Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| Ginga Bird | 2006.04.13 - 05:29PM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| ! You can't leave us hanging like that. More soon. Loving every moment of this. |
| Esmine | 2006.04.11 - 04:00PM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Are you doing okay Betz? It's been a long time since getting a update from you on this story. Just wondering, I find myself always thinking about this story and needing to see the next chapter *L* |
| SteelMagnolia80 | 2006.04.10 - 05:49PM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Good lord girl! Just to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story, I'll confess. I stayed home from work today "sick" so I could catch up. But who cares for everyday work issues when there's such delightful stories to read? I am completely spell bound by your narrative and usually don't like WIP's, but you can be sure that I'll be checking everyday for an update, rain or shine! Thank you so much for giving us all hope that there may perhaps be someone out there who brings us to life, and that we shouldn't accept mediocrity just because we feel pressured from the outside world. Here's to hope! |
| Antagonist Len | 2006.04.10 - 12:37AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| I'm just wondering if everything is okay and that you're still writing? |
| Fraggle Grrrrrrl | 2006.04.09 - 10:37PM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Ack! I love, love, love this story. Actually, I started it Friday and have spent the whole weekend (amidst chores and social events) reading it. I can't believe it! I won't! I must know more. I can't wait for the update! Yay for Betz! |
| Riona | 2006.04.09 - 07:49PM | 35: “Inter Spem et Metum” (Between Hope and Fear) | Signed |
| hi,
first I want to tell you that I enjoy reading your story very much.
However, I think I detected an inconsistency in this chapter, namely in this following part:
*“We still have three more weeks. That's six more meetings,” he reminded Hermione.
'Six more meetings? How will I be able to resist? I can't think on this now,' Hermione decided, knowing she would have to meditate on all she had learned tonight.*
Here Hermione says that Severus and she will have six more meetings before Ron's and her anniversary.
As far as I know the dinner will be on a saturday and there are three weeks left until then, including the current week.
Hermione and Severus meet two times a week - on mondays and thursdays.
There still would be six meetings if the moment when they have this conversation wasn't on a monday night after their meeting.
So this would mean, that there are only five meetings left, not six.
Well, I hope this made sense and I didn't mix anything up.
Keep up the good work.
Riona |
| happy reader | 2006.04.06 - 03:40PM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Gaah! You cant leave it hanging there! And you are really, really mean to Ron, I had half thought that he was bonking Lavender, but what the hell! ;) Update! please! :) |
| Snapy | 2006.04.05 - 08:03AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Wonderful as usual, dear Betz, they belong together, that's for certain, don't let us wait too long for their move to the USA (just kidding - you rember my imagination of the outcome? Mabe two kids, too...), hugs, Hikity |
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