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avery2005.10.14 - 04:52PM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
Yay. New chapter. How lovely. I really wanted Hermione to just face facts and admit that she wants out. Forget pride and her prejudice of failure. She's human, she's not perfect, she needs to get over it. She also needs to get away from that creep of a husband and fast. Sigh. But noooo, she has to be all noble and stubborn (stupidly pig-headed, more like!). Now here I am ranting about characters that are fictional twice over... Thanks for updating. As always, your writing is compelling and emotional (else why would I be ranting) and the chapter goes by much to fast. Cheers!

Author's Response: Hermione is not ready to bail, yet. Maybe she never will. As long as Ron is willing to try, then so is she. You are right in assuming she would consider it a failure if her marraige disolved, but that's something she'll have to learn to deal with if it comes to that.

Fury2005.10.14 - 03:49PM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
I love this story and am glad it is progressing nicely. I thought the counseling think was great and hope that Ron won't completely push her over the edge. Maybe Harry will make her come to certain realizations, or just come to terms with her feelings for Snape?

Author's Response: Yes, we are all hoping Hermione can hold out and not snap again. Harry is not about to promote the idea of divorce to Hermione, as he does not want to see his two best friends divorce. Thanks for the review!

annettemarie2005.10.14 - 03:41PM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
Wonderful story! I loved the counseling scene.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Winna2005.10.14 - 02:22PM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
What really shines through for me in this chapter is something that’s been bugging me since I read CoS: just what do Hermione and Ron see in each other in canon? They are both good, decent people, but why-oh-why does JKR think they are attracted to each other? I swear she had a teen-age crush on a red headed boy and is secretly writing herself a love interest…

But as for your story, I thought this was another great chapter. It’s a shame that Hermione is so stubborn, since even her counselor thinks these two should break up. Speaking of stubborn, it’s taken Snape long enough to admit his feelings to himself. Next chapter should be even more spectacular!

Oh, and a big thanks, hugs, and kisses to your betas!

Author's Response: Yes, I've been wondering that exact same thing. Why does Rowling feel the need to pair Hermione up with a verbally abusive boy? Perhpas there are certain aspects of her first husband or first boyfriend that she puts into Ron's character, but for the fact Ron bails on his friends when things get tough at times does not endear him to me. Yes, both Hermione and Snape are stubborn in their own way. But you have to cut each a break, as they are both alive by using this stubborn streak to survive.


Lana Manckir2005.10.14 - 01:54PM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
Oh that poor counselor! I wouldn't want to be in his position, in a session like that! LOL Love the chapter and I am more and more angry at Ron, he's very similar to my soon-to-be-ex-husband. I don't know how you do it, but you channeled a jerk's character so well, the bullying, the lack of hygiene, the overall stupidity. Anyway, as soon as Severus admits he is in love, things can move forward and he can do things with a clear head. I don't know why he insists on denying it. Both him and Hermione for that matter. Yay I am glad you've updated, I was checking everyday.

Author's Response: Sorry to hear your soon-to-be-ex is so...so...unbearable. I have channeled jerk? I am flattered and appalled at the same time. I just like to think I've distilled some of the less noble atributes of Ron from canon. You are right, things will progress much more quickly once Severus freely admits a few things to himself. Why does he deny? Because he's used o keeping himself emotionally detatched and his heart closed off. This whole love thing snuck up on him and with the mopst unlikely person. The next chapter is with my betas right now, so more is on the way.

Winna2005.10.14 - 12:05PM42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?”Signed
Great chapter. I thought Hermione's reactions were very realistic, although by this time I'm willing to overlook some OOC behavior to have some UST resolved. At least Snape is able to indulge in some self love; what do you have against Hermione that the most she gets is a drunken striptease? Anyway, next chapter looks good, and since it's already posted, I'll just be moving on... *winna leaves, humming the Coconuts song*

Author's Response: The UST will be resolved soon enough. I have nothing against Hermione. It's just from observation that I've noticed that some of the most uptight people get a little wild when they get a little alcohol into their system and allow themselves to cut loose.

Alyssa_Snape2005.10.14 - 11:56AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
I'm extremely glad you've updated. If I was in Hermione's position, i'd tell Ron to go fuck himself and divorce his annoying ass. But nope, Hermione's all noble...*sighs* But Hermione being noble really makes the story interesting, so it's all good. But just reading about the things Ron's saying makes me want to kill him. Hermione should just give up and divorce him. Unless...you waiting for Severus to ask Hermione to help him, Draco, and Ginny leave England. Then she could leave with them, after divorcing Ron. I can't exactly remember where they want to go, but if they go to America, well divorce probably isn't such a no-no there. Well, it was a lovely chapter, I love how you describe the emotions. I can't wait for some more Severus/Hermione interaction. Your doing an awesome job, I'm and extremely glad I've found this story. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, divorce would be on the immediate horizon for me too. Some good ideas, but we'll have to wait and see if any of them pan out or not. More Hermione/Severus interaction next chapter. And more is on the way, as the next chapter is with my betas.

Keladry Lupin2005.10.14 - 11:27AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
I've seen that this has been in the queue for ages, and I've just been drooling, waiting for this chapter. And it's worth the wait! Severus is denying that he loves her, and marriage counseling isn't going well at all. Most excellent!

And tell Ginny that her chapter title is, indeed, perfect.

Author's Response: Kindest thanks! I'll pass the word onto Ginny. Yep, Severus is sailing in Egypt, but that cruise will end soon enough. More on the way, next chapter is with my betas.

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