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Reviews for Lay Me Low

mlmonty2011.02.10 - 09:56PM10: Nine: Take Me For LongingSigned
Fantastically written!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Maria2011.02.10 - 06:51PM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
I'm glad I've continued reading........this is shapely up really, really erotically. Wow.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, but please remember, it's not for Sirius fans!

Maria2011.02.10 - 06:21PM1: PrologueSigned
Hmmm, even though this is marked as AU, I can't buy Sirius being abusive towards anyone, let alone one of his godson's best friends. It's completely OOC when compared to the canon. However this is very well written so far and I'm curious, so I'll continue reading even though the premise really squicks me.

Author's Response: Well, you're about to be really squicked! I will tell you, this is not a happy tale for Sirius fans. Unfortunately, I didn't write a nice Sirius, and he's not about to change!

Half Blood Outcast2011.02.10 - 11:32AM10: Nine: Take Me For LongingSigned
I've said it before and I'll say it again. I absolutely adore the way you write Severus and Hermione. It's so tragic and my heart aches for them and it takes a helluva good writer to draw responses like that out of me. So wonderful job, and I'm can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have never done such an in-depth story before, and at times I've really suffered a crisis of faith. Thank you for restoring it with your warm and encouraging words. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

ladyjulian2011.02.10 - 01:55AM10: Nine: Take Me For LongingSigned
I haven't got anything profound to say except thank you - this is fine work.

Author's Response: Your words are enough for me. thank you.

Remarkable2011.02.09 - 09:42PM10: Nine: Take Me For LongingSigned
Wow, this is just fantastic. It must be tough to write with her still in school and all the other crap going on around them too with Umbridge and the like. I haven't attempted a Hermione in school fic yet. Still chicken! I love Snape's voice and the fact that she abused the time turner to listen to the same lecture over and over again! So nice! And then she slept for days, and stole more food and exercised it off ha ha! He is just so fragile underneath and now that she's tapped into his emotions he seems to just realize now how much he needs her, has always needed someone like her to shore him up and make him stronger too. I hope he doesn't balls it up! Good idea too with the blood bonding!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I think the two of them are well suited, but life can sometimes get in the way. It's about to get a whole lot tougher before it gets easier! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your encouragement very much.

aliciana2011.02.09 - 06:48PM10: Nine: Take Me For LongingSigned
Lovely, in-depth chapter, Teddy, seeing their relationship gently blossom and grow. I particularly enjoyed how he was going to relish being her "first" at everything. And honestly, girl, the fantastic emphasis you put on the seductive magic of his voice just keeps taking me back...and back...and back! How can I thank you enough? Oh I am a lucky girl. I see and hear AR in the flesh, my daughter is now waxing lyrical about Lucius's (JI's) gorgeous blue eyes and I have your stories to read. And I'm going to the Manchester derby at the weekend in my husband's company's box. Up the Reds! I think Sev would have been a Red either that or Oldham Athletic fan. Anyway.....another chapter ASAP please. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Author's Response: Ali, as always, I glow to know you have enjoyed a chapter. I will admit, the 'firsts' part is my favourite, and you are the first to mention it, and I thank you. I thought that really gives another dimension to the character, that he would approach it almost reverently. How can you thank me enough? By continuing to read, and hopefully enjoy. You are one of the reasons I want my writing to be good, you have been with me since my first (Spellbreaker), and you have always been so encouraging. Thank you. Have a great time at the Derby - Up the Reds!!

Rema2011.02.09 - 06:04PM10: Nine: Take Me For LongingSigned
Thank you for the long and wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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