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| AngelQueen | 2005.03.28 - 12:38AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| And Siren was right! You've given us another "on the edge of your seat" chapter! *grins* And Ron's come back? *scowls* Get lost, prat! You're messing with the pleasant Hermione/Severus vibes created earlier in the evening! *pauses to sigh and wish she had been Hermione for just that one brief moment in time* Here's hoping Ron gets lost and doesn't come back anytime soon. Or he could just go to the Burrow and cry to Mother Weasley. Once again, great job, Betz! And that spoiler pic! Wow! I nearly died laughing! :D That should be one interesting scene! :) Author's Response: Yes, Ron did come back at the most inoppurtune time. Hey, I'm the author and *I* wish I was Hermione. Yes, that pic with Severus and Draco is most amusing, which was why I begged Melanie to draw it for me, she does such a great job of drawing Severus with a face that envokes humor. | |||
| Aphrodites_Child | 2005.03.28 - 12:14AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| Great chapter, but are you sure the pic at Deviant Art is Severus and Draco? If you notice, the Elf is putting on pink nailpolish on 'Dracos' hand....:) Author's Response: Yes, it is Draco...did you not notice the RED polish being slathered on Severus' toes too? All shall be revealed in said future chapter. | |||
| queenp | 2005.03.27 - 11:52PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| Chapter was great. I enjoyed the scene with her sucking on his fingers...It was *whimper* rather intense for all it was...I can't wait to see what you have planned next. PLEASE update again soon!! | |||
| pickles | 2005.03.27 - 11:23PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| HAPPY EASTER BETZ!!
Thank you for a great chapter to read. to bad snape isn't allowed to look into minds anymore. he would have exploded knowing what was in mione's mind. will mione lose her job because she didn't alert anyone? and what was the clock set?
Have a wonderful week Author's Response: Yes, Legilimency is a big bad no-no for those on parole, along with many spells and charms. More on Hermione's job status in a bit. The clock set? You'll just have to wait and see.....(snicker) | |||
| Aurealis | 2005.03.27 - 10:40PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| What a great return! Good job, Betz. It seems that Hermione just can't win! Guilt from her fight with Ron, guilt from lying to Ginny, guilt from pleasure taken on Calleo's finger, and now guilt from not reporting Doholov's behavior. She needs a vacation. Author's Response: No, Hermione just can't catch a break. Guilt, guilt, guilt. She needs more than a vacation, she needs a proper shag. | |||
| DayLightDancer | 2005.03.27 - 10:32PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| well that freaking sucks...... but atleast hermione got some action with whatever his name is... haha | |||
| Intelligent Witch | 2005.03.27 - 10:21PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| I wish this fic didn't have to be so slow even though it has to be. Each time a chapter comes I get so excited and then I read it and coem to the end and feel sad because I love it and its over once again. I can't wait for an update! Author's Response: Yes, I wish I could speed things up too, but I did state before that part of this challenge was anticipation. I wish I had more time to write, then I could update faster. Thanks for reviewing. | |||
| GinnyW | 2005.03.27 - 09:19PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| I promised you a real review over here. ;-)
Oh you were so right about just a hint of smut....so very evil of you! LOL!
Siren is right, yet another piece that has me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I heard a rumor from somewhere about Lavender's ulterior motives. Hmmmm....hoping that Ron gets out of the way of Hermione's possible happiness elsewhere. I don't want this attack that Dolohov did to interfere with anything.
Just my little tidbit of informaiton: Red Raspberry-leaf is very good for toning the uterus. Good for pregnant mommys too because it can help ensure that the contractions are more effective when the mother goes into labor.
Please update as soon as you can! I know it's hard with kids, family, house...I have that too. *sigh* What I would give to be able to spend 8 hours a day in front of this cursed computer, LOL! Cheers! ~Gin Author's Response: Well, as much as it could have slid into a passionate romp in bed, Hermione is not ready to give up on her marriage. Dolohov is a unfortunate occurance, but do you reeally think Hermione is going to give up what she thinks is the one good thing left in her shit-storm of a life? Yes, I am familiar with those properties of red raspberry leaf. Oh, that I could have a house-elf of my own, then I could write all day and night long too. | |||
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