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LariLee2005.05.18 - 07:37AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
I can't even leave a decent review, I'm definitely moved by the story. The details you give on Hermione's Ashwinder testings and on the potions they discuss is intricate and marvelous. And I'm glad she did not criticize his cassoulet. :-) he's definitely dropping hints, I wonder how long it will be before Hermione starts putting the pieces together.
~Lisa

Author's Response: You're moved? Wow, I'm thrilled to know I'm entertaining you this much. I try to give a little glimpse into their conversations so the reader can see some of the banter between them. Hermione wouldn't dare criticise Calleo's cooking, she's so thrilled that she's not cooking for once. Besides, she's had to deal with criticisms about her cooking - watch out for the tin of corned beef in chapter 29. Yes, Severus is dropping hints, but you'll have to wait and see how long it takes Hemrione to put it all together.

Sniv2005.05.18 - 07:00AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Oh it'll be interesting to see if Hermione will take him up on his offer that she can come by...very good...And Snape - well I hope he'll 'come around' ...

Author's Response: Yes, we'll see Hermione thinking about it. You'll have to wait and see if she does though.

mugglegirl09082005.05.18 - 03:14AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Absolutely wonderful, Betz! I agree with Siren; it is getting harder and harder to wait in between updates!

I was SO hoping that Severus would just tell her who he is when they were discussing him (well, Hermione's Potions professor, which happened to be him). Argh! Damn Slytherin! Why didn't he just tell her?! Hehe, I know. Plot development first; passify the readers second...lol. ;-)

Anyway, congrats on another chapter superbly done. Can't wait for more! :-D

Author's Response: I'ts getting harder and harder to write. I have so many smaller plot threads and I'm trying to plan for chapters that are weeks away from being written. Man! Writing a WIP is MUCH harder then all at once where you can go back and fix plot holes or drop threads.

No, Severus has his own reasons for why he hasn't revealed himself yet. And thaanks, I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Sokudo Ningyou2005.05.18 - 02:53AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
WOOT.

Author's Response: Thanks!

justme2005.05.18 - 02:22AM23: “A Conclave on Cassoulet"Signed
Just phenominal....wish i didnt have to get to sleep, would read on....love the cassoulet debate, it worked very well. They indeed seem to be pureblood snobs LOL. Cant wait until tomorrow when i can view the latest updates without losing too much sleep...

Author's Response: Kindest thanks for your praise. Yes, two men arguing over food like that...it does seem very essoteric and high-brow.

pickles2005.05.18 - 12:49AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Woo Hoo awesome chapter. could feel the tension before the departure. thank you for the awesome chapters. keep on writing - patty

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it was pretty tense and glad you found it so. Don't worry, I'm still writing and my betas are still busting their asses cleaning up my work.

Althea Grey2005.05.18 - 12:31AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
erm... am I retarded, and it's just been so long since I've read the beginning of this fic.. but... Severus's wife?! Must go back and re-read beginning sometime next week, or else you've gots some 'splainin to do. ;) But on a separate note, the sexual tension should be killing them soon, because it's even annoying me, and I know it's just a story!

Author's Response: If you will recall, when Draco confessed the terms of his contract with Lavender (getting him Ginny and a way out of the country), Severus agreed that he would tell Draco about his *dead* wife. Severus is a widower in my fic. The sexual tension is only going to get worse...trust me. Don't worry, there will come a time when they finally kiss, and when they do, that shall be the end of Act I of this three act fic. BTW...you think the sxual tension is bad? You should have seen me as a 21 year old virgin. Not pretty, very, VERY tense.

pickles2005.05.18 - 12:10AM24: “When Ingredient-Testing Witches Get the Blues”Signed
ooohhh a secret box... very intriguing..

Author's Response: As Patrick Star would coo...."Seeeecret boooooox."

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