Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| pickles | 2005.02.08 - 10:55AM | 16: “In the Heat of the Night” | Signed |
| great chapter. glad she curbed her curosity this time. then again it would have been neat for them to meet up an have a cup of java. thank you for the wonderful updates. |
| Jelaine99 | 2005.02.07 - 02:39PM | 7: "I'm A Bad Little Hufflepuff!" | Signed |
| Toooooo bits...lol....lovin the story.... |
| Jelaine99 | 2005.02.07 - 12:40PM | 2: A Life More Than ‘Mione | Signed |
| Lovin it so far Betz! Love the Chupacabra bile....lol! |
| LadyJade86 | 2005.02.05 - 11:58PM | 16: “In the Heat of the Night” | Signed |
| Great chapter! I love that Hermione finnaly told Ron that he was lousy in bed. That was something she wanted to tell him for a long time. Very good. Very good.
I hope you update soon, but i understand that you are busy. |
| WardenofMagick | 2005.02.05 - 08:25PM | 16: “In the Heat of the Night” | Signed |
| Update soon, for the love of COOKIE.
A suggestion, if I may? A chapter or two from what Harry and Ron are thinking. To make their characters more 3-D. For instance, what each thinks silently about sex with their wives.
If it doesn't fit, no worries but I'd appreciate if you would think about it. |
| Rosewings | 2005.02.05 - 05:08PM | 16: “In the Heat of the Night” | Signed |
| Yay!Hmmm...very interesting!Once again,you end the chapter at the most interesting times!Hermione was so close to finding out her gigolo's identity as well!
Anyway,I loved it and I thought the part when Hermione through the juice in Ron's eyes was excelent! ^_^ Sorry for all of the exclamtion marks... |
| RachelW | 2005.02.05 - 02:11AM | 16: “In the Heat of the Night” | Signed |
And I just realised that what I said about the challenge might not have come off well (it's late and I'm not thinking straight). But, it's really interresting the vast diversity that can come off a challenge (you're making me re-consider my thoughts on not writing, or at least not posting what I've written for a story for my own WIKTT challenge).
Author's Response: Well, I was hoping for any story with this challenge. Since everyone was going the quick path to a fast end, I thought I would take the senic route. One of the rules I laid down was the request for "anticipation"...am I giving you enough with thei story? I love a long story with lots of lead up time, UST and anticipation. I think that sort of tension lends beautifully to a story where there is a possibility of sex and romance. I took no offense at your earlier statement. This challenge does sort of call for a major dose of smut, but I thought I would do a nice long story, as I wanted to do something with some meat to it. I'm glad you're enjoying this fic. |
| Horserider | 2005.02.05 - 01:55AM | 16: “In the Heat of the Night” | Signed |
| Just had to stop by and re-visit this one...can't wait to see what happens next! One of the best snipes aimed at Ron I've yet seen! :D ~HR |
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