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Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After

southern_witch_692005.01.07 - 09:06PM13: "The Fun In Dysfunctional"Signed
Nooo.. I like the way you are writing Harry. Sounds about right if you ask me. I think he should have some bitterness from the way he was raised. I'm screaming for some more Sev/Mione interaction. Psst.. you can tell me.. i won't tell anyone (will this law get lifted?) lol.. nice try eh? great chapter, doll! thanks

RachelW2005.01.07 - 08:59PM13: "The Fun In Dysfunctional"Signed
Intense two chapters...so sad what they're all going through. So interresting how people can justify their actions through all sorts of convolouted thinking. This is a very good, and very different kind of story. Lots of times, I find situations going on with charachters other than Hermione and Snape to be something to skim over a bit in stories, but the troubles between Harry and Giny are just as interresting, and just as involved as what's going on between Hermione, Snape, and Ron. BTW, I found a few mistakes, I can e-mail them to you, just send me an e-mail and let me know.

Author's Response: I know, I know, the flying car was second year. I'll email you for the rest of them though.

Author's Response: I know, I know, the flying car was second year. I'll email you for the rest of them though.

snarkypants2005.01.07 - 08:29PM13: "The Fun In Dysfunctional"Signed
This is an excellent story; at first I thought it was going to be bow-chicka-bow-bow nookilicious smut, and you've actually got some real substance here. Yay, you! Looking forward to more substance...and HG and SS gettin' it awnn, bebbeh!

Alarase2005.01.07 - 08:05PM13: "The Fun In Dysfunctional"Signed
OOOhhh My. Gawd. I love this story, currently on my *SquEE* list when I see an update. I can only hope for a happy ending, because I'm a sucker for happy endings. For Hermione and Ginny anyway. The Men...well. Long as the girls have a happier life after this. IMHO they should both leave their husbands and set up a flat together for a while. Get rid of the obligations they've had set upon them...

queenp2005.01.05 - 11:06PM12: "The Loud Family"Signed
rather interesting...I can't believe I missed seeing this on the update list. It is a well written chapter. Is Severus going to inform Hermione of the effect of children on marriage? Hmmm, now, how can Ginny convince Harry that Hermione and Ron are not actually going to try for kids? Will Harry accept the explanation? When will Hermione and Severus meet again and/or get physical? I want to see more evidence that Severus wants Hermione. I want Hermione to know for sure that it is Severus that she sees. I want more. *not trying to sound either bossy or petulant* The story is excellent. I am thoroughly enjoying it. PLEASE update again soon...so many questions...so little time to read when semester (mine--college) begins again next week.

Jana2005.01.05 - 06:54PM12: "The Loud Family"Signed
More soon please? I love your writing.

morkaleb19852005.01.05 - 09:15AM11: "Happy Victory Day"Signed
hi i like your story so far only one thing...isn't Angelina black? why would she have natural blonde hair? morkaleb1985

Author's Response: After checking HP-Lexicon I realized my big bad boo-boo. I was confusing the mental image I have of Katie Bell with Angelina. Oh well. She could have one white parent, which could lead to her having a recessive gene for blond hair. Let me just say, Mea Culpa, Mea Culpa, Mea Maxima Culpa.

Celtic Celia2005.01.04 - 09:07PM12: "The Loud Family"Signed
I love this story! Even though there's so much deception and I'm dreading the moment of truth...it's still great! ;) Hope you update soon...I can't wait for things to get more convoluted.

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