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Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After

queenp2006.01.21 - 08:41PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
*whimper* If he needs a new client, I could be persuaded...:D

Excellent chapter, as always...update again soon!!

agalia2006.01.21 - 08:39PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
WOW... makes me feel like a scotch would be prefectly fine right now... that was intense! Thanks so much for the GREAT chapter... You ROCK! ~*~ Agalia~*~

Hypnobarb2006.01.21 - 08:33PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
Oh, yes it is perfect. This whole story has been foreplay and you've utterly seduced all of us. It's wonderful to see them happy!

AvadaKefatta2006.01.21 - 08:12PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
Fucking AWESOME. I've been following this fic from the beginning, and it just keeps on getting better. I cannot find fault with it, but I may be just a bit biased. Great job, I'm looking forward to the rest of it!

alitheia72006.01.21 - 07:53PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
What a beginning to ACT II Betz!

Watching Severus drinking himself to oblivion was actually a bit unexpected for him. She really floored him with her departure. And here I thought he would think more carefully at what she had meant with "Not Tonight". Poor Draco. He had gone through a similar version of hell and he didn't have anyone to console him at the time.

The "new customer" for Severus was quite a shock! Now, what would Miss Lavender be needing Molly for? She made it seem that she was doing it as a favor to someone else (Ron perhaps?) What a complete and utter mess that will be... Ginny visiting Draco downstairts. Molly and Hermione visting Severus upstairs. And now that Harry saw how Hermione ended her "enchanted evening" with Ron well... I'm sure he will be doing a bit of lurking in that area again.

Their meeting was masterfully done. I like that he made his claim for potion's ingredients before they had sex. Having spent already all this time with him, she was able to read his reactions and tell him why she left the night before. That was really well done I thought. The scene with her nibbling on his Adam's apple was very erotic as was their confessions and interactions. The drawings are also wonderful. Thanks again and welcome back!


Antagonist Len2006.01.21 - 07:39PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
Oh, finally! I mostly skipped over the smut, but that they finally got around to it is really making me giddy :D And they're happy, well for now anyway. So good to see you updating again.. I'm a little sad that there's much more to come, because that means things will go badly, but it's nice to know you wn't be ending this all that soon either.

wicked_bella2006.01.21 - 02:40PM21: “Twenty Questions”Signed
I've been chanting "Hey-nonny-nonny and a Ha-cha-cha!" throughout the entire chapter. It's all your fault. :p I love the story so far, very entrancing, although you do seem to have a tendency to state the character's (rather obvious) emotions instead of letting them tell it just through actions. It doesn't really bother me, just thought I'd mention it. Lovely story though.

dforlove2006.01.19 - 09:33PM46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake”Signed
Hey Betz, this is D. I've still been reading your lovely lovely fanfic back here in the shadows. I can't wait for more. Poor Severus just being left hanging like that. Tugged at my heart strings, that did. I'm glad Hermione has finally realized that Ron isn't for her, and she should indeed persue Severus, though. That's the right foot. Hopefully they'll work through the rocky surf I have a feeling is heading their way once more ^_^

Author's Response: Well, the next chapter has been psoted, so you see that he wasn't left hanging for too long. Rough patch, but he survived.

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