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enchanter2005.09.11 - 02:24AM40: “Forced Exuberance and Pointless Sentimentality”Signed
Housepoints to Bill for being a nice guy; how Ron is so obtuse I don't know, but it works well for this story and definitely makes one feel more sympathetic towards the goings on of Hermione. Loved the panicked and overwhelmed feeling-process she's been going through--it's extremely hard not to get completely involved in it all, even if only for a chapter. Still hoping for more soon!

Author's Response: Ron has his own issues. More on that in later chapters. Yes, Hermione was feeling quite panicked for a moment. More on the way soon.

RachelW2005.09.11 - 02:18AM40: “Forced Exuberance and Pointless Sentimentality”Signed
I FINALLY got in here and got caught up on the last seven (yes, seven, I feel like such a bad reader here) chapter updates. I nearly screamed in frustration when I got to the bottom and went to click the little arrows to the next chapter and... and... it wasn't there!!!

I don't think Ron is cheating on Hermione with Lavender. There's more going on here than that...I'm not sure if Ron is cheating...though if he were going to, he has plenty of oppourtunity for a quick, easy shag with one of his fans (which I think suits his persona in this fic more than maintaining a romantic relationship with a woman like Lavender, who is likely not going to put up with his crap).

Author's Response: Seven? My! You did have to catch up on quite a bit. So you don't think Ron is cheating on Hermione with Lavender? You could be right...or not. We'll have to wait and see what happens.

Sokudo Ningyou2005.09.11 - 01:58AM40: “Forced Exuberance and Pointless Sentimentality”Signed
Lucky betas. I keep dashing back here every day to see if you've updated, and they get to read it first. :P It's also not surprising to see another Weasley with more common sense and empathy than his brother.

Author's Response: Yeah, lucky betas having to clean up my crap. I'm luck to have them. Not all Weasleys are clueless, just some. Though Ginny is bright, she did turn a blind eye to Ron's shortcoming - as some siblings do out of love.

midnightshadows2005.09.11 - 01:01AM40: “Forced Exuberance and Pointless Sentimentality”Signed
You almost had me on the edge of sanity with antisipation of this chapter, once again however it was worth the wait. The inner conflict Hermione is having is rather ammusing as well as being someting that we all can relate to. I remember having to deal with something where I felt like that so its great to see that you can put a real naturalism into the story. Now the next chapter is really going to be interesting. Will Hermione come out and say that she knows its Snape and warn him? I think not...at least not right away. Kept it up your story is great releif at the moment cause i have nasty exams.

Author's Response: If you are on the edge of your seat, I recommend putting some padding on the floor in case you fall off your chair. ;-) Thanks, I'm glad you found Hermione's internal coflict realistic and relatable. Next chapter will still focus on Hermione dealing witha lot of her struggle. You'll have to wait until chapter 41 before she meets up with Snape again.

lemonade82005.09.10 - 11:50PM40: “Forced Exuberance and Pointless Sentimentality”Signed
*put this in the wrong chapter* ....sorry........ but it's here now.------------------Wow, Bill is on her side, too!! Woo hoo!! And I'm so glad that she is becoming accustomed to the fact that it is Severus that she is in love with. She's coming along quite convincingly with that situation, as I suspected she would. Who would just throw away Severus just because of the distsant past?? She's too smart to do that, especially with her disappointing marriage to the 'right' guy. What IS getting me a bit... worried?? concerned?? suspicious about a big confrontation??? Okay, Ron is supposedly over at the Potters' house under the impression that Hermione is doing housework. Hermione is ending up in a room at the Leaky Cauldron, where Rosmerta- no matter what she said to Hermione earlier- was a bit surprised when Hermione said her husband worked as keeper for the Cannons... so will she find out that Ron isn't over at the Potters?? I mean... in canon he had a thing for Rosmerta.. Never mind. You couldn't tell me if he was anyway. ;oD No no no.... don't chastise me for suspecting Ron of being a skirt chaser. Or a Seeker chaser, or Chaser chaser. I will suspect no matter how many protestations. Even if you write that he's had his tallywhacker magically removed for the past year. I will still suspect he's had an affair without your knowledge, Betz!!! ;oD Can't wait to find out what you ACTUALLY have prepared for the next chapter, although seeing her with Snape in the chapter after will be hard to compete with. You couldn't post about four chapters next time, could you?? Oh well. Never hurts to ask.

Author's Response: Don't worry aobut it. I say the other review you left in chapter 1. The way I check my reviews, I see them no matter which chapter you left them in. Yes, Bill is quite a nice guy. He has much more common sense. I think that he got double the allotment, so that none was left for Ron.

Wait a mintue. Herione is stil ocnvinced she can't be in lvoe with Snape. She can maybe admit - reluctantly - that she is or was physically attracted to him, but is having a hard time accepting the fact she could love *SNAPE*. I know. Stupid of her, but she's ahving a bit of a black and white thing going on - putting people into little boxes to keep her mind nice and orderly. This is some messy business that she's dealing with.

Ron is over at the Potters helping mind the kids. Really. So you think Ron is a Golden Snatch Chaser? Could be. Hermione will meet with Snape in chapter 41, so you have one more chapter to slog through before you get to what you are dying to know.

I can only post two chapters at a time, as Ashwinder has a 2-in-the-queue submission limit. I could post four at a time, but then there would be updates at only one fourth the frequency.

lemonade82005.09.10 - 11:44PM1: "The Pub"Signed
Wow, Bill is on her side, too!! Woo hoo!! And I'm so glad that she is becoming accustomed to the fact that it is Severus that she is in love with. She's coming along quite convincingly with that situation, as I suspected she would. Who would just throw away Severus just because of the distsant past?? She's too smart to do that, especially with her disappointing marriage to the 'right' guy. What IS getting me a bit... worried?? concerned?? suspicious about a big confrontation??? Okay, Ron is supposedly over at the Potters' house under the impression that Hermione is doing housework. Hermione is ending up in a room at the Leaky Cauldron, where Rosmerta- no matter what she said to Hermione earlier- was a bit surprised when Hermione said her husband worked as keeper for the Cannons... so will she find out that Ron isn't over at the Potters?? I mean... in canon he had a thing for Rosmerta.. Never mind. You couldn't tell me if he was anyway. ;oD No no no.... don't chastise me for suspecting Ron of being a skirt chaser. Or a Seeker chaser, or Chaser chaser. I will suspect no matter how many protestations. Even if you write that he's had his tallywhacker magically removed for the past year. I will still suspect he's had an affair without your knowledge, Betz!!! ;oD Can't wait to find out what you ACTUALLY have prepared for the next chapter, although seeing her with Snape in the chapter after will be hard to compete with. You couldn't post about four chapters next time, could you?? Oh well. Never hurts to ask.

m1232005.09.10 - 11:42PM40: “Forced Exuberance and Pointless Sentimentality”Signed
**Hermione's "guest" wouldn't happen to be Malfoy, would it? **She has had so much thrown on her this weekend. And she can't even talk about it with Calleo-Snape. Did she really marry Ron so that she wouldn't be alone for the rest of her life? She might have been better off and probably less miserable than her present situation. Anyway, now that she's had some time to think about it, she's not angry with him anymore. It was very timely that Calleo extracted that promise about Hermione's friendship with him on Thursday. Otherwise, I don't think she would have gone back, would she? And really Snape's only lied to her to hide who he is. I do hope snape's going to make his feelings or something known to Hermione. Obviously she still thinks that he is mean and cruel etc....One thing I am worried about though is that when the time comes to tell Hermione to steal Polyjuice potion ingredients, will she fell used? That Snape only tolerated her till he could get her to do the job? **Molly Weasley is EVIL. Those things she did were soo not nice. I don't like her. **Ron trashing time: He is such an oaf. So idiotic. He disguts me. Ugh!!! **That's it for this review. Fabulous chapters once again. I simply cannot wait for more. So please update soon. ;-)

Author's Response: Hmmm, might be Malfoy, might not. You'll have to wait and see. Don't worry, chapter 40 is on the way soon and should be posted this week, probably validated in time for the weekend. Nope, Hermione can't talk about this with anyone. She's going solo on this one. Yes, Hermione acepted Ron's proposal thinking that if she didn't accept, she night never have another proposal for marriage - haivng noting how young most witches and wizards get married. And if she didn't accept now, what was the likelihood of finding another single wizard? Another one she had a history of freindship too? Other than Krum and Ron...what other wizard has bothered pursuing her? She's convinced that she's not hot property. Of course Hermione will feel used when it comes time to discuss her usefulness to Snape, but we'll see how things unfold between Hermione and Severus, if she can get past that fact or not. Molly is not intentionally malicious, she's just a controlling, domineering mother who think she knows what's best for her children. She's doing this out of love to make sure her children are safe and set up in a comfortable situation where they will never be for want of things - be it love or money. Ron...Ron is Ron. 'Nuff said. More on the way soon.

queenp2005.09.10 - 11:29PM40: “Forced Exuberance and Pointless Sentimentality”Signed
Is she going to speak to Lavender??? This is an excellent chapter, as always...more please!!

Author's Response: Could be she's going to see Lavender. We'll just have to wait and see. Thank you, more is on the way.

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