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| Elayne | 2005.10.14 - 11:07AM | 43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" | Signed |
| This took a really long time to get on Ashwinder. I must've read it on Aff.net a week ago. I just like reviewing here better. As always, another wonderful chapter. I like the spiteful, "I'm not going to be the one to leave," thing you have going on between Ron and Hermione. I'd like to see them call it quits on good terms, but I really don't think that's going to happen. Ron's too immature. It always bugs me in the books how Ron and Hermione's arguments affect Harry's relationship with Hermione. I hope Harry's grown up enough that when the divorce finally happens, he can still be friends with Hermione. But now that I think about it, Ginny's leaving him too, so Ron and Harry will probably start a "I Hate Women" club for a while. I love this story. It's like Christmas when there's a new chapter up. Sometimes I wish I could wiggle my nose and the whole thing will be written, but that would detract from the delicious anticipation. Author's Response: Yep, the queue was a bit long this time. Yes, I hope Harry will take the news well if they do split, but it would make it difficult for Harry to get together with both of them at the same time if they divorced. We'll see how Harry handles Ginny leaving him. Yes, I wish I could wiggle my nose and this fic would be written at times. I have it all mapped out, it's just a matter of getting it out of my head and onto the computer. | |||
| pickles | 2005.10.14 - 10:35AM | 43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" | Signed |
| AWESOME CHAPTER! THANK YOU. SO MUCH GOING ON. SO MUCH ONE COULD WRITE ON. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE TO START. IT SOUNDS LIKE THEY SUSPECT SNAPE FALLING FOR GRANGER BUT IT seems he needs a sledge hammer to smack some sense. waiting for more.
patty Author's Response: Yes, Severus needs a good whack up side the head to come around, but don't worry, even the wind and rain can wear down a mountain. Next chapter is with my betas, so more is on the way. | |||
| snapes_gemini | 2005.10.14 - 10:16AM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| You deliciously evil author you. Great UST. More more more more please!
Is the whole getting drunk and standing on the bar singing Ihave a "l ovely bunch of coconuts" taken from real life? Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're groovin on the uber UST. And no, I don't get that silly when I'm drunk, the rare occasion that it is. But I always thought it would be pretty funny song for some drunk chick to sing. | |||
| spitfirecrackre | 2005.10.14 - 07:09AM | 43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" | Signed |
| Here's a big thanks to all those who created/assisted/helped the story along in some way. This reader, for one, is ever grateful for interesting and well-thought out fanon. :)
Man,it just seems so hopeless for them. Please end the torture soon. He's sinking deeper and deeper into the pit for the condemned, in my opinion. (Ron, that is) I really liked Draco's lines to him in the lift, just before they exited. The measure of Snape's loss of control is always an indicator of the intensity of his mood in canon, and you've mirrored that most accurately!
Thanks and here's the more! | |||
| Kismet | 2005.10.14 - 06:59AM | 43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" | Signed |
| Wow, and now we see why communication is so important in a marriage. Nothing like saying things for years and having your husband hear something totally different. I feel a little sorry for Ron now, but not much. He really did deserve the poke in the snoot. Will Ron now go back to his Mother and ask her if she did explain about "death if you divorce after kids" bit to Hermione? Author's Response: Yep. When people constantly verbally attack each other, it's only a matter of time before someone snaps. And when one is listening to one thing and hearng another, well...two words: communication breakdown. You'll have to wait and see if Ron confronts his own mother. | |||
| midnightshadows | 2005.10.14 - 06:30AM | 43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" | Signed |
| Your beta's are fantastic....I envy them as they get to read the chapters first....*clicks fingers* Damn missed out on that. For your story now where do I start. I like the comment on Severus' "marathon" it got me thinking on somethings. Hermione's and Ron's councelling session was interesting to say the least and although ther were some intitial problems with the reading of it, mainly cause although I'm excited that this chapter came out I also have a cold so I can't read it properly. So I will blame that on myself and no others. The spa chapter I will be looking forward to no doubt but that happens on a saturday and before that is the lovely thrusday dinner with his royal broodyness. I wish I could change places with her sometimes ^^ Severus' and Draco's little talk was an eye opener to both myself and to Severus. I absoluty love the comment Draco makes about Loving Ginny ans his excuse and if Severus Loved Hermione that would at least be something. Everything is all becoming very frustrating for Mrs Weasley and the ex-potions teacher I must say. Although I do have my little ideas of how this fic is going to turn out along with little bits and pieces here and there about what it going to happen in the up coming chapters. If only that red headed git, as he has become, had said "no" he didn't want to try and selvage the relationship everything would be so much eaiser for Hermione and Severus and they would be at least a little happier then what they are now. But we can't expect that can we? Cause if it happened like that then we would all be disappointed, not that I don't want to see them happy somewhere along the way. Author's Response: Severus' little marathon gets me thinking to. Hmmmmm (drools copiously while head is full of purient thoughts). SORRY! Where was I? Hope you are over your cold by now. Yes, I am looking forward to writing the spa chapter, as well. The spa chapter will be in a little over a week's time from the next chapter (chapter 43) timeline. So it'll be chapter 45 or 46 about... Yes, it does say something that Slytherins can love completely and selflessly. Draco had lost Ginny before, so he knows what he is saying - these are not just trifle words for Draco. And you are right, the UST is getting rather unbearable, but of course there will be another roadblack to a release of said UST. Yes, things would be much easier if Ron was out of the picture, but that may or may not happen later on. So glad you are enjoying this fic so much. | |||
| BotticellisAngel | 2005.10.14 - 05:32AM | 43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" | Signed |
| I really liked this chapter. I can see Hermione launching herself at Ron and knocking him a good one. I know I would have. It's funny that Severus is in denial too. LOL Even Malfoy can see what he's doing. I absolutely love the anticiaption you're setting up with this! Can't wait for more!! Author's Response: Yes, a visual image of raging banshee!Hermione is firmly imprinted in my mind after writing that chapter. Draco can see what is happeneing, as he's been down that rroad before. More is on the way, the next chapter is with my betas right now. | |||
| Maya | 2005.10.14 - 03:38AM | 43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" | Signed |
| Definitely one of my favorites stories. Did you ever read The Sybil's Oracle by Pigwidgeon37? I am quite sure you would love it too. What is strange in your story, is that most of the authors who wrote about this challenge made it humoristic, and your story is more about a drama indeed. I really appreciate that, and more again, because you write it well, of course. ----------- Snape begins to realize he is falling in love? how interesting! And for once it is a self thought, not one he could imagine given by Albus or Minerva. He should be hearing himself more often, isn't it? By the way, I am beginning to think that Severus is in a big dilemna, the drama is coming, and that he could have to sacrifice his freedom to prove his love to Hermione. How cruel it would be however. ----------- I fear that James could slip some words about a compassionate "male friend" in a next session, and that could be the beginning of some problems for Severus? ----------- By chance, would you have any idea on the delay for next chapter, please? ----------- Are you and your family better? Best regards. Author's Response: No, I don't think I've read that story by Pig'37. I've read some of her other stuff....I'll have to check to see if I have or not. Sometimes I'm terrible at remembering a story by name alone, and I need a plot summary before I recall if I've read it or not. Well, when I wrote the challenge, it was a basic call for pure smut. When I decided to take on my own challenge, I thought I'd go a little more plot oriented as I already did a smut-device challenge answer with a plot thrown in to tie together the sex scenes. Yes, Snape can be told by "outside sources" that he'l in love, but when the though originates in his own head, that's the beginning of admitting he's in love. Your fears are very interesting. THey could come true or you might be on a wild goose theory chase. The next chapter is with my betas right now, so more is on the way, though I don't know how long it will be before I get it through the beta mill. And yes, we are all well now. And just in time for flu season, YIPEE!!! | |||
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