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| Lana Manckir | 2005.07.05 - 08:21PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| Yay, I'm loving this 2 updates a week thing ;-) Oh I know i've said this before, but reading Ron and Hermione is like reading my own relationship with my husband(soon to be ex, hope Hermione does the same thing). The patterns are the same and lead the same way, his reactions to her, the rejections. I just wish I had a gigolo named Calleo, then everything would be perfect LOL. Great Chapter, I am almost afraid of what will happen once Sev reveals himself to her, I just hope she won't reject him, even out of anger for being kept in the dark all this time. It would be awful to see him crushed and let down. Can't wait for their dance lessons! Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear about your marriage being very much like Ron and Hemrione's. At least that's some feedback that there is some realism to this story. I hope you find your own Calleo someday. You'll have to wait for the "revealing" of Severus and how Hermione reacts. There will be a wide spectrum of emotions, that's all I can say. Chapter 30 on it's way soon. | |||
| lemonade8 | 2005.07.05 - 07:18PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| Awww!!! (((Calleo))). Wants to keep up his relationship with Hermione!! I'll take him if she won't. Ron...hmmm. I wish she would ask him WHY he wants to stay with her and get it over with, but I'm sure she's leery of that question and I can understand why. Can't wait for the dance lessons, although I have a hard time visualizing Severus swing dancing, lol should be romantic, interesting and funny. :D Trevor sounds like he needs to end up in a potion instead of testing them. Author's Response: Yes, he does. He rather likes basking in her happiness and joy radiating towards him. And I have first dibs on Calleo/Severus if she dumps him. He's MINE! And Ron...yes, the husband. :-( Ron has his reasons for sticking around and Hermione has her reasons for trying to make this work. Severus dancing swing. Yes, that will be in chapter 33, however, we having something a little different planned for chapter 30. I liked your remark about Trevor. That sounds more like a wizarding Mafia way of making someone disappear...something that doesn't involve a meat grinder. | |||
| Moyra | 2005.07.05 - 05:31PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| As always, I´m enjoying your story immensely - sorry that I´ve no time to review more often, but RL is demanding a lot of work from me, like to organize the biggest garden party we have ever planned... cheers, M Author's Response: Are you busy painting your roses red? Hope your party goes as planned. I *know* how you must feel, as I did catering for about 12 years in the family business and did a short stint as a wedding coordinator before I realized I hated dealing with Joe/Joan Q Public. Boy, I do sould like Severus. Good luck! Let me know how it goes. | |||
| queenp | 2005.07.05 - 05:12PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| OK, so you ask if I know for sure that he is cheating...TECHNICALLY, no I don't..It's a gut thing though. It feels like he is...The dance lessons do sound yummy..I wish I could take some lessons with Calleo...*dreaming of a mattress mambo with him, sigh*...hopefully, we'll find out I'm right about Ron--i still think Rosmerta knows something about it, too--before Hermione does something that she really regrets...*sigh* update soon!! Author's Response: Yes, dance lessons with Severus. Pardon the drool. "Mattress mambo," tha;s a new one - it gave me a big luahg, thanks. Another chapter will be posted Wednesday and will probably take a day or two to clear the queue, so more is on the way. | |||
| Aurealis | 2005.07.05 - 05:01PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| Oh I did enjoy this chapter. I knew I would, of course. But it's always in a fresh and romantic way that it ends. Oooo, I can't wait until the dnaicng starts. The clumsy fumbling, the dips, the too close embraces and the unexpected falls on top of one another after dizzying spins!!! Alright - let's have at it! Author's Response: Glad I didn't disappoint you. Ending on the hope of an evening with Calleo romantic ending? Had to leave you something to look forward to. I won't comment on any more of your post (hint, hint). | |||
| Barbara | 2005.07.05 - 03:06PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| Thanks for quick the update! Am biting my nails in anticipation for the next chapter - the dancing lesson. Will go and listen to the "soundtrack " in the meanwhile... Author's Response: You're welcome. I'll be posting ch30 on Wednesday, so it'll take a day or two to clear the queue. If you can't find those particular songs list, most of the old standards work...though I highly recommend having "Teach Me Tonight" available. (wink, wink) | |||
| avery | 2005.07.05 - 02:38PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| You are an evil puppetmaster! I think I can see the choices Hermione and Snape are going to have to make by the end of their rendevous, and how horrible is that? Can Lavender see this coming? At least Snape is waiting till the day after Hermione's visit to test the m.e. potion.
Good job (as always); looking forward to the next installment. Author's Response: I'm E.V.I.L.? You know what "evil" stands for...E.very V.illian I.s L.emons. And no, I don't have any puppets of Hermione and Severus...though I can imagine the snarky comments Snape would make knowing that I had a hand up his robes...though I doubt he would complain about what I would do up those robes. And jsut what sort of choices do you think they are going to make? Thanks! More on the way. | |||
| TNgirl | 2005.07.05 - 01:39PM | 29: “The Travails of Training Trevor" | Signed |
| I just love this story!! Thanks for updating faster! Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Thank you! Glad I can give you something fun to read. I'll be posting a couple chapters a week up through chapter 32 - just before HBP comes out. | |||
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