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Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After

Armor2005.01.23 - 07:48AM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
Really interesting. I love this chapter. It was so great. I'm sure Hermione will put two and two. She will discover who is her gigolo (yeah she already thinks it could be a foward DE).
And Ron is so idiot. I hope you love the happy end.
Good luck for the next.

Jana2005.01.23 - 05:18AM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
The pacing is great, and the story has me dying for more, but the chapters come so slowly. Though I guess since you have kids too, that can be forgiven. :P

alphafemale2005.01.23 - 01:36AM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
I really like Hermione's rationalizations. Her idea that fantasizing about another man and using said other man for all intellectual stimulation in her life as the key to keeping her marriage is ludicrous. But she wouldn't know that. She would rationalize it away just as you've written. Fantastic job capturing the intricacies involved in Hermione's thought pattern. Thank you for the chapter!

Fury2005.01.23 - 12:00AM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
Hmm, okay, so when's Hermione going to realize that she deserves a real life, a job that challenges her and fulfilling love?

Author's Response: In time. Patience young Padawan.

Aurealis2005.01.22 - 11:33PM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
Thank you for updating this! I was anxiously waiting for it. This was a good length and got through a lot of plot. In short I loved it, and find that it makes up for the hiatus.

Author's Response: I would have posted sooner, but I had to find a new preschool for my son (as his daycare is closing in a month), my daughter has been teething interupting sleep which is necessary for energy for writing, and my furnace went on the fritz. Weeee! However, ch15 is done and will be submitted very soon. Still working/stuck on ch16 though.

TNgirl2005.01.22 - 11:11PM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
Great as always! I like that Severus is beginning to react to Hermione on a personal level, the touch. And .also, that Hermione is reacting to Severus. Poor Ron he is just soooo clueless!!! Keep up the good work and update soon!!

angelina2005.01.22 - 10:49PM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
This is an amazing, convoluted and sophisticated plot. I feel sorry for everybody--and I deeply appreciate how you've set up the conflicts without making any of the major players an unmitigated jerk. Everybody's got big flaws, but they all remain sympathetic. I would like to believe that life couldn't make Hermione such a doormat, but *been there*. It seems terrible but inevitable that she's developing feelings for her gigolo, while Snape is still thinking in terms of how he can use her. (You have very skillfully indicated his growing feelings _and_ complete unawareness of same--I find this really delicious and look forward to watching those feelings develop and Snape having to deal with them.) It looks like everyone has a long, difficult journey ahead of them. I look forward eagerly to the next installment. Thanks--

Author's Response: Thanks, I was trying for just that. No one is innocent nor is anyone totally horrible. In terms of Hermione, I tend to think she had a slow slide into mediocraty, like a turtle sitting in a pot of water slowly boiling to death and unaware of it. And with Snape, I don't want him to *BAM* fall for her, but slowly come to feel for her.

justme2005.01.22 - 10:44PM14: "Pondero of Verum" (Reflection of Truth)Signed
While I am SOOOO glad you updated; I must say that I simply cannot get enough of this wonderful story. So please (begs on knees) update again soon. Oh, and to the betas....dont worry; the author ROCKS OUTLOUD!!!!! And I will ALWAYS let her know! ;)

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