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Ara2005.08.26 - 11:21PM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
it is gastronom, you are absolutely correct if you ever need help with anything russian, you can always refer your questions to me thank you for this story, i'm really enjoying it

Author's Response: I'll be sure to remember you if I ever need more Russian for this story. Thanks for the feedback that I was at least close to the mark in my translation, since most of the Russian I picked up I learned orally instead of by the written word.

cocoachristy2005.08.26 - 10:55PM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Whew woman! Is the heat on, cause it was hot in that room with Sevrus and Hermione. I so feel for her, she is so torn. It seems like she wants him so bad, but just can't bring herself to cheat. Although I want her with Snape, that says something about her character. But I feel for her, she just seems so lonely. I hope she figures out who it is soon, but I worry what will happen when she does. Anyway, good job! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hermione is torn between breaking her marriage vows or doing what she wants/needs. It's like standing on the edge of a cliff wondering if your parachute will work. Hermione is lonely, which is why she started seeing Calleo in the first place.

m1232005.08.26 - 10:27PM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
oh boy! Hermione is definitely in denial! It is so easy to see that it is Snape, with so many clues, and an objective perspective. so on Monday, Snape is going to reveal himself? I really can't tell what Hermione's reaction will be. Here's the regular part of the review (Ron trashing time): Ron's is an idiot good-for-nothing pig. And whatever you say, I am Convinced that Ron is cheating on Hermione. Poor Snape, Poor Hermione. Please tell me they are going to get their happily ever after eventually. Or is the title kinda like foreshadowing the end? (I won't like you if it is not a happy ending.) Poor me, had to wait so loooong for this chapter. I know you're woking hard but I can't help the whinging. This chapter was excellent, like the rest of the story. You have sooo got me hooked. I'd give you a rating of 100 if it was an option. Anyway, update as soon as possible, and it might be nice to get a glimpse of what's in the next chapter. Oh and another question: Has Snape admitted that he is in love with Hermione yet?

Author's Response: Yep, denial is not just a river in Egypt. Don't worry, Hermione will come to the realization it's Snape soon enough and she'll be kicking herself for being so blind (ha ha, pun intended). You'll just have to wait and see how Monday goes. Can't tell you as I'm in the middle of writing that chapter right now. Yes, yes, Ron is an insensitive rat fucker (and I mean that in the worst *cough*Pettigrew*cough* way) at times.

My title implies that despite Rowlings likelihood of Harry winding up with Ginny, and Hermione winding up with Ron, and ending book 7 witha sort of "And they lived happily ever after", I think that a few years down the line, it will become apparant - like in my story - that there will be some serious relationship issues that mean they didn't live happily ever after. I think Harry has some emotional issues he needs to deal with, Ginny is really meant to be with someone like redeemed!Draco, Ron will continue being a whingy, selfish prick (especially the way after he reacted to the ***STARTLING*** news Hermione snogged Krum -- a key example of asshole!Ron), and Hermione will grow and mature far past what Ron is capable of giving her in a relationship and she will need someone of equal intellectual and emotional maturity to be her companion. So my title does not imply how the story will end, just how I think Harry, Ginny, Ron and Hermione lives will wind up some years after Rowling sets them up to be paired off, married and stuck with each other for a few years. These four characters will not be living happily ever after, after book 7 ends.

kcjenna2005.08.26 - 10:11PM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you.

lemonade82005.08.26 - 10:02PM37: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 1Signed
Excellent as always. Nice to see the sparks fly in the kitchen. I have to say, as much as I'm rooting for Snape/Hermione (of course!), I really like that she is not having such an easy time betraying her marriage vows. Although she is plenty betrayed by Ron, I always thought your Hermione was better than that. (well, you know, getting married to attain a goal, then discarding it when it became inconvenient.) Maybe Ron will do something soon to tip the scales and help her realize once and for all that she doesn't matter to him. What a hypocrit I am, I'm great with Ron being left (I'm bad), but I like your Harry so much that I will be sad when he gets left alone. Ah well... such is life. Way to pull off the sexual tension. It's not easy to do. And she finally talked to someone about Marge. He should be honored at her trust. ((hugs)) I'll say it again, nice chapter.

Author's Response: I always love your reviews. They always have some interesting remarks in them. Yes, I can't have Hermione just flop on her back and toss aside her marriage vows, she takes her vows seriously. So I needed to have her worn own bit by bit with each visit until she's at the breaking point where she is forced to choose. Severus begging is certainly a point in which I would say "sod it!" and jsut shag him anyway, but Hermione has always considered herself as someone of high moral conviction -- look at SPEW and defending Buckbeak. Harry, though he is a good husband, is not the right man for Ginny. More on Harry and Ginny in the next chapter...poor, poor Harry indeed. Though he hasn't always been the best husband, he's tried to be the best he can. It's just very sad that Ginny can't love him the way he wants her to love him. But you can't force love. Hermione was finally ready to talk about Marge to Calleo, as he's the one Hermione trusts the most (emotionally). So glad you enjoyed the sexual tension, wasn't sure if I'd have a revolt on my hands after those two close calls.

Alyssa_Snape2005.08.26 - 10:00PM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Please, please update again soon! I want to know what Hermione's choice is, and hopefully in the next chapter she figures out who it is. She needs proof she can't deny...isn't another word for the irefutable? Something like that... Anyway, like I said, please update again soon or I'll go nuts. Your story is very very good.

Author's Response: Chapter 38 is still with my first beta, but it's on the way. I promise! She will figure things out soon enough. Things will snap into place and then she'll deal with that knowledge accordingly. So glad to have given you an enjoyable read.

joots2005.08.26 - 09:35PM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Ah, absolutely wonderful. I quite enjoyed the remarks to Cinderella! And poor Hermione, she's so in denial, however I believe I would be too. Of course, I'd also divorce Ron as well (maybe...). I can't wait to see what her choice is, nor can I wait for even a sentence more of this story! (It's amazing, really!) Thank you!

Author's Response: Happy to please. Yes, poor Hermione doesn't want to know who it is, as she knows her curiosity has ruined one too many good times. Besides, how could she be utterly turned on by a professor who she found to have an abhorent personality? More to come in chapter 38 to satisfy your cravings.

SiriusLives6892005.08.26 - 08:43PM37: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 1Signed
But I don't have part two! *whigne, sob*~ Angela

Author's Response: Part 2 is up now. Does that help?

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