up.

Rave_n12005.11.04 - 05:54PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
So. He sincerely thinks of her warmly. It's a lovely chapter. I look forward to your next one!

Author's Response: Yes, Severus is rather fond of her now. Thanks, more on the way.

pickles2005.11.04 - 04:15PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
Thank you for a wonderful update. Glad she finally decided when she is going to choose. Hopefully she won't her Sev in the process. Waiting for more. P

Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank *you*. Yeah, it was time for Hermione to come down to brass tacks. We'll see if Severus' heart survives unscathed.

alitheia72005.11.04 - 03:38PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
Finally, Thursday came! I’ve been dying for them to meet! I don’t know how much longer this feeling will continue, but I swear to you every time I read one of your chapters weird things happen. When reading this one, I had goosebumps all over when they were in the kitchen, and when she saw the flowers and interpreted the meaning I almost cried.

I’ve been thinking about some of the characters of this story since the last chapter. If you take each one of them individually and look at how their surroundings affected them, their horrid behavior can be almost excused or at least understood. Take the Weasley children: somehow Molly seriously messed up. We saw evidence with Ginny/Draco/Harry. We saw what facts she hid from Hermione. We can only guess what she did to her other daughters’ in law if they had to resort to pretending they were pregnant. But as horrible as Molly has been, there is something that motivates her to behave in such a way. I guess everybody thinks they are good people and their actions are excused in their perspective but not when examined in an objective manner. Is Molly just the possessive mother-in-law from hell or is there more to her? I’m not sure how much earlier the rest of the Weasley sons married but the war must have been the catalyst to most unions. Has Molly’s fear of losing her family prompted her to push them to wed, procreate and be happy? However, at this point in the story I cannot forgive her actions and get the feeling that she is behind at least three failed marriages.

On the subject of Ron and Hermione’s marriage: some external factor has to sneak in to bring them to admit they are unhappy with each other. It is clear they are merely tolerating each other. And Hermione is fooling herself if she thinks she will feel anything more for Ron in two weeks time. Her feelings are for Severus. Mask or not (she must see it now) he is the man she is in love with. And my heart cannot take any more of this sparkling intensity between them. Can’t wait till their next meeting though (I must really like to torture myself…)

Thanks for making my day Betz! Till the next chapter!

Author's Response: Wow...gee! What a review! (Blushes) Thanks! Thrilled that you enjoyed this chapter so much. It was fun to write it, so I'm glad you grooved on the UST. Yeah, those flowers were a nice little touch from Severus. Yes, you are right, I try to give each character their own little backstory so they are not just cardboad cutouts of prop up characters to the story. In real life, people kind of come in and out of our lives, and I tried to capture that. My take on Molly is that she does the thngs she does out of love for her children and her belief that she knows what's best for her children, even if they don't know it. So she has to guide them to what's best. There is a lot of the war behind her desire to see her children married. During the war, whole family lines have been wiped out. But for Bill, Charlie, Percy and the twins, they married their wives with no interference from their mother.

Yes, Hermione and Ron seem to be tolerating each other. Hermione had made a promise to try and save her marriage, and Ron's initial statement spurred Hermione to thinking he would try. Hermione does love Severus, but that doesn't stop her from realizing that if she just abandon's Ron without after one last try that she will feel guilty, and Hermione does not want to live with any more regrets than she already has. Glad to make your day.


bellasol672005.11.04 - 03:24PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
Thank you for the wonderful update! That last line about being a 'besotted lovesick fool' had me howling! It was nice to see Hermione be a little bit stronger, more assertive here...and to see Snape fumbling and nervous. A lovesick Snape. What a visual that brings to mind. I think at this point even if Ron did a complete change in personality and became everything Hermione thinks she wants him to be, it wouldn't matter. She is in love w/ Snape...I just hope that when she gives Ron a chance she doesn't end up pregnant! Looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Glad you found humor in that last line. Yeah, lovesick Severus, unlikely as a snowball in hell, but certainly refreshing to witness regardless. Lots of good ideas and plot projections. We'll have to wait and see if any of them come true.

Esmine2005.11.04 - 02:48PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
This is so awesome! Besotted lovesick fool indeed! Geez Betz, you're really stretching the story out for us, I love it! I find myself being just a frustrated that they haven't even kissed each other yet, and excited about what it'll be like once they finally do become really intimate with each other. I am so happy you updated! Thank you! I can't wait for the next chaper!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying this slow progression. Yes, it is frustrating, but imagine how frustrated Hermione and Severus are! Thanks for your review.

SiriusWoman2005.11.04 - 02:39PM44: “Love Is For Brave and Besotted Lovesick Fools”Signed
“Monday I for await eagerly night.” Hermione may have contained her laughter, but I couldn't hold mine! I adore Severus for showing such consideration about many things while in a difficult position and I admire Hermione for giving her marriage "one last try." Thank you for bringing love and laughter to my dreary day.

Author's Response: Yeah, I was hoping that would provide a good laugh. Severus is going soft, in a rather adorable way. Hope it's still kind of canon enough. You are welcome, and thank you for the lovely review.

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