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alitheia72005.10.14 - 02:16AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
I want to leave a longer review but it is waaay past my bedtime (see how addicitive rhis story is?) Anyway, lovely chapter! I can understand how Severus feels about any other day besides Monday or Thursday. The meetings between the 2 are such intense chapters that all remaining events of the story don't feel the same. But *gosh* he really loves her! Enough to have internal debates with himself!

I can understand the comment of the other reviewer about this chapter emphasizing that people will be hurt irreversibly. However, this has been painfully obvious from the beginning. Hermione's introduction to us -a shell of herself should be enough. And to be honest up to this chapter I had not fully understood Ron's psyche but he too is hurt. You really have thought through his character. Of course he would turn abusive if he had the impression his wife mocks of his intellect when she asks his opinion about anything-other-than-Quidditch. For me this is the Ron-revelation-chapter (well aside from Severus realizing he is in love...) Keep up the excellent work! A part of me wants you to update soon but take as much time you need to deliver such well written chapters with such human characters!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you find their meetings so compelling. Yes, Severus does love her, enough to cause some serious thinking in the next chapter. Yes, for the fact this story started out with Hermione beaten down in such a fashion was my signal that things have changed her and she'll never be the same person she used to be. She has lost that youthful enthusiasm that comes with being worn down and tired, resignation almost. And you are very estute. Ron is hurt in his own way, but that does not excuse his behavior to Hermione over the years. But this is his own way of lashing out and trying to make Hemrione feel as bad as he does. There is more to Ron where this matter is concerned, but I can't say anything more right now. Glad you found this chapter so enthralling. I'm trying to keep up the good work, but these chapters are getting harder and harder to write to make sure I don't drop any of the many plotlines I have floating about this fic. I do have the next chapter with my betas right now, so it is on the way. Thanks for the wonderful review - GOOD INSIGHT!


Sokudo Ningyou2005.10.14 - 02:08AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
You've finally updated. I was having withdrawal symptoms. O.o And man. If I were Hermione, quitter or no, I would've told Ron to stuff it where the sun doesn't shine and moved out. Screw his attitude. The fact that he knows quite well that he hurts her with his verbal jabs and doesn't care pretty much tells of how much concern he has for her. Not that it surprises me. Ron and Hermione always seemed to work together like oil and flaming hot french fry grease.

Author's Response: Sorry to hear about you getting the shakes. Yes, I know Hermioen should cut and run, but she is a noble, stubborn witch with a sense of honor. Love your analogy of the pair. I personally like to think of them as bleach and ammonia...together they are toxic.

Lamesburg2005.10.14 - 01:24AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
"He massaged his right arm, which felt a little sore from overuse the night before." And I'm spent. Thank you. So much.

Author's Response: You're spent? What about poor Severus? I'd hate to be Marf having to wash his sheets after *that* night. Hope he uses tissue. You are welcome.

HelluoLibrorum2005.10.14 - 12:21AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
Yes! I'm the second review for this chapter! And as always, this was great. Poor Severus though. Why can't he just accept that he loves Hermione?

Author's Response: Why can't he accept? Because he's the loner who never got any until he got married, and after years of not getting any, only when he wears a mask does he get a good shag. Talk about making one cynical about the prospect of people loving them for who they are and not their looks. Talk about fear of rejection under that caustic exterior... Now you see why he's reluctant to make himself so vulnerable. That's time he was this vulnerable, his wife died. Think about it.

Kate McGuire2005.10.14 - 12:20AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
Oh, so very good. Continue, soon.

Author's Response: Next chapter is with my betas, so more is on the way.

bellasol672005.10.14 - 12:16AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
As I finished this chapter I thought, there is no happy ending here... I mean sure for Snape and Hermione, but not for Ron (and that's only assuming that there is a happy ending for SS/HG)...poor Harry will be left alone if/when Ginny leaves him for Draco...or if Ginny stays, Draco will be alone. Okay, I'll move on from that depressing train of thought. Ron is an abusive bastard and Hermione needs to leave him, she doesn't have to run to Snape, but she should get the hell away from her marriage. Anyway, nice update, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yes, there is a possibility that more than one person will be hurt. Yes, Hermione should leave Ron, but where would the fun be in taht. Well, not fun, but the emotional toture and turmoil Hermione will suffer through for our amusement and angsty groovin'. Thanks, next chapter is with my betas.

June W2005.10.14 - 12:08AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
Hermione did feel a bit guilty for hitting Ron. Why? Oh! I forgot, it's not good etiquette. Hmm, too bad Ron didn't give Hermione divorce papers for it - would've made MY day!

Author's Response: Ah, the old "DIVORCE RON!" chant. Yes, we know Hermione should divorce him, but then again, there are a lot of people out there who stick around in awful marriages and don't get divorced when they should. Why do they stick around? Who the hell knows! Hermione has her own reasons. Hopefully she'll get over those reasons and leave him. Or maybe Ron will become a better person through counseling and they can save their marriage....BUWAHAHAHAHA!!! Yeah, (sniff - wipes away tear) right. (snerk! snort!)

GinnyW2005.10.14 - 12:04AM43: "Psychiatric Help 5 Knuts — The Doctor Is In" Signed
It's up... FINALLY! Even after all our discussion, I don't think I ever told you that I really do like this chapter. I loved the discussion between Draco and Severus. It most definately needed to happen and obviously a turning point for him. :-)

Author's Response: Yes...FINALLY! Yes, you did tell me you really liked it, it's just we spent a lot of time analyzing Ron and Hermione's motivations behind this chapter, and then you spent a lot fo time adding some bits to clarify and make the chapter flow smoothly. Yes, I really love the conflict between Draco and Severus in this chatper too. Draco is the adult and Severus is the petulant adolencent in that scene.

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