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spitfirecrackre2005.07.13 - 02:02AM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
It's amazing how you managed to find details like Rowling enjoying Minesweeper on her breaks. Really.

I could actually feel the pace just jump up and start running from after Hermione woke up from her dream. My heart was pumping too I swear. ;)

In reviews for earlier chapters I said if they do get a divorce it'd not stand true to Hermione's character. Now, I'm all, "PLEASE let them be apart!", but I do know that despite personality differences, people do stay in marriages even if it becomes a bitter parody.

Lookin' forward to some mention of Snape in the next chapter! And I loathe disjointed nightmares/dreams, the lack of a 'transition' per say, can be likened to abruptly being splashed with water.

Author's Response: I got the Minesweeper info from Rowling's website. Yes, things are going to pick up a little bit, as I have most of the back story in place and we're starting to approach the conclusion of Act I in this three act story. Yes, Hermione should divorce Ron, but as I've noted earlier this fic, divorce is uncommon in the wizarding world...more on that in an upcoming chapter. Yes, there is more Snape coming up. Yes, waking up from the middle of a dream is rather...disconcerting. So confusing when waking up.


Sokudo Ningyou2005.07.13 - 01:52AM31: “Thou Art Fishified”Signed
"Salacious Salad".....bwahahaha. That's great.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed that.

lemonade82005.07.13 - 01:01AM1: "The Pub"Signed
Wow, I see Hermione isn't quite up to being graceful tonight. :D Apparently the not being fulfilled thing is getting to her! LOL. I think Ron needs her for his quiddich persona and familial approval, but not for much else, sad as that is to observe. I can't say I blame him for not wanting to be told to shut up, and I think Hermione could have told him in a more.. tactful way. He's a bit selfish and childish, though. (but that's how it goes in the real world, eh) I smiled when Hermione went to the kitchen to clean.... anything! And I notice that in Hermione's dreams, Calleo is with associated with a potion cauldron. I think maybe she kind of knows in her subconscious who he really is. This bodes well for Severus' wish for her to still want him after the big reveal. Well, since this is your last update 'til HBP, I want to say that I hope you have a great time reading this Saturday. I know I will!! (That doesn't excuse you from finishing this lovely story, though. Don't get any bright ideas...) ;D

Author's Response: Yes, she is getting very sexually frustrated. The fact Hermione and ROn are rarely shagging makes it even more frustrating for Hermione. Ron doesn't need her for his Quidditch persona, but there are other factors keeping Ron tied to Hermione. Yes, being told to shut up during sex is rather rude, but Hermione is at the end of her rope and is making demands to meet her own needs, regardless if Ron likes it or not. I think Ron has given up on sex with his wife and trying to please her. Yes, there are little hints, but she calks it up to dealing with cauldrons all day long at work. Thanks, you have a good time reading HBP. I'm taking a nice long nap Friday so I can stay up and get about two or three good hours of reading before crashing, then getting up Saturday morning to make breakfast for the kids and hubby.

Aurealis2005.07.12 - 11:53PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Oh man! You hit on some daily topics of my life in this chapter. Neuroscience, BBQ, Minesweeper, cleaning and Snape. If only you could write in Ebay and Starbuck's somehow... I'd accuse you of stealing my thoughts. Good chapter. Good for her for making the best of her situation... in bed. Also I'm glad you made her admit that she's avoiding speaking with Ron, almost as much as he is.

lovethelab2005.07.12 - 11:48PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Poor Hermoine not getting to finish - - I was so sure that the dream would have her at least guessing Calleo's true identity. Can't wait for the next chapter!

cocoachristy2005.07.12 - 11:15PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Good interaction with parents and I loved the heart to heart with her mum. Touching. I really don't see how those two (hermione and ron) can go on much longer after this....

cocoachristy2005.07.12 - 10:35PM31: “Thou Art Fishified”Signed
Poor Severus, trying to fight it all the way, but he is starting to love Hermione and I am glad. I was pushing for shag shag shag (and I still want that to happen very much) but at least now we know he will love her when he does. I am so nervous about her finding out it is Severus. She will be hurt, angry and humiliated, and rightly so. I would. But I hope she soon realizes she can't do with out Calleo and gives Ron the boot! tee hee Of course, she doesn't know he is in love with her...oh the angst! Just how I like it! ;-)

kcjenna2005.07.12 - 10:03PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
I'm really enjoying this story.

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