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Dryad2017.05.17 - 11:37PM128: Epilogue: "Darling, Something Has Come Between Us"Signed
As one dragging-out-over-years -til-no -one-thought-I'd-finish author to another, congratulations. Almost seemed like 2 books, but engaging from beginning to end, and one of only 2 long standing WIPs I really, really wanted to see complete. (Imhiliens choice of roads being the other). Thank you for making the wish come true!

PaigeNoelle2017.04.13 - 05:05AM95: "Petals, Potions, and Pele" Part ISigned
Oh no! No no no no no! You're breaking my heart! It's 2am and I need to go to bed but I can't stop reading now! But I'm afraid that it'll just get worse and then I'll have to go to sleep eventually at a horrible stopping point. I need something good to happen dammit! (I am loving this by the way. I just need them to get their shit together already!)

orionlee2017.04.08 - 01:50AM128: Part II “Vivieron Felices Y Comieron Codero Y Salmón"Signed
Thank you for completing the epic story!

alistair132017.04.03 - 07:02PM53: “Waiting For the Gods of Weather to Smile”Signed
I hate that Hermione is a homophobe.

Author's Response: Hermione is not homophobic. She is having a very visceral reaction to the fact that not only is her husband is cheating on her, she's cheating on her with another man. Granted, it's hypocritical for the fact she's having an affair with Severus, but she - until that moment - had no idea Ron would ever cheat on her. Her rage is seeking some way to vent, and nasty names, even awful names that allude to Ron's sexuality, is part of how she is processing this. If Ron had been caught having sex with another woman, Hermione would be still be having a fit, but Hermione feels as if she has been lied to by Ron concealing his preference for men, and then further betrayed by having sex with a man, damaging the perception of her femininity.

Bacyla2017.04.03 - 02:30PM128: Epilogue: "Darling, Something Has Come Between Us"Signed
You have my eternal gratitude for writing this story. It was amazing. I love that you let Fred to live! I love all the details. I loved it when i was 17 and there were only 53 chapters, which i have read and reread for at least 15 times, and i love it now when i'm 26. I was more than thrilled last year when you announced that you will continue updating this amazing story. It makes me sad that it has come to an end, but at least our favorite couple will have their happily ever after. Bravo! -applauds and whistles like a crazy woman-

Rema2017.04.03 - 10:50AM128: Epilogue: "Darling, Something Has Come Between Us"Signed
Fantastic story! I love your original characters. So sad that it`s over. Thank you!

MistressCosmos2017.04.01 - 08:36PM128: Epilogue: "Darling, Something Has Come Between Us"Signed
Finally found this story again and got to finish reading it! I have to point out my one pet peeve with the story, and that is the reference to Hermione as being "tight". A woman who is aroused becomes looser. A tight vagina actually means she's uncomfortable and not aroused enough. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story and recipes!

Author's Response: My reference to Hermione being tight is the fact that Ron is so small, he hasn't "stretched" her out. Now, I know a woman's vagina can accommodate and stretch to various sizes and due to estrogen, elasticity, but also, a woman can be very tight when her pelvic region is engorged with blood due to high level of arousal (based on personal experience too). I have personally found that starting off with an orgasm or two before intercourse can cause quite a bit of snugness for the man.

alistair132017.04.01 - 11:17AM30: “Teach Me Tonight"Signed
This story could use some serious editing. I'm 30 chapters in, and she still hasn't done anything about her marriage or job. I can see 8 chapters of no plot movement, but this is starting to feel like the same chapter rewritten 30 times. Move already!

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