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bay2005.07.09 - 02:31AM30: “Teach Me Tonight"Signed
More, please. More, more, more and soon! This story is so wonderful. But not even that chocolate-cherry recipe can get us past that fact that we need some smut and we need it soon because good heavens, you sure do know how to build tension! Thank you for such a great read!

Author's Response: Chapter 31 will be positng soon and hopefully ch32 will post before HBP comes out. Once HBP comes out, the rate of positng will slow down. The smut will come, but Hermione has to be ready for it. You will have to wait for her, she's the one holding things up.

Barbara2005.07.08 - 03:17PM30: “Teach Me Tonight"Signed
Mmmmh ***dances out of the room*** May be I will be able to leave a more coherent review later ... but not now, right now I'm dreaming ....

Author's Response: That good, eh? Happy to make you so happy. Go forth and have dreams of Severus twirling you 'round and 'round.

Winna2005.07.08 - 03:00PM30: “Teach Me Tonight"Signed
SQUEEEE!

Author's Response: I know...me too. (Big dreamy sigh)

Winna2005.07.08 - 02:36PM29: “The Travails of Training Trevor"Signed
Oh, nice try with the misdirection again! Oh, noooo, Ron’s not cheating on anyone. He’s too loyal and noble and from a nice family. Such logical reasons, I can see why Hermione would believe this. But you the author have shown too much insight into human nature to have missed this simple fact: a man’s sex drive is not logical. If a man is not getting his sexual needs filled at home, he will go elsewhere. I do not say this with malice or bitterness, it is just a simple fact of life, based on my addictive readings of advice columnists like Dear Abby. So, my mind’s made up, I’m convinced Ron is seeing Lavender, and nothing short of revealing Lavender in someone else’s arms will change my mind!

But on to other topics. There’s just something about a dancing Severus that makes me go all fangurl and shout SQUEE to the (hopefully empty) room. Although, for the first time, I am wondering if Severus and Hermione will wind up together. She would be the perfect replacement for Severus at Lavender’s shop. I’m sure Lavender doesn’t care about her lack of a Masters license, and everyone knows Hermione is plenty creative. But the only way for that to happen is if Hermione stays in England, which means she isn’t off with Severus. Oh, I know there can’t be a Mega Happy Ending, since someone, somewhere is going to get hurt when (if?) Draco, Severus, and Ginny break free. The question is, who will be happy and who will be devastated, sadder but wiser?

One more chapter to go; I’m getting addicted to this instant gratification.

Author's Response: Maybe Ron is cheating on Hermione, maybe he's not. We'll just have to wait and see.

Yes, dancing Severus makes me want to heave a big dreamy sigh too. I think Alan Rickman could raise several hundreds of thousands of dollars for charity just by dressing up as Snape and auctioning off dances with him. If I had the money, I'd drop $5,000 on a tango with him all Snaped up. But yes, the big questions of the moment seem to be who Ron is cheating with - if he's even cheating on his wife - and if/when Severus/Draco/Ginny escape, will Hermione go with them? Big ifs. We shall have to wait and see.


Winna2005.07.08 - 01:46PM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
Wow, so much going on in this chapter, I don’t know where to start! First, we have an unborn child to add to the angst/mystery of Severus’s past. I’m glad Fictional!AlbusandMinerva are able to help Severus through his emotional trials.

Then we have Ron’s mysterious actions. It seems to me he’s just going through the motions of reconciling with Hermione. If he were sincere, there would be a little more emotion to him. Instead, he seems to be reluctantly following someone else’s orders. By which I mean Lavender’s orders, of course. Nice try, deflecting attention to Rufus’s wife, but I refuse to be dissuaded!

But the best part is the new twist in the Hermione/Ginny relationship. Of course Ginny is upset, she knows what a hypocrite her friend is being. Shoot, even Hermione knows she’s being a hypocrite. But she was on such a moral high horse about Ginny seeing Draco at the start of this fic, I’m guessing she’s just too proud and embarrassed to confess she’s doing the same thing. Personally, I equate her emotional relationship with Calleo to be just as morally bankrupt as Ginny’s physical relationship with Draco. Which makes for an entertaining story. And lucky me, I got two more chapters to read!

PS: Draco=Legolas=Orlando Bloom=funny!

Author's Response: Yes, Severus lost a wife AND a child. Writing that scene I cried...but I know the whole backstory, which makes it even sadder to see him suffer like that.

Ron going through the motions? Maybe.

Hermione being a hypocrite? Of course she is. But she sees the physical action itself a greater sin than intent of the heart and mind. Hermione has always tried to do her best, be it in school or attaining moral high ground, but she's finding that no one is infallable. She has to accept that she is imperfect too. Yes, Hermione is just as guilty as Ginny, in some ways more so because she is in the process of falling in love with Severus/Calleo while she is still married to Ron. Ginny never stopped loving Draco and loved him before she even dated Harry. Ginny merely picked up her relationship with Draco while being married to Harry.

Yes, I thought Draco as a "beautiful elf" was afunny thought too. I always wanted to do a story that featured Draco, Harry, Ron and Neville running from the Death Eaters and holed up in a motel. The clerk asks them if they had just come back from a "Lord of the Rings" party or something. "Let me guess," she purred while looking over Draco from head to toe. "You're Legolas?" Glancing at Harry, she added, "And you must be Frodo. Who's that? Samwise?" she asked, nodding her head towards Neville. "Who am I?" asked Ron. "Aragon?" she replied. "But Aragon should be sexy...not...red."


Winna2005.07.08 - 12:23PM27: "Truss Me" Signed
Been away for a while, so I'm delighted to see there are 4 new chapters to read! I love how Severus and Hermione are slowly coming to realize that they are falling in love. Wonder what she'll do when Calleo reveals his true identity. And until we actually SEE who Lavender is shagging, I am convinced it's Ron! On to the next chapter...

Author's Response: Yes, they are falling in love, but don't know it...or won't admit to it. You'll have to wait to find out how Hermione reacts. And why are you so certain Ron is shagging Lavender?

Elayne2005.07.08 - 06:14AM30: “Teach Me Tonight"Signed
I love this story so much, I check on aff.net everyday for it (because it is usually posted there before ashwinder). Hands down my favorite story right now. Please update!!!! I'm going crazy over here! I usually don't even read WIPs, because I go all crazy waiting for new chapters, but your writing style is intoxicating and I just couldn't help myself. Ahhhhhh!

Author's Response: Well, ch32 is with my betas and hopefully I'll get that posted before HBP comes out. I will be taking a short break in order to read HBP and allow everyone time to read. I had a backlog of chapters ready to post, so once ch32 and HBP come out, the updates won't be so quick, back to my slower trickle of one a week or so - depending on how fast I can write them. My writing style is intoxicating (blushes)? Well, don't read and drive. Thank you, so glad you're enjoying my fic.

triskell2005.07.08 - 05:13AM30: “Teach Me Tonight"Signed
I was lucky. I read four chapters as I couldn't read them before. What a progress between them. I love the idea of the dance lessons. I don't know why but I am sure that Ron is not clear (Rosermeta's comment, the fact he didn't want to touch her). I am not sure Hermnione will be hurt once she discovers that Severus is Calleo. Not if he is so kind and galant with her. I am glad to see that you update so often. How many chapters will you write until the end ? I don't know your harcort verts... Maybe it was haricots verts ? If not, excuse me for this last comment. After all, you are the chief. I will try to find a good online translator (oz to grams) and try your cake recipe.

Author's Response: Kindest thanks. Yes, dance lessons leave so much open for possibility. We'll just ahve to wait and see what's up with Ron, if there's anything at all. Hermione...we'll have to wait and see. Yes, the spelling could be haricots verts, I'll have to double check the spelling - as that spelling came up valid.

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