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sglgiles2005.12.29 - 11:10PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
*collapses*

Author's Response: *"Envenerate!"* Hmmm, still out cold.

HelluoLibrorum2005.12.29 - 06:50PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
So many questions that need to be answered! I can't wait till Act II begins. This story is extremely well-written and planned out. Good job, Betz!

Author's Response: Yep, lots of questions, and lots of answers to come. Thanks.

Fayth2005.12.29 - 05:40PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
AAARRRGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

Barbara2005.12.29 - 04:01PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
Thanks for the long awaited update.
Through the last chapters I have wondered why Ron wanted to celebrate their anniversary in such posh location; I thought that there simply was some sort of team - celebration with the siginificant others; I was wrong there, but I wonder wether Ron wasn't exactly aware that Mr. Nettleton would be there beforehand, and hasn't speculated on the effect Hermione would have on that notorious womanizer.
Yo are introducing some old friends here. Rita will have further appearances, I assume? And Victor - if it was Harry that has seen Hermione leave Severus' place, she will be in need of a friend. Good to know that there she has another friend, one that doesn't want anything from her.
And the game is up. She has acknoledged him with his name.
Again, thank you for the chapters promptly delivered to be read over the holidays. It's back to checking for updates every day again .... in case you couldn't tell, I'm completely hooked by your writing and very thankful to know that we are only one third trough the story, because that means many hours of reading pleasure still to come. ~ apisa_b

Author's Response: Why Ron took Herminoe there will be explained near the end of the second act. All will be explained later on. Yes, things will change now that Hermione has acknowledged who he is and he has taken off his mask. Updates should be a little faster now that I'm back from two weeks at the in-laws (not for fun either) and the holidays are over. Yep, much mroe story to come.

sappy_sappy_sappy2005.12.29 - 03:00PM47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”Signed
nice chapter. one thing though. if polyjuice potion is so draining how can someone take it for a whole streight year without killing himself? (the fake Moody in GoF)

Author's Response: Invigoration Draught! I figure by the end of the year, Barty Jr. was feeling a bit strung out from all that Potion drinking. In my slightly tweaked interpretation of Rowling's universe. Good point. Though the Potions are infused with magic, I still think there is some sort of after effects.

bellevoyager2005.12.29 - 12:37PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
Just one big question for me remains in Harry the Auror that saw Hermione Leave... Ok and maybe a couple of others like will they (Severus & Hermione) have a happy ending on a beach in Australia?

Author's Response: Perhaps, Harry saw her leave. We'll just have to wait and see. Where will Severus go? Hmm, question is, can he even get out of the country?

sappy_sappy_sappy2005.12.29 - 12:31PM46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake”Signed
I liked this chapter very much. The cramping scene when Hermione visits Severus was very sweet. Also the developing discord between the Weasleys rings true. It looks like Hermione looks for any excuse to blame and tarnish her husband's character in her mind. We are rooting for our heroine in the story but at the same time we have to wonder about her own faults and double standards. In the beginning she looks very principled and self honest but as the story develops and she is put to the test her morals suffer and she dreams for example of cheating her husband here instead of doing the right thing and leaving him entirely. I noticed your complaint about "Sunseteer Reviewers" during the discussion on WIKTT and decided to relent and review regularly. Normally I don't bother to review just to say something like "great story! Just love blah blah blah", the fact that I'm still reading the story is proof that I like the story well enough. When I review it's usually to say something that seemed important to me or the like. But after the bad review I wrote on WIKTT I thought I'll change tacks here.

Author's Response: Thank you for recognizing that Ron is not the only one with faults in this story. Thanks for reviewing, dear. Not every chapter deserves a review, but they are nice.

mrsseverussnape2005.12.29 - 11:05AM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
poor snape!!! you simply cannot do this to him.

Author's Response: Oh, but I can, and I did! MUWAHAHAHAHA!

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