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loreen772016.09.04 - 09:40AM95: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part ISigned
Halfway though chapter and have to stop and say......oh no. The bouquets are going to be mixed up. It is like watching a train wreck in slow motion. Being horrified yet unable to stop it.

Author's Response: You smell it's a set up by the author. We'll see...

jenn2016.09.04 - 04:07AM97: “Terra Incognita” (Unknown Land)Signed
My bets, about their bonding, are one of those potions they worked on together...

jenn2016.09.04 - 02:43AM97: “Terra Incognita” (Unknown Land)Signed
Yay!!!!!! Cliffie was banished fairly quickly!!!! As a well as Alan!! Loved the twist with him being the Ministers nephew and Unbridgeable his godmother... Dear gods that must have been truly horrid. Though, that dream was disturbing and Severus and Hermione are definitely bonded by their souls. Hehehehe Ron finally shows his worth, and gives her a quick hedge about the lemons. Will they be his memories in lemon form? Or his will!?? Tune in with in the next ten minutes and find.... Same bat time same bat channel. Ten minutes is right, right. ;)

Author's Response: Yep, Hermione and Severus are bonded... but how...? Lemons question will be answered next chapter, I promise.

jenn2016.09.04 - 02:07AM96: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part IISigned
Sorry, don't know why my review was posted three times. Still frustrated with Cliffie but loving this story.

jenn2016.09.04 - 01:54AM96: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part IISigned
F@@@&&$$'@@&$@@&$??!!$&@@@&$&&@***#%%#*^€<£>¥¥<£<£cccckkkkk!!!!!!!!!! Alan is the serial killer. Dangit!! Not only is her heart broken because of some stupid teen, but now she is in the clutches of a mad man. And Severus knows.... Can Pele help him in anyway? She seems to have a soft spot for this man. Ugh!! And you leave it here... Here. Cliff i.e. Evilness.... Oh this sucks, one, the florals shop will fix this. But the damage has been done. Maybe Lavendar will flop or send a message to Severus to give her a piece of his mind?? And maybe Naomi will let Severus see her memories of England, see how bad Hermione has gotten. Two. Mad man is out to kill Hermione for some reason. Because she was caught stay at the Red Ginseng living in the apartment of an ex death eater?? Three... The dumbass kid!!! FOUR... It is an Cliffie!!!! You know I love this, Can't wait for more. :).

Author's Response: Yep, Hermione has reached her absolute low point. Next chapter will give you more answers. Can't wait to see the string of expletives you'll leave after next chapter.

jenn2016.09.04 - 01:14AM96: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part IISigned
F@@@&&$$'@@&$@@&$??!!$&@@@&$&&@***#%%#*^€<£>¥¥<£<£cccckkkkk!!!!!!!!!! Alan is the serial killer. Dangit!! Not only is her heart broken because of some stupid teen, but now she is in the clutches of a mad man. And Severus knows.... Can Pele help him in anyway? She seems to have a soft spot for this man. Ugh!! And you leave it here... Here. Cliff i.e. Evilness.... Oh this sucks, one, the florals shop will fix this. But the damage has been done. Maybe Lavendar will flop or send a message to Severus to give her a piece of his mind?? And maybe Naomi will let Severus see her memories of England, see how bad Hermione has gotten. Two. Mad man is out to kill Hermione for some reason. Because she was caught stay at the Red Ginseng living in the apartment of an ex death eater?? Three... The dumbass kid!!! FOUR... It is an Cliffie!!!! You know I love this, Can't wait for more. :).

jenn2016.09.04 - 01:13AM96: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part IISigned
F@@@&&$$'@@&$@@&$??!!$&@@@&$&&@***#%%#*^€<£>¥¥<£<£cccckkkkk!!!!!!!!!! Alan is the serial killer. Dangit!! Not only is her heart broken because of some stupid teen, but now she is in the clutches of a mad man. And Severus knows.... Can Pele help him in anyway? She seems to have a soft spot for this man. Ugh!! And you leave it here... Here. Cliff i.e. Evilness.... Oh this sucks, one, the florals shop will fix this. But the damage has been done. Maybe Lavendar will flop or send a message to Severus to give her a piece of his mind?? And maybe Naomi will let Severus see her memories of England, see how bad Hermione has gotten. Two. Mad man is out to kill Hermione for some reason. Because she was caught stay at the Red Ginseng living in the apartment of an ex death eater?? Three... The dumbass kid!!! FOUR... It is an Cliffie!!!! You know I love this, Can't wait for more. :).

b2shoes2016.09.03 - 09:33AM96: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part IISigned
I am heartbroken. Hermione is...gosh no words for how bad things have gotten for her. I'm really rooting for her happiness to come soon. I'm cheesed at how Severus has handled the whole separation, he had already bumbled the whole thing by not sending word already, but now the flower snafu (though not his fault) is just...I mean of course it happened! Of course it did! He's an idiot and he doesn't deserve her and yet I continue to root for them. PS what a horribly rotten place to end the chapter (well done)

Author's Response: Severus is very insecure in his own way. He's paralyzed with fear to take action, afraid of looking the fool, but finally, while wallowing in his guilt, inspired to finally send Hermione those flowers. But he was worried Moody might raid her apartment and find a letter from him, implicating her in Severus' escape, and with the murder of Blaise, Moody's Aurors did go through her belongings and found the Hawaii books, but at least didn't find her escape box. And yes, that was an awful place to leave the chapter, but sometimes a good cliffie is just delightful (from the author's perspective).

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