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Reviews for Lay Me Low

yoursarin2011.02.04 - 12:21AM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
I love that your writing uses such raw emotions. I like to see Hermione yell and shout every once and awhile. I was angry for her!

Author's Response: We all have to get it out of our systems....

severus492011.02.03 - 10:16PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
I concur with Vera, I can't figure out why Dumbledore wouldn't use Legillimency on her. I guess it's easier to believe the man who allowed him to use Grimmauld for headquarters couldn't be all that bad. After all, Dumbledore's always had a soft spot for the Marauders. But now I find myself wondering what Sirius is going to do now that he knows Hermione ratted him out.

Author's Response: Sometimes the truth isn't as important as the agenda....

verasuspense2011.02.03 - 08:31PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
"I despise you, Potter" Oh, there must have been a sweet satisfaction in saying those words for Severus ! "She watched him walk away". I LOVE to watch him walk away, with his robes billowing dramatically. What is up with AD ? He's supposedly a great Legilimens, so how can he doubt that Hermione is telling the truth ? I'm glad Severus reamed him a new one. Evil Cliffie ! I hope its just Hermione having a nightmare.

Author's Response: Sometimes, we don't want to know the truth, or the truth isn't as important as the agenda. And sometimes, you have to wait through two chapters to find out what the eville cliffie is all about, because the writer is eville!!! Muhahaha! Thanks so much for the review, vera!

Tangerine Dream2011.02.03 - 05:33PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
Go Severus!! I am glad he stood up to Dumbledore! But what an evil cliffie!!

Author's Response: I know...I'm such a little tinker.... hee hee

Rema2011.02.03 - 05:25PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
Evil cliffie!

Author's Response: I know!

Fizzabella2011.02.03 - 05:25PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
The suspense is exquisite:) You're very talented at evoking emotions and painting pictures with words:) Fizzabella

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fizzabella! Now, if I can just find a beta, I think things will much improve.

aliciana2011.02.03 - 05:06PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
Way to go Sev! Definitely time that someone kicked DD's arse.Oooh Teddy....all that lovely winching....old Scots word for snogging. Sometimes it's more erotic than explicit lemons. I love that expression. Had never heard of it before I started reading fanfic. So..... he'd be willing to dump them all in exchange for Hermione. I don't blame him. She's right in that no one else cares for him. Brilliant chapter Teddy. Right I'm off to Edinburgh tomorrow for the weekend to visit Daughter Number Two. You know the one that's been looking after Mr Malfoy's caffeine intake for the last few months. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Author's Response: Never fear, Ali love....there'll be plenty of winching and lemons....and lemony winching....and winching lemons.... Yes, I sort of loved the winching scene myself!

talesofsnape2011.02.03 - 04:37PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
You, young lady, are a damned tease! Is Hermione having a weird dream because her mind is vulnerable after Occlumency practice? Or is she in serious danger? If Sirius is the one chasing her and she thinks she's going to fall foul of that vow, then hell is about to break free on earth when Severus arrives. Actually, if she's dreaming but scared enough for it to activate their scars then hell is probably about to break loose on earth when he comes charging into the Gryffindor girls' dormitory. Squishes you!

Author's Response: And the evil part is that you won't find out until chapter 10! Muhahahaha!!!!!

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