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jenn2016.09.14 - 01:08AM102: "Air, Stone, Fire and Water" Signed
This was a nice chapter, slower, more mellow with just a hint of lemons. Though I feel like Severus and Hermione are coasting. Waiting. Not striving. I want them together. She needs to make that potion for different languages so she can start making fat dark curly haired babies.

Author's Response: After all that peril, had to slow things down a bit. Fast, slow, up, down, changes in pace and tone make for a better story. And they have plans to meet in India, which will be the next chapter.

loreen772016.09.13 - 10:42PM101: “Ut Sementem Feceris Ita Metes” (As You Sow So Will You Reap)Signed
Lol. The hags got busted by their own words. That was a great idea! I liked to see Draco and Hermione forming a closer relationship.

Author's Response: Good old "hot mic." See, Aunt Christine's bitching about work was useful after all.

loreen772016.09.13 - 06:28PM100: "Guess Who's Coming to Dinner" Signed
Yeah. Brilliant chapter!!! Loved the way Draco presented the lei. Really love the idea of wipe out drunk HG dancing in a club with an equally sloshed HP. Lol!

Author's Response: Draco recognizes that Hermione kept his and Ginny's affair secret from Harry and risked a great deal to get the Polyjuice ingredients to help them be free, in addition to clearing his name: he has much to be grateful for with what Hermione did.

loreen772016.09.12 - 09:59PM99: "The Heart Has Reasons That Reason Does Not Understand" Signed
Brilliant. I adored the man singing in the tavern. Wonderful connection there between Sev and Mione. I think a lei is a great way for him to convey his feelings. The pensive memories were so much fun to read, got I would love to watch those scene in a movie.

Author's Response: Penseive memories are great, but not as good as telling someone on person.

loreen772016.09.11 - 10:09PM97: “Terra Incognita” (Unknown Land)Signed
Brilliant chapter! The new and mature Ron is a joy to read. Your dream sequence was very interesting. I can't wait to see how that plays into future chapters. Lol, Ron helped her reach the epiphany about the lemons.

Author's Response: Ron didn't react quite so maturely, when Lav told him, but he's had time to think about the situation while Hermione was out cold and mull it over to have some perspective without confronting her with initial hostility. And Ron thinking aloud did push Hermione in the right direction.

loreen772016.09.10 - 11:26PM96: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part IISigned
Alan is a snuck and I hope he gets what's coming to him.

Author's Response: Just keep reading...

lovethelab2016.09.10 - 10:08AM101: “Ut Sementem Feceris Ita Metes” (As You Sow So Will You Reap)Signed
Wonderful chapter as always! I personally loved the potion masters meeting with a Wipe-Out! Chuff sure deserves worse. Thank you!

Author's Response: Oh, Chuff will do something in which he will eventually get his.

b2shoes2016.09.09 - 11:06AM101: “Ut Sementem Feceris Ita Metes” (As You Sow So Will You Reap)Signed
So good! Both this chapter and the last! Can't wait for Hermione and Severus to finally be in one place, but this communication between the two of them seems very satisfying and a long time coming. Thank you for sharing your story.

Author's Response: Both of them were paralyzed with fear of rejection or that one had moved on from the other. Now they're back on track.

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