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pickles2005.12.04 - 08:25PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Thank you betz for a new chapter. It was excellent... Guess Ron is taking the wizards version of roids... "What an idiot!" Waiting for more.

Author's Response: You're most welcome. Glad to please. It appears taht he's taking steroids, we'll see what Hermione discovers.

Bouncing_Ferret2005.12.04 - 08:24PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Another amazing chapter.

Author's Response: Kindest thanks.

RachelW2005.12.04 - 08:22PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
Just read the last two chapters and enjoyed them very much! I'm looking forward to Severus and Hermione finally speaking face to face!

Author's Response: Yes, I'm very eager for them to meet face to face too. I've had that little interaction planned in my head for the past ten months just itching to be written.

ladycplum2005.12.04 - 08:10PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
GAH!!!!!! Too many chapters without some fabulous REAL S/H action! When are we gonna see some smoochie boochie noochies?!?!?!?!?!??! BTW-I just started reading this story yesterday and I am completely engrossed. Makes my own story look like a first grader's written it!

Author's Response: Hmm, when will the lemons start? Ahh, that has been the big question from the first time Hermione sucked "Calleo's" fingers now, hasn't it? Just keep practicing, my first few fanfics were nothing worth posting. Just keep on writing.

bellasol672005.12.04 - 07:47PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
What a great ending! Being the freak that I am, I was so nervous that Hermione would give in to her needs... sleep with Ron...end up pregnant and tied to him forever! But leave it to Ron to open his big mouth and ruin the moment. What the hell is in that potion Ron is taking, I have a bad feeling that things will not go well for Ron and Hermione is going to have to ask Snape for his help...I just hope that Hermione doesn't stay with Ron out of guilt. I just wanted to tell you that I love your story, I think the pace is fine and while I am anxious for our favorite couple to take the next step, it wouldn't be right (at least not right now), yes Ron is an idiot, yes we know that Hermione and Snape love each other, but Hermione has spent this whole story being respectful of her marriage vows and to have them just hop into bed, well I think it would be an insult to the story you've spent 47 chapters building...of course just my two cents!

Author's Response: Hermione pregnant? Could happen. Or she could come to her senses and leave Ron. We'll ahve to wait and see. Yes, for Hermione to screw Snape for teh wrong reasons would be just so wrong. Let's see if she does give into revenge. Kindest thanks for your praise.

Alyssa_Snape2005.12.04 - 07:41PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
So do we find out Hermione's decision in the next chapter, because I'm dying to find out! Any more waiting and I might just pull out my hair and bang my head on my desk. Please update soon, I NEED to know. You're chapter was well written, as always. Gods, I hate Ron. Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *Begs shamelessly* Please?

Author's Response: Next chapter is the anniversary chapter. We'll find out if there can ever be a rekindling between Hermione and Ron or if there was no spark to even begin with. My next chapter is with my betas and will hopefully be posted and up before Christmas.

lemonade82005.12.04 - 07:35PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
LOL, the scary toys the twins sent!! I think it's hilarious that they expected Hermione to try them all out. I'm a teeny tiny bit disappointed in Severus. Not so much that he did his job with Miss Anne, but that he made the excuse that Ron might pull his head out of his ass and win Hermione back. (likely...not!!) I'm not saying I think you wrote it wrong, unfortunately you had written it too right. But Hermione wanting a vengeance shag with Severus wasn't all that romantic and loving, either. Although I do understand her wanting SOMEONE to think she's attractive and talented. They both just need to be together. I can't wait to see what you do with the anniversary dinner. Should be quite interesting. Can she go see Severus right after dinner? Please?? ;D (okay, if that's what you planned anyway... please don't change it because I asked... Please please please, for real) Will she ask him for a divorce if the anniversary dinner goes wrong for them? Oh-- I almost forgot!! Is Ron likely to go into rages now that he is being influenced by magical steroids? If so... I'm worried about Hermione. He's not nice to her without rage inducing drugs, I can't imagine what he would be like now. *yikes*

Author's Response: Scary, but wild! Well, they sent Hermione the whole line so she would know what she was getting into. Severus is just a man, and like all men, they are fallable, and are prone to doubting themselves even with all the evidence to show them otherwise. The human heart is a fragile thing. Yes, Hermine is getting quite bitter and spiteful. Wear down even the sweetest person over time, and you can make their soul full of acid. Hmmm, I will take you suggestion under advisement, but I have had the whole next chapter planned out in my head for the past 10 months, so it was written in my head long ago. The next chapter (47) is with my betas right now, so more is on the way.

PattyWaffle2005.12.04 - 07:10PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
This is killing me, i hope you update soon!

Author's Response: My next chapter is with my betas, so more is on the way.

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