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| BotticellisAngel | 2005.07.21 - 12:06AM | 32: “My Husband the Stranger” | Signed |
| I am thouroughly enjoying this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I wanted to comment on chapter 12. (The Loud Family) because I identified with Hermione so strongly there. I enjoy being alone and I absolutely love quiet. I know how she feels with the loud family, which I incedentally have been calling my best friend's family that for years!! There's too much noise and too many kids trying to get attention at once that it's overwhelming. I really enjoyed that because I
could picture it so well. LOL Anyway it's getting steamier and steamier!!! Can't wait for more!! Author's Response: More is on the way. I come from a larger family...four of us kids total, and knowing people who come from a small family, I know it can be overwhelming to them. Thrilled you like my story so much. | |||
| mistaria | 2005.07.20 - 02:42AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| I just started reading this story and am really enjoying it. The plot is intriguing and the writing is wonderful. (: I can also empathize with Hermione hair...I have to keep mine long and one length...if it were really short it'd probably be an afro (and ick to that). Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying my fic Kindest thanks! | |||
| BotticellisAngel | 2005.07.16 - 05:28PM | 27: "Truss Me" | Signed |
| I quite enjoyed your reference to Trix. I thought it was funny, although I wasn't so sure if Hermione would actually know what Trix are. Oh well, It's fiction. I have my own little Trix saying, which I'm not going to put on here, because it's very offensive; but if you'd like to know what it is you can e-mail me. Author's Response: Yes, it is my one big American throw away line. Utterly non-Brit, but I couldn't stop myself from using it. | |||
| BotticellisAngel | 2005.07.16 - 05:05PM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| Oh I laughed so hard during this chapter!!! Then I went to deviant art to see the illustration and laughed even harder!! You just made my day! LOL Author's Response: Thanks! Thank Melanie for the nail polish, it was her idea. So glad to make you laugh. | |||
| GrayBirdie | 2005.07.15 - 02:11PM | 32: “My Husband the Stranger” | Signed |
| Wonderful story but the summary does it very little justice! It's wonderful to see someone who doesn't pain Harry Potter as the magnificent, infalliable, demi-god of a man who can do know wrong. Obviously, the kid was messed up for 11 years and that's bound to have some repercussions! Wonderful character development for Harry, Ginny, Hermione and Ron! They're amazingly realistic, if not almost completley canon. The sad thing is that I'm torm between who I should root for. I myself am a part of those "Irish Chatholic" families who breed like wildfire, and who also have extremely stric views on marriage. I'm hoping Hermione and Ron will be able to patch things up, maybe the story ending with Severus bringing Hermione to some kind of realizaion about her marriage... but that's not looking so good right now. What a bastard! My mother is somewhat of a marriage couselor and she tells me about some of the stories she gets, all of them coming from completely different situations but sounding oddly similar. I keep hoping that this new doctor helping them will get Hermione to realize that Ron needs her, but then again... a smut scene between our beloved Potions master and Mrs. Weasley is wantonly anticipated... What I would give to see that in the near future! God only knows how frustrated I get with each near kiss, half caress and longing gaze! It's driving me barmey! Since I know that there's no hope for Ginny and Harry's relationship to be patched up, I guess I'll accept her impending departure with the Order-Death Eaters... Infedelity is not a happy note in my book, but it's just so dilicious in your words!
Wonderful fiction! I will be sitting and waiting for your next update with bated breath! Author's Response: Kindest thanks for your enthusiastic praise. I needed this, especially after reading HBP. | |||
| happilyjaded | 2005.07.14 - 08:51PM | 32: “My Husband the Stranger” | Signed |
| Such a frustrating chapter for all parties! I can't wait until HBP, and your next chapter. Too much waiting...all for best...but still trying my demonstrably limited patience...
~Elizabeth
Author's Response: Yes, poor Hermione because she's so sexually frustrated. Poor Ron as he has never really known how to please hiswife and is now thoroughly confused. Poor Wendy Granger and her weak heart. | |||
| Winna | 2005.07.14 - 10:28AM | 32: “My Husband the Stranger” | Signed |
| Aargh! I am convinced that you are now trying to set a record for Most Chapters With Unresolved Sexual Tension!!!! Here, I'll just give you the award, *winna slides a phallic trophy to Betz*; now, at least let Hermione have some dream!pleasure! Aargh!!! But seriously, this was a great chapter. I usually can't stand dream sequences, but this one really worked for me. It seems that Hermione's subconscious is figuring out the Calleo/Snape connection. Wonder how she'll react when she realizes who she's been seeing? One last thought... I thought the recent tragedy in London just made Hermione's statements more poignant, and was not in any way disrespectful or inappropriate. | |||
| Winna | 2005.07.14 - 10:05AM | 31: “Thou Art Fishified” | Signed |
| I'm intrigued by Severus' thought "And though he had never been in love, he suspected he might be in the process of falling in love against his own will." Means he wasn't in love with his mysterious wife. Also loved the salacious salad, although I may not eat any veggies for a while (ewwwwww!). On to next chapter... Author's Response: Severus did love his wife, but he was just not *in* love with her. Though, he thinks he may have fallen in love with her if he had enough time with her. So glad you enjoyed my bit of prurient squick. | |||
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