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cocoachristy2005.06.22 - 10:08PM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Well, well, well! Ron masterbating two times during the night? Is Lavender trying her sex potions on him to try and make him a better lover?? Tee hee! I loved the visual of Severus with nail polish on his toes..tff! Is Ginny trying to get Hermione to trust her enough to tell her about her Calleo visits???? And, I am ready for Hermione to figure out he is Snape!! (I know, be patient!) I can't wait for him to see her in her new robes! ;-)

Author's Response: Yeah Ron is masturbating two times a night. He's only 23. No, Lavender is not testing sex potions on him. He's jsut...horny and refusing to touch his wife cause he's still pissed at her for calling him a lousy lay. Yeah, that illustration is pretty funny. Mel added the nail polish part and I couldn't pass it up. Ginny *could* be trying to get Hermione to open up about her visits to Calleo. Yes, yes, we all want the air cleared and for Severus to come clean with Hermione, but Severus has his own reasons for wanting to delay and Hermione will have her own reasons not to confront him. Patience, my young padawan.

justme2005.06.22 - 04:32PM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Oh I was SOOOOO hoping they would run inton each other at the spa!!!! PLease , oh please, oh please................ok enough begging, its your party but Ill cry if I want to :)

Author's Response: Yes...it would have ben convenient if they ran into each other at the spa - and Severus without his mask, too! But it wasn't meant to be. Go ahead and cry, but it won't hapen anyway. You'll have to just wait.

Barbara2005.06.22 - 03:37PM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Oh my, lots of tension in this chapter; Draco and Severus with facial masks and nail polish were sort of a comic relief in between.
Are the counselling sessions starting soon, now that Hermione knows whom to contact? I'm really waiting for some issues to be solved there.
I think Ginny's being unfair to load even more secrets on Hermione's shoulders. Can't she see how hard it is for Hermione between her friends? I just waonder what her (your) motives are
And when Severus came, he swore he could hear Hermione whisper his alias, 'Calleo.' That's just sooo romantic.


Author's Response: Tension? You think this chapter had tension?!? Just wait til chapter 30, honey. I'll show you tension! Counseling sessions will begin in chapter 33 or 34 (I'm writing chapter 32 right now).

Yes, Ginny is being unfair to unload another secret on Hermione's shoulders, but she had her reasons for doing it. When someone shares a secret with you...don't you feel compelled to share one back? Hmmm?

I'm glad you like the whispering of his name. You can almost hear her cry it out under a strangled gasp, her desire drawing Severus across teh spa into her fantasy and much as Severus' desire pulling her to his cubicle.

Sniv2005.06.22 - 03:02PM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
I hope your beta will be alright! I'm sorry to hear that. Glad to see an update here though! =)

Author's Response: Yes, I hope my beta's life will be better now. More on the way soon, I hope.

justme2005.06.22 - 02:27PM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Another lovely chapter, especially the part about Malfoy Jr. and Lockhart having a child....spawn was a very telling name LOL

Author's Response: Thanks. I was hoping ot convey just was a big fat jerk the guy is.

joots2005.06.22 - 01:17PM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Ah, another glorious chapter. I do hope everything is ok for your Beta. How I've missed this story- I'm so glad this chapter is here! Thank you! Wonderful development, I loved how they were in the same building without knowing it... This chapter leaves me wondering if Hermione will open up to Ginny any time soon about her meetings. I really can't wait for another chapter! :)

Author's Response: Kindest thanks! Yes, I hope my beta is doing better too. Yes, I really liked how they were both there...but Severus knew she was there, having informed Draco and Severus she was taking Hermione there before. Severus just didn't know Hermione was masturbating and thinking of him the same time he was of her. We will see if or when Hermione decides to spill the beans.

Sooz2005.06.22 - 12:43PM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Could actually give you a semi-intelligent review, but is impossible while doing a happy dance! I am so glad you updated, but terribly sorry that one of your betas is having a horrible time right now. Great chapter. Nearly fell over at the thought of nail polish on Severus and Draco. Thanks so much for the update.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed th illustration to go with the chapter. Be sure to leave a lovely review for Melanie, especially since the nail polish was her idea...I just asked her to draw them covered in towels with goop on their faces.

anyah_daoc2005.06.22 - 11:47AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
I habe thoroughly enjoyed your piece thus far. Thankyou for sharing this wonderful story with us. I also have enjoyed the periodic art piece to supplement the story. Kudos for the most recent. Severus, a fcial and nail polish was just hilarious.

Author's Response: Thanks. The facial goo was my idea, the nail polish was Melanie's, so be sure to leave Melanie a lovely review for her fabulous artwork on her site.

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