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loreen772015.12.04 - 11:16AM61: “The Bitter Truth” or “The Kneazle Is Out of the Bag”Signed
Wow. I didn't think Ron could be any more of a jerk then before, but telling her that. Ugh. Poor girl. Even if arrangements for marriage are commonly done by parents in the wizarding world, that was still a low blow. I hope she leaves him soon and she finds happiness. Great chapter, I love your writing style and great dialogue. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Author's Response: Well, I'm not defending Ron, but there are reasons why he did what he did that will come out in future chapters, and why he stuck with Hermione this long, So he has his own reasons why he married Hermione and stuck around. I'm not saying that those reasons were right or wrong, but you'll get to see his side of the story eventually.

loreen772015.12.02 - 09:12AM60: “Green-Eyed Monsters, Fairies and Sirens”Signed
Wonderful chapter. The testing process was great to read. I really liked that we are seeing Severus ' emotions peek through.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it's getting harder to hide his feelings, but Severus is learning more about love the longer he spends with Hermione.

loreen772015.12.01 - 11:34PM59: “Of Bets and Brandy, of Binges and Brave Gryffindors, and Why the Bath Is Boiling Hot”Signed
The easy banter and witty dialogue was nicely written. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you. It's always nice to hear feedback when one does dialog well.

loreen772015.12.01 - 10:58PM58: “Life Is But a Chess Game”Signed
Lol. Hurricanes are a real bitch, aren't they. Loved that Trevor had already tested her ingredient she needed. I love all the twists and turns of this story.

Author's Response: Remember that margarine commercial back in the 70's. "It's not nice to fool with Mother Nature." Yeah. Oh, the twists and turns start getting *REALLY* interesting with chapter 62, which will be a two-parter. Right now I'm just setting up more chess pieces to be played later on in the story.

ccallies2015.12.01 - 10:11PM4: "Mea Culpa, Mea Culpa, Mea Maxima Culpa" (My Sin, My Sin, My Most Grievous Sin) Signed
Welcome back kiddo! Just when I was about to give up on HGSS fics you re-emerge. This has been one of my all time faves! Squeeee !!

Author's Response: It's good to be back. Yeah, I had to finish this or I would regret not finishing this. Even after ten years, my brain was demanding I commit this to keyboard. But at least it's done. Now I just have to wait for my betas to edit chapters.

verasuspense2015.11.27 - 04:34PM60: “Green-Eyed Monsters, Fairies and Sirens”Signed
I can understand cilantro suppressing libido, since it tastes disgusting. I used to wonder how anyone could consider it fit to eat, but I discovered that its genetic. Some people have a genetic deficiency that leaves them unable to taste cilantro. The rest of us know it tastes the way a dry-cleaning plant smells. UGH.

Author's Response: I'm not a fan of cilantro either, but there are few recipes in which I can tolerate it, as long as it's not overused. Once such recipe shall be featured in chapter 57, but it has lots of garlic too (it's a very yummy dish!). But for me, the smell of cilantro can be too much at times. My mom had a whole food business and someone would be chopping up cilantro a whole produce box at a time for a salad my mom sold to a particular market chain. When you have that much cilantro chopped up, there is an acid smell to it that reminds me of vomit.

just harry2015.11.26 - 09:00PM60: “Green-Eyed Monsters, Fairies and Sirens”Signed
Another great chapter. seems like Severus has fallen in love. I say its about time. Great job.

Author's Response: Oh, Severus is head over heels already. And in coming chapters you'll know more why it took so long.

verasuspense2015.11.22 - 12:21PM58: “Life Is But a Chess Game”Signed
Mother Nature seems determined to thwart Severus' plans, The Bitch.

Author's Response: Oh, just wait until chapter 90.

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