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Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After

GinnyW2005.03.12 - 03:20PM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Betz, this is such a good story! I started reading it just the other day after listening to a few people rave about it. Very well done. Exactly how I would picture a relationship between Ron and Hermione...she would be so bored and unstimulated. The emotion of being trapped in a marriage with someone that you're not in-love with is captured so well. The bit about Lavendar reminds me of the first smut book I ever read (I really haven't read very many...honest!) But it was an awesome book..."Butterfly" by Kathryn Harvey...your Lavendar reminds me of main character in this story...definately has an ulterior motive. Cheers! ~Ginny

Author's Response: People are "raving" about it? Wow! Glad you are enjoying and took a chance to read it based on a recommendation. That you think that I'm capturing the bad-mediocre- marriage feelings well, I am pleased. You are right , Lavender has ulterior motives, as does most everyone else in this fic.

thatonechic2005.03.12 - 03:05PM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
An awesome story. One of the best I've read. I think I've found a new favorite author! I can't wait to read more.

Kate McGuire2005.03.12 - 03:29AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Awsome once more. Tens!

joellen2005.03.12 - 12:04AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Thank you for writing this. I have been enjoying it a great deal and look forward to future chapters!

Aurealis2005.03.11 - 11:31PM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
I think she'd appreciate the roughness of Snapes sexual demands... or rather commands. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Hell, *I'D* appreciate the roughness of Snape's sexual demand, commands, directions...you name it, I'm there and begging (screaming) for it.

justme2005.03.11 - 10:49PM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Nicely done. I like the way Ginny was true to her word to "make sure Hermione eats more" and am so glad he is finally seeing her in a sexual light, even though his mind wont "allow" him to touch her. Just ONCE, I'd like to see him totally lose control in front of her and just DO IT ALREADY!!! *ducks head blushing fiercely* And I have a feeling Ron is cheating on her....call it "women's intuition...."

Author's Response: I almost called this chapter, "Eat! Eat!" It's the Jewish mother in me...and I'm not even Jewish, but I've often been mistaken for being Jewish as I know more Yiddish than some of my Jewish friends and have that brown eyes, brown hair, softig look frequently associated with Jewish women here in the states.

Nyx2005.03.11 - 07:52PM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
This has to be one of my favorite stories. I like the way you fleshed out the reasons Snape and Draco are in this profession. I like the way you also are taking time to fill in the characters. I really am enjoying this very much. You have a real gem on your hands.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to ahve *some* reason why they would do this sort of work instead of going all non-canon or sudden and having them suddenly turning tricks for the *fun* of it.

Moyra2005.03.11 - 05:42PM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Oh, you make me feel really sorry for Hermione as she told Ginny all of her distress.
I wonder why none of them are wondering where Ron is staying these days…
Lavender is contemplating to give Hermione more than an invitation to a lonely dinner for all her debts, isn’t she?
I appreciate it how you show us the strong increase of Severus feelings for H., in the last chap with his anger against Calpurnia and the revelations about the bad treatment of her, in this one with his fantasies about her in the bath … I´m curious how and what hints he (you) will give her (us) about is true identity.
Ah, and now with Katherine he will have a friend in Spain - for a refugee it is certainly an advantage to know some one in the unknown foreign !
Thank you for this wonderful long chap!

Author's Response: Well, since the revelation of Calpurnia's interference in Hermione's career, he certainly feel empathy with her. So glad you are enjoying my meager writings.

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