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Moyra2016.05.11 - 01:31PM74: "I Left My Heart in San Francisco" Signed
My, they left quite a trail behind for Harry to follow, didn't they? Though I've to admit it's been rather funny to see Severus kind of panic because of Frank - he's a rather rare guy, this one. Uh, at least I hope so... Anyway, the sanctuary islanders seems to take their task rather serious, and I'm curious how they are going to react regarding the Death Eater past of S. and D. Looking forward to the next chap - I guess we'll see also something from Hermione then? How's she coping? And Harry?

Author's Response: Oh, Harry is observant in his own ways, far more than others give him credit for. Next chapter, Harry and Hermione have a "little chat." And the sanctuary interrogators do take their task quite seriously, as you'll read in the next chapter, and why. Next couple chapters will include Harry in one way or another. I'll be posting Chapter 69 to the Ashwinder queue tomorrow, so may take a day or two to clear through and pop up.

Moyra2016.05.04 - 12:58PM73: "Free Bird"Signed
Oh God, Hermione changed her mind, and it didn't work out in the end. As rather expected, but all the same it's been dramatique. On the other hand good for Severus to know that she would leave all behind her only to be with him.

Author's Response: Yes, the vial wasn't the only thing that broke that morning, so did two other things.

Sephee2016.05.02 - 11:48PM74: "I Left My Heart in San Francisco" Signed
i find myself looking for an update to this story twice a day. oh so good. love the sanctuary.

Author's Response: Awww! Thank you! I update once a week (as long as I have a buffer from my betas of betaed chapters), but if I'll be busy and unable to update, I'll post on the early side. Next chapter will be posted to the Ashwinder queue May 12th or 13th. As for sanctuary, we'll get to learn more about Severus' new home.

DayLightDancer2016.05.02 - 05:42PM74: "I Left My Heart in San Francisco" Signed
YEAH! You know I could tell you've already left hints of finding Albus 'will'. I can't remember where exactly but I do know you've done it. So I was pissed originally but hearing what you responded with to my last comment I feel much better with that outcome and seeing what happens. It sucks that I have to wait weekly/monthly for updates but this story is super great. Hope you get to finish it before you're interest/life gets in the way!!!!! Would hate to see that happen to this wonderful story.

Author's Response: The only delay in posting this story is having my chapters beta'ed. I have finished this story as of last summer. The only hold up is if my betas went bye-bye and I need to find new betas. One beta if going on maternity leave later this year, but someone offered to come and pick up her spot, so I'll still have a stable of betas so I can get my chapters checked by two betas, as two betas catch all the errors and I have no fix-it's tagged by the Ashwinder mods. So there is no chance of this story not getting posted. I just have to have my betas, my wonderful betas who fix my errors and rearrange my strange sentence structure and catch my typos and deal with my slight dyslexia, take time our of their lives to clean up my writing. Right now I have a buffer of a couple chapters, waiting for one chapter to come back, then a few more chapters done through the beta process, so hopefully I can keep up a buffer of chapters so I can keep posting a chapter a week.

paddiew2016.05.02 - 01:34PM74: "I Left My Heart in San Francisco" Signed
*Cannot* figure out the 'Dumbledore' lemons. What have you got cooking in there? Keep 'em coming. please.

Author's Response: The lemons will be explained... in time. And next chapter I'll submit to the Ashwinder queue around May 12/13.

DayLightDancer2016.05.02 - 12:07PM74: "I Left My Heart in San Francisco" Signed
Hermione you dun goofed. I hate that you made her do that because that's only going to cause Draco to resent her for possibly botching up the plans. I honestly couldn't read that part and skipped it once I read that "she dropped" and I was like AWWW HECK NO. Excited for this sanctuary thing though!

Author's Response: Yep, even clever girls can have fumble fingers at the worst moments. And besides, how much of a story would it be with them running off to Hawaii and Severus still not having his name cleared? Can't have it too easy for our lovers to be together. There are still so many plot threads that would be left unaddressed if Hermione were around. Besides, a story without conflict and catastrophes is pretty damn boring, wouldn't you say?

Author's Response: ...unaddressed if Hermione WEREN'T around...

FreeRaven2016.04.29 - 08:40AM73: "Free Bird"Signed
hi! okay, now that we are all at a stopping point (speaking for any other marathon readers out there) I have to thank you for such a great story! and applaud you for your literary uhh professionalism? you are a fantastic writer! why have I just found you?? and also, my oh my have I been enjoying the plot twists. And the surplus of cultural knowledge and bits (including but not limited to: dancing, culinary, linguistics, botany, geography, and meteorological !!!). You make me wanna be a better student of the world! Lastly, I already have a way out for Severus' ultimate freedom and innocence worked out but I am amped to see this through and how you work it... I'm probably wrong but I see something in a pensieve that looks like innocence! Thank you another 70 times!!

Author's Response: You are welcome! And it's not much of a stopping point as I'm posting another chapter next week, and on the early side since I'll be having a very busy Mother's Day weekend. But yes, this is a stopping point in the story. Now our two lovers must lives their lives apart for a while. As for your theories about Severus' innocence, we'll see. No spoilers. Thank you for all your praise, you're most welcome indeed.

karmen_912016.04.28 - 11:25AM73: "Free Bird"Signed
Great as always, though! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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