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| cocoachristy | 2005.03.07 - 01:26AM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| I cannot believe I waited this long to read this brilliant story! Now I am on tender hooks waiting for the next chapter!!! Please don't make me wait too long! ;-)(okonchristy) | |||
| EggplantAndCaviar | 2005.03.05 - 08:26PM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| I'm really, really, really enjoying this story. Unlike a lot of authors who have taken on this challenge, you are focusing on the mental and psychological aspects of this situation rather than just writing chapter after chapter of lemon to the point of mind-searing boredom. I absolutely adore the way you portray the characters, and actually look into their motives and backgrounds to give explanation for their actions. It's a refreshing change from surface-scraping, and I am so pleased that you are taking this wonderfully slow...this is a work of art to savor. Beautiful job, my dear. Absolutely beautiful. Author's Response: Thanks! I've always wanted to do a fic that has a bit more background on the characters and shows some of the motivations behind thier actions instead of the usual..."Oh, I did it just because!" There are some things that are canon you don;t have to explain and when you have a challenge (like this Gigolo challenge) that might make a character do things that seem out of canon, I want the reader to know how this course of action came to be. Some people are screaming for lemons, but I can't rush it. But when the lemons come, I want them to seem natural (and breathtakingly hot...I hope) and not rushed or forced, like they said... "Hey, you're not as bad looking as I thought. Let's fuck!" I'm glad you are enjoying it. | |||
| Nosferatas | 2005.03.04 - 06:46PM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| I wish I new, what to say... It's just terrific! I love it. Go on writing and good luck for your baby! Nosferatas | |||
| Lana Manckir | 2005.03.04 - 01:24AM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| Another wonderful chapter. Poor Hermione, I hope to see another visit to Caleo soon ;-) | |||
| Moyra | 2005.03.03 - 05:08PM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| Okay, I would like to add something: so far I’ve assumed that Ginny and Harry would perhaps go along better and fix their marriage, but now its quite clear that she’s maid her mind and will leave him. What’s her idea for their flight? (That’s clearly only a rhetorical question; we’ll see that in due time… And I really wonder where Ron´s gone or hiding!! He hasn´t any lover, does he? I was always a little bit suspicious of his praise of the wonderful sex with Hermione … | |||
| Moyra | 2005.03.03 - 04:54PM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| I’ve just realised that I haven´t reviewed your last chap: I liked it very much as she told Ron all of her unfulfilled erotic expectations better said unfulfilling in general with him in bed (and also in daily life and special interesting conversations), and all in this in a very blunt manner. The near “meeting” with her gigolo in the book shop was well done, and gives him some hint to the direction of her considerations. Another new player in the game! I´m fascinated with Calpurnia (and the choice of her name – something to do with Caesars machinating wife?!?) and their slytherin conversation at the chess game, particularly his emotional, hidden reactions to her revelations about Hermione. Hermione doesn’t realise that there is no need to wait for Ron’s return, because he has explicitly written “ … when I’m wanted…” . I really appreciate her growing awareness that she´ll be more disturbed when he would truly come-back. Have I ever told you that I love your slow and elaborately ongoing of this fanfic? Its wonderful to read such an well developed epic story!!! Author's Response: I chose the name Calpurnia because I loved the parent/teacher scenen in The Addams Family movie..."Wednesday's great-aunt Calpurnia, she danced naked in the town square and enslaved the local minister. But don't worry, we told Wednesday, college first." But knowing it is also the name of Caesar's wife makes it all the much better. Hmmm, nice coincidence. In regards to Ron, he'll be back. I'm glad you are enjoying the suspense and story being drawn out, cause this story is going to take a while to tell. | |||
| Sokudo Ningyou | 2005.03.03 - 04:49AM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| Poor, poor girl. A terrible marriage, and all for the reasons I tell RW/HG shippers; they just wouldn't be compatible. More Sevvy! | |||
| Kalessan | 2005.03.03 - 02:15AM | 17: "Alone At Midnight" | Signed |
| Yes, please continue writing more. There are people out here that are hanging on your every word.
Also hope your baby is better, and that your vacation was fun! Author's Response: Yes, my baby is doing better, thank you. Vacation was fun, but having the kids along was a bit exhausting. It's hard to rest with two little one, who don't want to rest. More is on the way. Hanging on my every word? I'm flattered, I'm just glad you don't think it's a load of tripe. | |||
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