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| never one to mince words | 2005.06.24 - 09:34PM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| Sorry. This has nothing to do with your chapter. I just wanted to say kudos to you for not responding to the poor worthless soul who apparently has fallen in the deep end of Hogwarts's lake. My goodness. *laughing* I mean, after about the third time reading it, it actually started to be a little funny how someone could get so upset over FICTION. Oh, my. I need to go find a tissue.Hang in there, Betz. Don't let the escaped loonies from St. Mungo's get you down. Author's Response: I sent a personal email to the person who left a rather...incensed...review of my fic. Therefore, no response on this site is needed since I responded personally. He has a right to his own opinions, though they are based on a few "skimmed chapters" and that he is ignorant of a few key details that drive Ginny to remain at Harry's side and Hermione's desire for companionship. Let him has his opinions. I live in a free country where liberty means listeneing to all the voices whether you like them or not. As long as he didn't go into the lame teen netspeak flame review mode that make one think they are on the mental par with Crabbe, Goyle or the Squee patrol, I will let him have his say and not let it bother me. | |||
| Barbara | 2005.06.24 - 05:44PM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| Hi Betz, I hope you don't take that last reviewer serious. Your story holds strong emotions, so strong, that this person registered only to leave a review here. Derogative, but still. But in focussing only on the aspect of adultery- which seems to affect him very strong - he denies himself to enjoy a wonderful written story. Author's Response: As he has admitted, he had "skimmed a few chapters." Which means he has missed out on important details. He missed why Ginny continues to stay with Harry and cheat on her husband...because Draco told her not to leave Harry...not yet. Not until the time is right and they can flee together safely. And Hermione may be tempted to have an affair with Calleo, but she has not acted on those desires - so far it is a relationship based on friendship driven based on lonelines because her husband doesn't talk to her anymore. There are some people in real life who show much less restrain than that. He is entitled to have his own opinion, even if it is based on the glancing over a few chapters and ignorance of several key plot details. | |||
| guyincognito | 2005.06.24 - 01:21AM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| I can't imagine that I'll ever come back to this, and I have no idea why I skimmed through the couple of chapters that I did. I just want to be what I assume is the only person here who says that Ginny is a complete fucking worthless slut, and I hope that there are real repercussions to what she is doing. Hermione as well. I have no sympathy for either of them. I suppose I'm not the sort of person who should be reading crap like this, you know, standards and all, but it would be nice to see some consequences for fucking around. It'll never happen, I'm sure Harry and Ron will turn into a bunch of cuckolding queers, but whatever makes you readers happy. | |||
| Nichalia | 2005.06.23 - 09:46PM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| I'm so glad you updated this. Great story! And I actually recognized as I was reading the facial scene with Snape and Draco that I'd seen it illustrated on DeviantArt before. :) Author's Response: Thanks, glad you are enjoy my fic. Yeah, I love Melanie's work too. | |||
| LenaM | 2005.06.23 - 09:33PM | 15: “Knowledge Is Power” | Signed |
| Hermione never ever eats. It's horrid! Snape is right, she needs to eat.
Enjoying the story. I'll keep reading, because it's all pleasurable. Author's Response: Yes, Severus is right, she needs to eat. But that will be remedied in a future chapter and more. Glad you're enjoying my fic. | |||
| Winna | 2005.06.23 - 10:59AM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| Great chapter. Loved the almost-not-quite-lemons between Hermione and Snape. Tomorrow's meeting with Calleo should be even more tense than it was last week! I also appreciate the clarification on 'knock up'. I figured it out from context, but it did seem odd to my American eyes. By the way, I was moved by poor little Ginny's speech about being a voluptuous, curvey, belly-dancing red-head with gravity defying bosoms; moved to smack her upside the head on behalf of pear shaped, drab haired women everywhere! Just kidding, I hope she and Hermione both get a happy ending out of this. Thanks for the update, and I hope all is now well with the beta. | |||
| Moyra | 2005.06.23 - 09:28AM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| What a wonderful and funny chap! The tests of the variable beauty potions were absolutely hilarious, above all the toe nail polish! You gave me a great laugh! Again, I felt very sorry for Hermione – this Duksha cow is a real slave driver, isn´t she? She´s exploiting her badly! In general, the alternating chats between S/D and H/G made the whole chap rather diverting. And naturally I liked the progress of the longing of S&H. Cheers, M. Author's Response: Thank you, but most of all, thank Melanie for the nail polish, as it was her idea to throw it into the illustration. I just asked for a picture of them in towles with green goop on their faces and she comes back with house elves painting their nails. Yeah...Dushka's an uber bitch...can you guess what my inspriation for Hermione's boss is? And what her real name is? I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and the progression. | |||
| Aurealis | 2005.06.22 - 11:21PM | 26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep" | Signed |
| Cute chapter. You get very involved in the listing of potions ingredients. Are you wiccan, or just interested in the details? In any case, the simultaneous masturbating was fun. And if you know of a real smudge and chip-proof top coat, please include it in the next chapter! Author's Response: No, not wiccan. Just aware that some medicines are based on the extracts of herbs. Yeah...Can't you just imagine Hemrione going at herself the same time Severus is in another part of the spa. No, I don't know of any smudge of chip proof coat to nail polish. Wait...more on jacaranda dew is coming. | |||
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