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loreen772016.12.28 - 07:53AM116: "Dragontinis and Drunkards"Signed
Lol. Sloppy drunk Severus and Draco and very amusing. I enjoyed the idea of the rotating resteraunts, very practical. Wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Drunk!Severus is usually amusing, especially if he's been drinking Cheery's High Spirits Spirits. Yeah, rotating restaurants make sense, wizarding world and real world.

Himeko2016.12.27 - 08:49PM111: "Kiss Me Once and Kiss Me Twice, Then Kiss Me Once Again" Part IISigned
Wow, I think I have read all the chapters in 3 days. I've been lacking sleep. I really, really like this fix. Congratulations. And just a little thing, since I'm from Spain and, obviously, Spanish is my first language, the correct form would be "tu tesorito", not "su tesorito" . Tu tesorito means your little treasure, and su tesorito is his/her/theirs little treasure. Thanks again for your excellent work.

Author's Response: Ah, good to know. I'll fix that.

OnlyMoonLight2016.12.16 - 10:52PM117: "Shag a Night While in Someone Else's Body" Signed
After reading: I did not have any expectations, other than it would be really, really good. That said, I found this to have been perfect! Innocent, adventurous, and sexy as hell! Thank you! Brava, brava, bravissima! ~Moonlight

Author's Response: Thank you, glad to not disappoint and delivered something you enjoyed.

OnlyMoonLight2016.12.16 - 10:19PM117: "Shag a Night While in Someone Else's Body" Signed
Pre-Review: *dances with glee* I have not even read the chapter, but I know it's going to be amazing and I've been looking forward to it! Christmas came early! *squee*

Author's Response: You're welcome. Next chapter now posted.

Jong_Kahn2016.12.10 - 01:28AM116: "Dragontinis and Drunkards"Signed
Your description of Hermione and Severus on the beach was so romantic, with the swimming, and the sea urchins, and their lovely lunch--it almost felt like being on holiday myself! And I appreciated your nod to Rudyard Kipling's story "Rikki Tikki Tavi" with the Rikki Tikki Tavern. Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, they needed one of those "perfect" days to make up all the shit they have both gone through to wait for their reunion. Evidently there is a bar in Florida called Rikki Tiki Tavern that is a bar shack on a pier. I wish there was one that was like a mix of old colonial India with Indian and British foods and drinks.

Jong_Kahn2016.12.09 - 11:50PM115: "Catalysts and Indomitable Connections" Signed
Another good chapter. But was the inclusion of "tossed salad" REALLY necessary? Really?

Author's Response: Part of my job as author is also to be a little bit educational. There are many who read my fic where they are not American and English is a second language. An explanation of what a "tossed salad" was necessary sot hat they understand what has become a well known slang term in the states. Part of Jerry is based on my brother and my best friend from high school/college. If I used a common term that was also a sexual slang term innocently, they laughed and ragged on my ass. Hermione's embarrassment in the diner was far less than some of the situations I was faced with.

Mistress Sorcha2016.12.09 - 01:21PM115: "Catalysts and Indomitable Connections" Signed
HOLY FUCK BETZ I WASNT PAYING ATTENTION AND DIDN'T REALIZE IT WAS YOU. I loved Seeds so much, and this is currently my favorite SSHG fic out there. I tell everyone how well-written well-researched it is and how much I adore it. Should have known it was you~

Author's Response: Oh, I am so glad you love Seeds! I tried to make it read like the old translations of Greek with the slightly theatrical translations of late 19th century that are still used in some modern texts.

Rema2016.12.09 - 02:20AM116: "Dragontinis and Drunkards"Signed
Drunk Severus and Draco are sooo cute. I hope Hermione got a discount on the knives for attracting more customers :)

Author's Response: Well, better happy drunks than despondent drunks, like during Victory Day booze-ups.

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