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shuldham2011.03.05 - 03:20AM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
I rather think a very loud ,wow, is in order. Fantastic chapter, brilliant characterisation and dialogue. Keep the chapters coming. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank YOU! I really appreciate your feedback.

Kermit 12011.03.04 - 11:53PM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
I had to do it! I had to read this chapter again and marvel at the power of your words. This has to be the most powerful, deep to the soul chapters I have ever read. I might yet read it again; and review again, and again. I'm speechless; you've created such a deep level of emotion- such pathos! that has made this the pivotal place in your story. Thanks for a good read! Again!

Author's Response: Kermit, I thank you very much for being so encouraging. I am at a low point - I've just lost my two betas, and my alpha is so busy I hate to put so much pressure on her, so your positive words are a balm to the spirit! The next chapter is a transitional chapter - so it's a little bit of a train ride from one holiday destination to the other. You know, pleasant enough, but not really as much fun as getting there! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. And feel free to write as much as you want - I'll always reply!

severus492011.03.04 - 11:07PM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
Now, that's a really good idea! She's become his airtight alibi! His love-slave, his mudblood pet, his savior, his strongest ally and soon will be his wife. Oh, that girl is so smart! She really has Dumbledore by the balls on this!

Author's Response: I'm liking the way you think !!!

mlmonty2011.03.04 - 10:25PM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
Loving this more and more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

braye272011.03.04 - 09:24PM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
This chapter has a bit of everything: good loving, good news, and an incredibly foolish old wizard. Severus and Hermione have been blessed with the opportunity to lavish love on each other, and now Poppy has pronounced her well and even provided her with a contraceptive potion for her and Severus' celebration. But now Dumbledore has rained on their parade getting himself cursed, and I think he is about to ask something of Severus, and by association, Hermione that means the two of them will be asked to pay for Albus' foolishness. Now I'm off to find out what happens next. Thanks, Beth

Author's Response: Thank you, Bethie, for always encouraging me, especially when I've lost all my betas!! I will be trying to get the next chapter uploaded soon, I promise. It's getting crazy now.

JunoMagic2011.03.04 - 06:34PM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
I love Hermione in this chapter. And the ending is absolutely FTW!

Author's Response: I'm not sure what FTW is, but I hope it's good...

Sampdoria2011.03.04 - 05:21PM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
Brilliant update, I really loved that Severus told Hermione what Albus demanded of him, only when aknowlegding the problem, one can figth it. I also loved how Hermione fougth for her man, a true lioness, not to mention making her a woman, not a girl. I am very much looking forward to see how the marriage works into Hermiones plans.

Author's Response: Me too! lol I hope I can keep it all together. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

NNNN2011.03.04 - 05:21PM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
Wow, what an exiting chapter. Yay for a headstrong Hermione! And I really did not see that ending coming.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

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