Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| cocoachristy | 2006.01.22 - 03:52PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!! It was good and I like the way she had trouble having an orgasm...it made it more real. Now, the morning after....I hope it goes ok!!! |
| dforlove | 2006.01.22 - 03:51PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| I have to admit, I hadn't expected them to jump into the sheets so soon after the last argument, but I'm not complaining. They're finally contented with each other, and able to understand each other. That's a beautiful thing. This chapter I found to be especially good -- the diction and syntax were poignant and eloquent, especially Severus' and Hermione's ill-moods before their meeting. It was very human. And that the sex wasn't perfect, their bodies not the heights of perfection in the eyes of anyone but each other, also lent the reality to this story that is often so lacking from other fanfiction.
Excellent writing, Betz, and a very gratifying chapter. Thank you!
Sincerely,
D |
| Aurealis | 2006.01.22 - 02:03PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| Sorry, made a couple typos. I meant to say, Thursday night, not Friday. And I hope it's NOT Moody. I don't want them all to get in trouble. |
| Aurealis | 2006.01.22 - 01:58PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| This was excellent... and about damn time. However in the back of my mind, I recall that Hermione can't go with them. She has to stay in England to do her apprenticeship. And don't leave that red herring out there, the one with the person spying as Hermione left Snape's flat on Friday night. I think it's Harry. Or Molly. I hope it's Moody because if so, they're all dead. |
| GinnyW | 2006.01.22 - 01:49PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| *sigh* you know what i think of the chapter, betz.. it was amazingly wonderful, and about bloody time! :-) it all needed to unfold this way and their feelings are now out in the open exactly where they need to be. bring on the next chapter!!! |
| Absent Shadow | 2006.01.22 - 01:31PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| As always, you have left me wanting more. Absolutely great chapter, great writing and so many more questions that need answering. I think it might have been Molly that saw her leave, got curious and decided to look into what she was doing? Maybe, all possibilites. Can't wait till next chapter :) |
| droxy | 2006.01.22 - 12:55PM | 50: “Truth and Consequences” | Signed |
| Finally!!!! Yes I am happy now :> Mystery thrown intot he works, who killed Parkinson and what is Molly about? |
| akathryna | 2006.01.22 - 12:03PM | 7: "I'm A Bad Little Hufflepuff!" | Signed |
| Hands down; the BEST chapter title EVER. |
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