Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| Anouska Draconius | 2006.03.06 - 08:02AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| So glad to see another update! Love the little twist that Ron was with Blaise, I wonder how Hermione will deal with this. I really hope you have Hermione leave with Severus or that she finds some way to join him after he leaves. It'll be a very sad ending if he disappears into the sunset and she gets left behind *sniff*! |
| gothic_girl82 | 2006.03.06 - 07:32AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| That's bloody fantastic :o) Much impressed. |
| Kismet | 2006.03.06 - 07:19AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Whoa, Ron and Blaise! I didn't see that coming at all. Of course she can't really confront him about it unless she wants her own secret outed. |
| droxy | 2006.03.06 - 07:13AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Oh my that last line was something else. |
| septentrion | 2006.03.06 - 07:05AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| I was draped in the sadness and hope that your story exudes (well that's how I feel when reading it) and bam ! something so unexpected. Oh how I hope she'll leave England with Severus ! |
| Enkanoien | 2006.03.06 - 05:02AM | 52: “In the Name of the Subtle Science and Delicate Art”: Part Two of Two | Signed |
| Just yesterday evening, I was wondering when you'd update - and here it is! I just stole valuable office time; thank God I'm alone here today ;-))
First of all: wow, what a real life you've been having these past weeks! I'll keep my fingers crossed for you mother-in-law!
Now, to the story: I was wondering the first time you mentioned the noises from Zabini's flat if it was Ron, and dismissed it: "nah, he's the one Lavender is seeing!" How wrong I was! Now I need to reconsider... if Ron is seeing Blaise, maybe Lavender's secret is... I do have a new suspicion here, but I will wait and see.
I enjoyed this chapter very much, especially those little things like H.'s jealousy and Marf telling on his master. You managed to convey their feelings of love and passion and losing against life very well. Please let them find a way around that stupid law and Moody!
Now, I'm off to work again, and waiting for your next update, hoping that all goes well in your real life so it will be quick!
Cheers, E. |
| Elayne | 2006.03.06 - 03:30AM | 1: "The Pub" | Signed |
| Yay! The new chapter is up! I've been obsessively checking every day...lol. I love how you wirte aout bodily functions realistically... like the bladder infection thing. It humanizes your characters. The deep sadness and relief that Hermione feels at the dissolving of her marriage is also incredibly realistic. I love this story, Betz. When you finish writing it, I plan on rereading it in it's entirety. I don't do that often, lol, but I want to grasp the whole plot in one piece. Wonderful. |
| Fervesco | 2006.03.06 - 03:21AM | 2: A Life More Than ‘Mione | Signed |
| My goodness - yep, that certainly portrayed a not so happy Herms... Well, things can only look up from here! Well written, hun! *sloppy kiss* |
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