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| m123 | 2005.06.29 - 01:05PM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| Another great chapter, as always.
Ron is cheating on Hermione, isn't he? And he still expects Hermione to stay with him? what an idiot!
It's obvious that Severus and Hermione are falling in love, but that is what Ginny warned Severus against (Hermione falling for Calleo). Is she finally going to convince Hermione about her Thursday evening meetings? How's Draco going to handle Severus?
When is Hermione going to realize that Calleo is Snape? She did come close a while ago but dismissed it too quickly. I think Snape might just have to take off his mask to make her realize the truth. I believe it's about time Snape starts giving Hermione other clues. He could wear a half mask instead of the usual Casanova mask, is it?
I hope you can tell I am really really hooked with this fic. Thus update soon, with a nice long chapter, so that I might get the answers to some of my questions. Author's Response: What makes you think Ron is cheating on Hermione? Yes, Ginny did warn Severus about Hermione falling for him, but she didn't think Severus would fall for Hermione. Is Ginny going to confront Hermione on her visits with "Calleo'? You'll see. Yes, Hermione came close to realizing it was Severus, but she dismissed it, certain that Severus could never be so amicable. Severus could start wearing a half mask, but we'll see if he does or not. More on the way soon. So glad you are enjoying this so much, thanks for the review. | |||
| Moonlit River | 2005.06.29 - 10:00AM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| Yay!
I noticed a few mistakes, like "her" instead of "he", but overall another spiffing chapter!
Congradulations.
I'll check back in about two weeks for an update.
Until then, good job! Author's Response: Thanks! More will be waiting for you when you come back. | |||
| queenp | 2005.06.29 - 09:58AM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| *throwing a rotten tomato at author* The pun was BAD!! I did groan as I read it....*Grin* however, the discussion with Draco was excellent...made Severus think...*giggle* as for the pub crawl...Rosmerta's reaction to it was a bit suspicious...like she knows more than she lets on...the team had been by already and Ron wasn't with them? Was it Ron in the office with Lavender? Hmmm, could be an interesting twist...would be a way out for Hermione, maybe? I love your story, Betz. Can't wait to see what happens next...PLEASE, another update as quick as this one was? Update soon!! Author's Response: (Ducks quickly to avoid the barrage of rotten vegetables) Yes, it was a rather bad pun, but I shant recant. At least you got it. Glad you enjoyed Severus's little talk with Draco...most amusing to see the gear begin to grind and whirl...do I smell smoke? What makes you think Rosmerta knows anything? Glad you are enjoying this so much - that makes me do a happy dance. More on the way soon. | |||
| LariLee | 2005.06.29 - 07:41AM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| I feel sorry for poor Severus having to deal with Ann. But why do I assume that Ron is running around? What does Rosmerta know? I'm glad Hermione is starting to see herself as desirable. A very good complex chapter! ~Lisa Author's Response: Severus didn't used to mind shagging Miss Anne, it's just that now it seems less satisfying. Why do you think Ron is running around? Why do you think Rosmerta knows anything? Yes, it's time for poor Hemrione to realize she's not that bad looking when she's showered and her hair styled a little. Glad you love it. | |||
| spitfirecrackre | 2005.06.29 - 06:05AM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| Thanks for the fairly quick update!
Snape's reaction to the er..'revelations' in his mind due to Draco's rambling was well-captured. I could almost imagine his eyes bugging out and synapses firing to leap onto the conclusion. I wonder when he'll spill he beans to Hermione. Talking about wondering, who the heck is Lavender shagging? I'm all curiosity. heh. We don't have the Trix ads in Singapore but my siblings gobble enough of them just because of the ridiculously high sugar content "when eating the cardboard box it came in would actually be more nutritious and provide more fiber" -very, VERY true. Now, cheer for bran! *weak laughter*
Oh and I hope Siren's doing fine. Till the next chapter! | |||
| avery | 2005.06.29 - 02:28AM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| I love the chapter title... very appropriate. (lol) As always, I'm thrilled when I see an update of your wonderful story. This is by far one of the best fics out there, what with the characterization and the complex storyline (how do you keep so many plots going? I'm in awe), and the fact you instill humour throughout it all (doused in angst, but hey, what great comedy isn't a tragedy underneath it all?). Please keep updating. Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter title. Needed a little pun in there.How do I keep all the plot lines going? I have no clue, I just pray that since this is a WIP I don't forget anything. Thank you for your wonderful review. I bow humblely to your praise. More on the way soon. | |||
| Clara Minutes | 2005.06.29 - 02:14AM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| Draco in a mini skirt is definitely something that made me laugh. Actually that whole random musing was funny. This is an excellent story. Author's Response: Draco in a mini would be hot! With those legs!?! Yes, isn't free association of visual images fun? Especially when Hermione doesn't want to envision those things. Thanks your your lovely review. | |||
| cocoachristy | 2005.06.29 - 02:02AM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| Lovely chapter, Betz. My favorite part was when Severus realized he was falling in love with Hermione. ;-) I thought it was funny he made Ann wear a mask to try and pretend he was with Hermione and then refused her when she wanted to stay. LOL
I notived Rosemerta got a little uncomfortable thinking about Ron...Hmmm. What does she know?? Can't wait for more!! Good job! Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. Yes, it is rather interesting to watch the light come on and Severus realize just what is happening. The mask on Miss Anne was him in the begining of his denial. And what makes you think Madam Rosmerta knows anything. More on the way soon. | |||
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