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loreen772016.01.18 - 07:00AM64: “Dolor Hic Tibi Proderit Olim” (Someday this pain will be useful to you)Signed
Excellent idea having her use the massage oil to induce slumber. I don't think I could shag him again if I was in her situation.

Author's Response: Yes, isn't it nice to have something like that in her arsenal. And Hermione is only shagging Ron to avoid raising suspicions.

verasuspense2016.01.17 - 09:40AM64: “Dolor Hic Tibi Proderit Olim” (Someday this pain will be useful to you)Signed
Are you a Walking Dead fan? They used that quote in the last episode before the hiatus.

Author's Response: No, actually. I don't watch The Walking Dead. I wrote this chapter back in Match 2014. It is a Latin phrase, so the writers of Walking Dead probably found on a Latin phrase website like I did.

loreen772016.01.12 - 05:26AM63: “Testing, Testing, Testing” Signed
Amazing, as always! The spa scenes were perfect. This story is so much more that just well written smut, it has such great depth of character and such well written human drama. I love your attention to detail, nice tie in to the real weather patterns of the day. Loved it all and look forward to more ❤️

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I really like incorporating something of the actual phases of the moon to correspond to a particular date, weather events to happen at the same time. If someone goes, "Oh yeah! I remember that storm!" or something like that, then they can think back and go,, "Okay, so when that was happening, this was going on in the story." It makes it easier to imagine it happened during a time that the reader can remember.

OnlyMoonLight2016.01.11 - 12:41PM63: “Testing, Testing, Testing” Signed
I am so sucked into this story and always look forward to the update. Not just about the romance, but the everyday things too, dealing with real life struggles...it makes it so easy to be in the story. And that's excellent writing. Thank you for sharing it! And the art work commissioned is spot-on sexy! Props to the artist as well!

Author's Response: Thanks! What a compliment! It's nice to read fun and smut and angst that gloss over daily life for escapism reading, but sometimes you need to get into some of the details of life to really understand what a character is going through. And I have more fanart commissions for upcoming chapters. Not all chapters, but a fair amount of art that is either being worked on or is completed (nine done or in process, and possibly more to be commissioned). Next commission piece goes with Chapter 62.

Jong_Kahn2016.01.11 - 10:18AM61: “The Bitter Truth” or “The Kneazle Is Out of the Bag”Signed
Hmm: Ron's going to a broom convention in Italy the very same weekend Severus' client "Miss Anne" will likewise be spending time there. Coincidence? I think maybe not! I liked this chapter very much, especially the growing individual awareness within Severus and Hermione of their own feelings for the other. Well done.

Author's Response: Ron and Miss Anne? Maybe. Maybe not. Yeah, Hermione and Severus are getting quite emotionally close with one another. Thanks.

Jong_Kahn2016.01.11 - 10:02AM60: “Green-Eyed Monsters, Fairies and Sirens”Signed
Fifteen lines up from the bottom, "Hermione shook her heads slowly," should probably be amended to "shook her head"--unless she grew another one from all the testing'-) When you indicated portion differences between "pinch", "smidgen" and the like, it reminded me that Restoration Hardware offered a measuring spoonlet collection that featured both of those, but no 'fleck'. This was another good chapter; thanks for writing it!

Author's Response: Ah, thanks for catching that. I'll have to go and fix that. As for measuring, I wanted to use all the various terms for something small. Had no idea Restoration Hardware had a measuring set with those volumes.

Jong_Kahn2016.01.11 - 09:32AM59: “Of Bets and Brandy, of Binges and Brave Gryffindors, and Why the Bath Is Boiling Hot”Signed
It certainly seemed like Severus was giving Hermione the hint that a massage with particular oils could have the effect of unnoticeably putting Ron to sleep by relaxing him--even as Sev himself was doing that to Hermione.

pottohipamus2016.01.05 - 01:20AM62: “The Drabarni”Signed
I'm sure enjoying your tale, thanks so much for sharing you talent. And all the time! it must take to create such a thing. I'm worried about Ron, he reminds me of my brother in law, who was a nice guy except for the way he treated his wife. His steroid abuse led to a brief illness and early death. It's been lovely to see Hermione and Severus find reciprocated love. At least my heart can be warm, even if my fingers and toes are feeling January's temporary triumph over Florida.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, it took 19 months to write chapters 51-118. Wow, your brother in law.... sounds like a peach. Yeah, Ron is going through the 'roid rage shit, but that will come to an end.

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