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pickles2005.08.27 - 07:51AM37: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 1Signed
Is it Indian?

Author's Response: Moroccan, as mentioned at the beginning of part 2.

kirien2005.08.27 - 03:19AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
whooo hooo! great stuff. "and Denial is a river in Egypt," uh huh, yeah hun *whistles* Something's Gotta Give!!

Author's Response: Something's gotta give? Sounds like to are predicting Hermione is going to snap.

snapeslave2005.08.27 - 02:22AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
okay...great chapter..just get these 2 together...omg....i was squee when she had sev laid out rubbing oil on him...omg...when will she admit that it is sev...please no angst and get rid of ron the prat...love this story..keep up the good work...

Author's Response: Thanks. I wish I could tell you that Snape and Hermione are going to get down to business next chapter, but that's would not be true. There has to be a logical progression of Hermione coming to a decision, Severus revealing himself to Hermione, Hermione dealing with the knowledge and then we can see if she still wants him.

Lana Manckir2005.08.27 - 02:02AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Talk about denial! How wrong is she about Snape. Hermione has got to start being honest with herself and my god you are killing us poor devoted readers with all those compromising situations. I had to groan when she stopped everything for the second time. This is pure torture! I just know you are going to make her next encounter take excruciating several chapters to happen and we are going to be drooling for more. I desperately hope she finds out Ron is cheating on her, that would surely help her decide LOL call it wishful thinking. This was an excellent chapter, the sexual tension and suspense is nerve wrecking and you do it so well, it's always a pleasure to read more and more. This is my favorite fic of all time.

Author's Response: Everyone chant...DENIAL! DENIAL! DENIAL! DENIAL! Sorry about getting you so worked up and then nothing happening. Well, somethinghappened, but nothing involving the removal of clothes. But we had to have Hermione brought to the brink of being forced to choose to fuck him right then and there or flat out refusing him before she was ready to make a choice. If it wasn't for the fact she had been been in such a sexually charged situation, she would be sitting in limbo wondering if she should or should not sleep with him. Now she has to make a choice because not only would it not be fair to Calleo, but she has to get down to brass tacks and choose.

avery2005.08.27 - 01:42AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Sigh... She's a stubborn one, isn't she? Granted it's a situation that bears thinking about in depth, and a large degree of certainty. Is it worth throwing away her relationship with Ron over a man she barely knows? Who could possibly be Snape? YES!!!!! Galdarnit! The anticipation is driving me nuts here, but oh, insanity is enticing. It was another wonderful chapter, and I just can't refrain from asking for another update as soon as possible, please.

Author's Response: Yep. Denial, denial, denial! Hmmmm, leave a man who is being a complete jerk to her - and has been to a jerk to her off and on over the years and go with a man who has been patient, kind, can cook, is unbearably sexy and turns her on...or...stick with her husband after she finds out it's her old *old* Potions professor who was cruel to her. Hmmm, rock and a hard place there. More on the way.

abbi cee2005.08.27 - 01:37AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Okay, the first thing I have to ask is what food they were eating? The roses and couscous are hinting at something MiddleEastern. I was surprised the answer wasn't Persian. Anyway, I suspect Hermione knows, subconciously, who Calleo is, but just doesn't want to face it. I wonder if she will feel somewhat used when she does find out and realizes he needs her to help an escape? While I can see Hermione eventually leaving Ron, or more likely, Ron leaving her, I can't see her running off with Snape and being happy about it. I think the guilt would eat at her and ruin any attempts they made at a life together. I tend to think she would take the apprenticeship offerred and if someday in the future they should meet without any of the baggage they are carrying now she could enter a relationship with more chance of success.

Author's Response: Moroccan! I even said so at the beginning of part 2. You are right, Hermione is beginning to suspect it's Severus, but she doesn't like that idea. Of course Hermione will feel used when she finds out he wants her to help him escape, but as long as Severus is honest with her, there is hope. Hmmm, Hermione running off with Snape? Could happen. Or Hermione could get knocked up and be stuck with Ron for the rest of her sexually unfulfilled life. We'll have to see how this all ends, when I finally get around to writing it. Gotta write down all teh middle stuff first.

Meg Erskine2005.08.27 - 01:36AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Ohhhh what a wonderful chapter. I've gone and stayed up way past my bedtime to read it, too. I can;t wait for more! It's all progressing so nicely!

Author's Response: Well, the chapter would have been waiting for you when you woke up the next morning. There is no expiration code on this fic, so it will be around for quite a while. Glad you enjoyed it so much.

evel0042005.08.27 - 01:30AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Absolutely wonderful! Worth the wait! (In many senses), and past that I really am rather incoherent. Just insert lots of random, positive praise here and post again soon!

Author's Response: So glad I didn't disappoint you. Nice to know you enjoyed this latest chapter so much.

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