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Barbara2005.08.13 - 01:33PM34: “The Rookwood Dungeons”Anonymous
I believe you when you say that was hard to write - but you did a good job. Very tense - Like Snape I tried to use my wand (oh that was just a pencil) to help.

Author's Response: Thank you. It's hard to write non-con. Does your pencil turn into a rubber chicken or shoot sparks?

m1232005.08.13 - 11:57AM35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear)Signed
You took sooo looong to update. But it was a nice chapter. Hermione (finally!) came to terms with her feelings. The question is will she think that all Severus told her as Calleo was a lie, when the truth comes out? Oh and as I have made a ritual of this, I will say this in each review: Ron is such an asshole. Please please pleeeease update sooner this time. I really want to know what happens when Hermione finds out (which obviously won't be for at least 2 chapters)

Author's Response: Hey, my betas are working as fast as they can. Give them a break. Hermione will contemplate all that Severus - as Calleo - has told her. Denial, anger and confusion will be they key emotions she'll experienve once she realizes who her companion really is. Yes, Ron is more than an asshole, he's a rat bastard and a royal prick. (Weasley is the king, of being cruel and mean, he lousey in the sack, in Quidditch he's a hack...) Updates are coming as fast as my betas can crank through them, so you'll have to be patient. Fortunately, I'm running one to two chapters ahead of them, so I have more to send off. Hermione will come to the realization of who Calleo is soon enough.

sglgiles2005.08.13 - 09:56AM35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear)Signed
*hugs Betz tight* its never nice to write about horrible things, you are a good writer, you care about the charectors.. its not nice to put them through stuff like that becuase you go through it too. Well done on another great chapter, BUT THE TENSION IS KILLING ME! Congrats on winning Best Chalange fic :D Glad I voted now hehe

Author's Response: I care not to turn my readers off who don't want to read about such horrid things. I segregated chapter 34 from 35 just so people could skip it by choice. Kindest thanks to your vote. I'm honored.

lemonade82005.08.13 - 09:14AM35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear)Signed
lol! You know, if we thought Rosmerta knew something, it's all your fault!! Shouldn't be so tricky. Too many secrets make people suspicious. ;D The pensieve scene wasn't as bad as I was anticipating. (I've read some REALLLY disturbing things fairly recently, without enough warning, and yours was mild in comparison to some of those scenarios, thank god.) Thank you for the warning, however. I can take violence when I'm prepared for it, or when I can't take it, it's nice to be able to opt out. Poor Lavender. She's a good kid after all. It was nice that Calleo and Hermione finally got some issues cleared up. With at least those things (friendship, attraction etc...) cemented, it makes it more fun to contemplate the uh.. "unmasking" as it were. He seems to have more of a chance at not losing her. Wonderful chapters. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I can't exactly lead you DIRECTLY to the source. Of course I ahve to lead you of in a couple of directions first. Where would be the fun in reading this if it was so simple and plain. And why are you so certain Ron is cheating on Hermione?

I put the warning is as some people cannot stomach the idea of rape, even if it is not graphically depicted. Lavender means well in a lot of the things she does. Yes, now that they have cleared the air and set the boundries, it's all up to Hermione now. Severus could have just come out of the bathrom sans mask, but he knows it's better to allow Hermione to come to the realization of who he is herself instead of confronting her with the jarringly reality of his identity.

Keladry Lupin2005.08.13 - 07:32AM35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear)Signed
Wow.

Amazing, as always. At least Hermione's realized that Harry and Ginny's marriage is as hopeless as her own. But I eagerly await Thursday, when she wears the blindfold, instead of Severus wearing the mask.

Author's Response: Thrilled you enjoyed it so much. Yes, its about time Hermione realized that both marriages are pretty hopeless, but it took until Hermione could EPATHIZE with Ginny before she stopped condemning Ginny's actions. The blindfold date is coming up soon - ch37.

Gannet2005.08.13 - 06:38AM35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear)Signed
Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: You're welcome.

cryingoddess2005.08.13 - 06:09AM35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear)Signed
Argh! I can't wait until Severus/Calleo unmasks himself! Loved the chapter! Update Soon!

Author's Response: I'll update as fast as my betas can work. I'm also writng as fast as I can, but to get from point A to point Z, we have to go through B, C, D, E and so on first.

HelluoLibrorum2005.08.13 - 03:23AM35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear)Signed
Another wonderful chapter, Betz, but your killing me with all this tension and waiting! I don't know how your so patient with your writing! Its marvelous though!

Author's Response: I'm pretty anxious to get to some more *intimate* stuff too. I've had their first kiss planned out in my head for months and I'm dying to get there. But with two kids, there is only so much time I ahve to write and my betas can only work so fast.

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