Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In |
Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions

Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After

m1232005.07.14 - 09:51AM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
I hate Ronald Weasley. Why didn't Hermione realize they are sooo not supposed to be together? They are ruining each other's lives (well maybe not Ron's 'cuz I am CONVINCED that he is cheating; I just know it; he's such a wanker; did I mention I hate him?) Back to the original track, doesn't he realize that it is just a nice thing to hold until your parner can come? And doesn't he have HANDS to help her out? I hate him! On another note, I think Hermione has started to, at least subconsciously, started to relate Calleo to Snape, but just doesn't want to admit it. That would mean that Calleo is not the 'gentleman' she thought he was, and is definitely not the kind of man to leave one's husband for. In part, it is due to Ron and his family that she can't meet with her parents often. I think that you are going to make Hermione use her Muggle passport etc. to make her disappear with Snape, Draco and Ginny. At least that is what I am hoping for, a happy ending that is. I was just wondering...you mentioned way way way back that divorced women are looked down upon in the wizarding world and can't get a decent job. Hermione's current job is underpaid and, in my opinion, not decent at all. If she were to leave Ron, and not go with Snape (I HOPE you don't make that happen), can she be fired? Her professional development has already been stunted because of the Umbridge fiasco. She can't be worse off, can she? From the previous chapter, Draco definitely realizes that Snape is in love with Mrs. Weasley. The question is how Draco and Ginny are going to handle it. I am especially interested in Ginny's reaction because she so did not think of Snape falling in love with Hermione. I hope you enjoy HBP but start writing wonderful chapters for this fic soon after. I cannot wait till the next time. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yes, Ron is a first class prick in my fic. I figure from teh way he behaved towards Hermione in PoA and with Krum in GoF, and the way he treated Harry in GoF, when things aren't exactly rosey, he can be a super jerk. WHy didn't Hermione realize that they weren't supposed to be together? Because Ron came along and dated her then proposed. She didn't know until recently that it can be better, much better. She settled for Ron and has stuck with him out of fear of being a lone spinster - becoming a sexless bookworm as some of her classmates had called her back in school.

I think Hermione has never been comfortable with her body and sex. She's also never been really turned on by Ron, and has remained a bit uptight and totally not relaxed or trusting when it comes to sex. After years of sex with a woman who is not that good of a lay (partly his fault for not trying to be a better lay himself), I think Ron has given up trying to make the sex better.

Yes, Hermione's mind is starting to connect the dots, but in her conscious state, she has just dismissed it as weird dreams. Yes, Hermione believes she has to stay with Ron out of obligation for family and her vows. I think Hermione drifting away from her parents is already happeneing in the books - canon. So I thought it was only natural that she would continue drifting away as a married adult.

In regards for her job, yes, she can be worse off, but she can also be better off. More on the way in chapter 33.

Yes, Draco does recognize the signs of love, and he sees them with Severus. Ginny will have her own response coming up in ch33. Chapter 33 is with my 1st beta right now and I'm still busy writing the Thursday befor HBP comes out, in the middle of writing chapter 36.

Shylee Black2005.07.14 - 12:07AM27: "Truss Me" Signed
Hay Betz, This story has been so cool, I just love how Hermione and Snape are falling for each ather but don't went to admit it. They are so good togather, I can't wait to see what happens. I also love how you have Ron and Lavender are shagging each ather. And we know that it is happen. There is to many thing that pint to it. One is that Ron was to nice to Hermione that nexts day, he has not had a woman for some time. So he had to get it some where. Then there is why do Lavender take her lover back to her work, she is hiding some thing. And he was not with his team at the pub, come on we know.

Author's Response: Yes, Hermione and Severus do have this natureal attraction for one another in my fic. But what makes you say Ron and Lavender are shagging? Surely you are makig assumptions based on purely circumstantial evidence. And Ron really is working at the pub...no, he really does work at the Listing Broom.

sglgiles2005.07.13 - 09:21PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
*sigh* so sad... Keep going! loving it! I have to admit this pic is based on 7th year.. but thought you might like it anyway... by moi, Trying to make my own base to do a pick for your story, but having difficulty lol http://www.geocities.com/medea_violia/SnapeNHerms.gif Base :- http://www.stvgr.net/dhf/

Author's Response: Very good dolls, my dear. Severus needs a nose job...or addition I should say. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

katthebrat18fl2005.07.13 - 06:15PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
I would have told him to keep his mouth shut too lol.... I would hate being bucked off and unsatisfied...though....i would have taken a shower (if you know what i mean hehehehe)

Author's Response: Yes, bad noises, not good, sexy noises, very good. Problem is, Hermione isn't turned on by Ron's sex noises.

cryingoddess2005.07.13 - 05:38PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
update soon!!!

Author's Response: I will! Just as soon as ch33 clears through my 3 betas.

spaz1412005.07.13 - 05:32PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
You had to leave us...just like Hermione didn't you. *whines* Thanks for the update and enjoy your reading of the HBP.

Author's Response: Don't worry, more is on the way. You just ahve to wait until ch33 has gone through the beta wringer. I figure it will be coming out after HBP. I will enjoy my reading, hope you do too.

irene2005.07.13 - 04:54PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
It's a wonderful chapter. You've done the frustrated Hermione bit so well, one can actually feel her emotions and scream "selfish bastard" together with her. :-)

Author's Response: Kindest thanks for your praise. I'm glad I captured sexually frustrated!Hermione to your liking. Yes, she is really to kill him is she doesn't get a proper shag soon...or hex him (hint, hint).

Anouska Draconius2005.07.13 - 12:38PM31: “Thou Art Fishified”Signed
..... seduced by a salacious salad ..... hee hee. I absolutely adore this story. I'm hoping Hermione won't hex Severus too much when she finds out who Calleo is.

Author's Response: Yes, I was hoping most everyone would get a good chuckle out of that line. So glad you are still enjoying this fic. We'll just have to wait and see how Hermione reacts when she realizes who Calleo is.

[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 217 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 240 241 242 243 244 245 246 247 248 249 250 251 252 253 254 255 256 257 258 259 260 261 262 263 264 265 266 267 268 269 270 271 272 273 274 275 276 277 278 279 280 281 282 283 284 285 286 287 288 289 290 291 292 293 294 295 296 297 298 299 300 301 302 303 304 305 306 307 308 309 310 311 312 313 314 315 [Next]


Disclaimers
Terms of Use
Credits

Ashwinder
A Severus Snape/Hermione Granger archive in the Harry Potter universe

Copyright © 2003-2019 Sycophant Hex
All rights reserved