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Wolf Moonshadow2006.01.07 - 11:32PM19: "Melt Down" Signed
Ugg, You do know how to write cliffies! At least there are still many chapters remaining for me to read come morning. So, just who did Dolohov take out at the ministry? And where has Ron been all this time? You are doing a wonderful job developing this story, it is quite gripping!

Author's Response: Well, you've caught up by now, so you know the answers. Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying my fic.

Wolf Moonshadow2006.01.07 - 12:23AM9: "Morning Has Broken"Signed
Finally I get a chance to start reading your fic, and you’ve already got me good and seriously hooked! Damn but this is intriguing. Hermione almost caught them out this morning, wonder what that could have led to. And I really have to wonder just what Lavender is up to; never trust a Gryffindor trying to act like a Slytherin. Great job so far, and I can’t wait to get to the rest of it.

Author's Response: Lavender is not acting like a Slytherin, she is acting like any women who has her own interests to tend to.

sakhara2912006.01.05 - 02:41PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
Aah! Mmm. This chapter rang like a very strong wine- delicious, but it stings a bit. I love the rollercoaster you put Hermione on- nothing, then nothing, frustration, a little fear, complete and utter desire, and a little bit of self-loathing. I'm sure Severus is smart enough to figure out that, following back up on their first few visits together, but I doubt it will stop there from being an explosion in the next visit- Severus, after all, is no good at having his heart broken, having so completely given it away. And although I wonder who the ursurper in the bushes was, I know enough about you, and your marvelous plot twists, to know I'll guess wrong. Wonderful, as always. Thank you.

Author's Response: well, the next chapter is posted, so you know how it all turns out between them. You'll find out who was watching from that dark alcove much later on.

Deltastar1002006.01.03 - 05:41PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
I almost didn't start to read this story because I thought that the title referred to Snape and Hermione and then I got hooked on the story. I hope that your intentions are good for a happy ending, actually two happy endings. I really hate Ron and Hermione relationships; I read some of them but If Hermione is the genius she is purported to be, she would never be romanticly involved with Ron. In addition, I just have to say that I hated book six; she really goofed on that one; I hope that if she continues her plot line, she takes a long time to write book seven. Thank goodness for writers who write AU fiction!

Author's Response: My title refers to the whole fairytale ending. "And they lived happily ever after." I wanted to show how this set up for a fairytale ending of HG/RW and HP/GW will not result in long term happiness and how it could all fall apart. Glad you decided to give my fic a chance.

Cytherea2006.01.02 - 07:30PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
Oh my holy goodness. End of part one of three??? You are amazing. I don't think I have adequate words to describe how very much I love this story and your writing. Thank you so much!

Cytherea2006.01.02 - 07:26PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
Oh my holy goodness. End of part one of three??? You are amazing. I don't think I have adequate words to describe how very much I love this story and your writing. Thank you so much!

Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely review. Yep, act II is jsut beginnning, and act III will certainly be an adventure as well.

Moyra2006.01.02 - 03:40PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
I’ve to admit that I expected a great fight between Hermione and Ron at their anniversary dinner – but it was so much better that there wasn’t anything like that, no fights, no conversation, no feelings, no sparks – simply nothing, in the real signification of the word. Nothing to build a marriage, to build the rest of their lives upon.
It was wonderful that she went to Severus, finally acknowledging him. I’m glad that she didn’t stay with him, although that had to be very hard for him.
And who could be the person in the shadows – a simple Auror? Or Dangerous Mad Moody himself? Or Draco? Perhaps Ginny? No, there isn’t any reason for both of them to look out for Hermione at this special evening at this special location.
Thanks a lot for this looong chap(ters). And a Happy New Year to you!

Author's Response: No, very civil, almost too civil between Hermione and Ron. Who the person in the shadoews will eventually be revealed, just not in the near future.

Nichalia2006.01.01 - 04:47PM49: “Some Enchanted Evening: Part II”Signed
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!! AAAH! DEAR SWEE GOD! WHAT has Severus done?! NO, Baby! WHAT HAS THE WRITER DONE! You are a wonderful, vile, horrid, amazing person for building up all that delicious tension and then ending it all on such a ruthless note. -Nichalia

Author's Response: Well, since the next chapter is already posted, you know what has happened. Am I redeemed?

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