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eleanora2005.12.05 - 01:25AM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
So Ron's on steriods, huh? I just hope he grows breasts, ha! It's getting so obvious now that Ron's getting himself taken care of in other places. Doesn't Hermione realize he's being unfaithful? I'm sure it will all hit the fan in a few chapters. I just want to smack him for the way he was treating Hermione. She owes him, my ass. Grrr, I'm angry again. I'm glad the pacing of the story is speeding up, and can't wait for the anniversary dinner. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Could be steroids. We'll have to see what Hermione's test results show. Maybe he'll grow a uterus, go f*ck himself and knock himself up. Yes, the next chapter (which will be posted in two parts cause it's so huge) and the following one will be big and important chapters for the plot development.

Llandraecia2005.12.05 - 12:45AM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Uh oh!!! Hermione on the prowl! I didn't expect this. Of course you had to plant the seed of doubt that Ron isn't entirely control of his faculties. Though, it may be too little of an excuse too late for Hermione. Geez, I though we were on a steady path. And the chapter was so "quiet"... obviously before an earlier than expected storm. Congrats, I'm on the edge of my seat, so please bring the next chappie so my butt doesn't fall asleep in my chair! :)

Author's Response: Hermione on the prowl? Just wait until the anniversary dinner. Oops! Did I say that? More is on the way, as the next chapter is with my betas.

Aurealis2005.12.04 - 11:38PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Oh no! It's already over? Please, please, please update this soon! It's amazing really, how she can still fight what she already knows. She doesn't want Ron. She just wanted to shag. And then she totally overreacted to his stupid comment. I think it was just an easy out for her, so that she didn't have to be intimate with him. Well at least she can't get pregnant from a few snogs.

Author's Response: All right, the next chapter is with my betas, so more is on the way. Hopefully I'll have it back and posted before Christmas. Yeah, Hermione just wants a nice piece of meat between her legs right now. Yes, she did over react to Ron's comment, as he was sort of joking with her, but they are in such a state of animosity right now, any little comment can set either of them off at one another. Ron could have diffused the situation by admitting it was a jest, but it seems he just as willing to let it get out of hand and fight with her.

snapes_gemini2005.12.04 - 11:36PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Ron sounds like he is on steroids. He is such an arsehole i hope he gets what he deserves.

Author's Response: Could be steroids. We'll have to see if he gets what he deserves.

Miss Misery2005.12.04 - 11:02PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Oh man. You MUST MUST MUUUUSSSST update as soon as possible. This is by far my favourite fic I follow. Geez. I'm dying.

Author's Response: Okay, my next chapter is with my betas right now. It's a huge double chapter, that's why it has taken so long. Hope you're still alive by the time the next chapter posts.

Somigliana2005.12.04 - 10:50PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
I really enjoyed the chapter, thank you. The descriptions of the dildos was hilarious! Steroids? - interesting that the magical folk might be using Muggle drugs to cheat - maybe they think it's untraceable in Quidditch. I wonder if they test for magical stimulants?

Author's Response: Glad to have amused you. The magical worldhas a different outlook on steroids in sports. Now the use of magic (like hexing your opponent in the eye) during a game is not allowed, but the increase of strength does not constitute cheating in their world, but theuse of the Felix Felicis (sp?) would constitute cheating through.

MollysSister2005.12.04 - 10:50PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
I caught a bit of the controversy on WIKTT. Dont you listen to anything negative that anyone said about this story. We (your fans) are quite willing to join you in this adventure. We will take each chapter as a gift and wait with bated breath for the next one. Do you think you could kill Ron off quickly so Hermione can run off with Servus guilt free? No? Okay how about if Hermione discovers he has been cheating on her all this time. With the waitress at the anniversary wedding resturant? No? Okay fine you write the story and I'll read it. Deal?

Author's Response: I'm writing this for me, not my fans or critics, so I will not be swayed by what anyone says. Thanks for your support, though. Nope, no character death...well, no major characters. Just wait and see. Chapter 47 is with my betas right now.

m1232005.12.04 - 10:49PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Another great chapter. I think Ron's behaviour is more aggressive because of the potion he is taking. Am I right? (Not that he is not a jerk normally anyway) Hermione shouldn't sleep with Severus just to prove something. In the end she's only going to end up feeling guilty. Make her understand that. Is Severus going to mention the polyjuice ingredients before or after sleeping with Hermione (I am very sure she is going to say yes on Monday)? And he is IN love with Hermione right? As in can't live without her? Not just a love as in really care for the person. right? Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Its the anniversary in the next chapter right?

Author's Response: You could be very right concerning Ron's behavior. You'll have to just wait and see on several of your questions. Many of your questions will be answered over the next couple chapters (the next one is a double chapter - but only counts as one).

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