Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| s50m | 2012.04.19 - 12:49PM | 53: “Waiting For the Gods of Weather to Smile” | Signed |
| I'm really sad to see that this is the last posted chapter for this excellent story. Even though this is an abandoned fic, I really loved reading it. Thanks for sharing! :) |
| s50m | 2012.04.18 - 04:55PM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| The "Just you, Severus" line was so sweet! :) But I don't understand why Hermione is being so obliging to Ron by going to his game and to Percy's party. Just end it, Hermione! |
| s50m | 2012.04.18 - 04:47PM | 51: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part One of Two | Signed |
| Their emotions and actions seem so genuine and realistic. Great writing, as always! :) |
| s50m | 2012.04.18 - 04:39PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| Yay! :) I love how you've perfectly captured both Hermione and Severus's thoughts throughout this story, but most particularly in this intense chapter. The wait of 50 long chapters was definitely worth it! :) |
| s50m | 2012.04.18 - 02:40PM | 49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II” | Signed |
| Hermione needs to RUN to her lawyer and get a divorce. Her hopeless marriage is over and if she were truly the "brightest witch of her age" she would accept it and end it. On to happier thoughts now...oh, my goodness, the ending of your chapter was so worth the incredibly long wait!!!! :) The kiss was so intense and your vivid descriptions of their achingly slow actions leading up to it were perfect! This part gave me the shivers (in a good way!): "And now I need to know: is it that I have no passion in me at all...or is it that I only feel passion with you?” I am so happy that Hermione got her answer! As ecstatic as I am about the kiss and her acknowledgement of Severus's presence, I was not overjoyed to see her run off with that flimsy "not tonight" excuse. Please bring her back to Severus! :) Lovely, lovely, lovely! |
| s50m | 2012.04.18 - 02:23PM | 46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake” | Signed |
| I adore how comfortable and easy Snape and Hermione's relationship is. This was a great line (uttered by Snape) that demonstrated his true affection for her: "I still had your company as you slept." Very sweet! :) And I admire how Snape is not pushing Hermione into a physical relationship before she is ready. Superb! :) |
| s50m | 2012.04.18 - 02:14PM | 45: “Sexy Dress, Sexless Night” | Signed |
| I'm still seething about Ron telling Hermione that she dressed like a frump. Please just let her get a divorce from him! Also, you wrote another funny and creative disclaimer. Great work! :) |
| s50m | 2012.04.18 - 02:08PM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| I really liked your disclaimer. Very creative! :) |
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