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jenn2016.06.08 - 09:52PM79: "The Child Is Gone"Signed
This story is fabulous!! Loving all the detail but I want Hermione and Severus back together again. Love the touch with the scorch marks though.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's very symbolic about how she burnt her relationship with her daughter and damaged the family - which is why it's on the family kitchen table - the center of the Weasley family life in most of the books.

loreen772016.06.08 - 09:05PM75: "Aloha"Signed
Oh dear, Harry can't tell Ron. What a dramatic chapter. I am just addicted to this!

Author's Response: Ron eventually finds out. But can't say when.

loreen772016.06.08 - 04:48PM74: "I Left My Heart in San Francisco" Signed
Love it, great chapter. Seeing Severus squirm as the lounge singer called out to him was hysterical! Great idea for sanctuary to be in Hawaii it seems perfect to me.

Author's Response: Yeah, being come onto by not only Tommy but ogled at by Frank? Oh, the horror.

loreen772016.06.08 - 04:08PM73: "Free Bird"Signed
I knew Hermione wouldn't be able to go, but my heart still broke as the vile shattered. The story is so riveting! I am totally hooked.

Author's Response: Yeah, after she fought with herself all night to be denied to go with him? It really broke both their hearts. Thank you, glad you still enjoy my story.

pottohipamus2016.06.05 - 12:12AM78: “Friends, Food, and FlirtationSigned
Ah, a measure of freedom at last. Poor Hermione, but if she'd left without trying to set things right, it would have always bothered her. Bless Luna for her role. She's a peach. I'm impressed with how the characters you animate and the setting you describe create such a rich backdrop for your story. And I'm very glad you enjoy the process, because I sure enjoy the read.

Author's Response: You're right about Hermione. Thanks, glad you're enjoying this change of scene and new location.

karmen_912016.06.04 - 04:16PM78: “Friends, Food, and FlirtationSigned
You give me the desire to go to the Hawaii again! And live there!! I loved it when I went there but now I am outright thinking about going to live there permanently! You already know I love your story, it's been years now. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please! Thank you and huge thanks to the betas! Hugs&Kisses from Bulgaria :)

Author's Response: Wait until you see the treehouse Jerry lives in. I have video of that (actually stayed in a treehouse last visit to Hawaii and wrote it into the story afterwards). But wait, you haven't met Jerry yet - that's chapter 92. Hugs & kisses back from California.

mele2016.05.29 - 06:20AM77: "Jumbo Cockroach Clusters" Signed
A big mahalo for the Hawaii references. I'm a native. We refer to the roaches as B-52's after the airplanes, because they are so large. Also, the reason we like spam and canned corn beef is world war 2 rations. I've seen 5 gallon buckets of corned beef exchanged between the bride and groom's family at a Samoan wedding. The thought is we don't eat til we are full, we eat until we are too tired to eat more. And anything that doesn't move faster than us is fair game for a meal. It is not unusual to have dishes from different races at a luau. Sushi, Kim chee, adobo and Portuguese sausage and Chinese noodles regularly show up at a pot luck. I've loved this story from the beginning, but love it more for the local stuff you've been adding lately!

Author's Response: I was aware of the love of Spam in Hawaii and I have nothing against it, but Severus does. That is funny, the exchanging of 5 gal buckets. And speaking of being so full til bursting, the luau is the next chapter, and reflects all the various backgrounds of the people who have sought sanctuary there. And there will be a lot more wizard & Muggle Hawaiian culture coming up over the next several chapters, as this is Severus' home now. And my beta, JuneW, is from Hawaii too, so she's been fixing up my Hawaiian.

Formeandmygirls22016.05.28 - 10:33AM77: "Jumbo Cockroach Clusters" Signed
I was so excited to see the update. Loved every word! There is so much going on. I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Oh, there is a lot that will happen. Still have people to find out Ginny's gone, Draco and Ginny's wedding, other things, and Christmas is coming up soon. Can't wait to share the extra "video" goodie I have for the Christmas chapter: It's cheesy, and hokey and delightful.

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