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jenidralph2012.06.07 - 09:08PM34: Thirty Three: Take Me, I'm YoursSigned
I love that the scars are gone. Thank you so much for bringing me back from all the tears you've caused with the previous chapters.

Author's Response: Thank YOU for hanging in there with this story! I have just uploaded chapter 34, so hopefully there will be more to enjoy soon!

s50m2012.06.07 - 04:09PM27: Twenty Six: The Ballad of Regulus BlackSigned
Poor Regulus. And I'm very intrigued to hear that Severus's Dark Mark is almost completely faded. Won't Voldemort sense its disappearance on his servant?

Author's Response: At this point, Voldemort is too wrapped up in his own delusions of grandeur, but a time will come....

s50m2012.06.07 - 03:29PM26: Twenty Five: The Space BetweenSigned
That was a very creative idea for restoring Hermione's soul. I'm glad that everything seems back to normal between Severus and Hermione (or as "normal" as they can manage under the circumstances)...

Author's Response: Thank you - I had started with a very different premise, and Jules, my beta, said, "no, you can't do that!" so it took a lot of rethinking, but I was very happy with it afterward.

s50m2012.06.07 - 02:27PM25: Twenty Four: Among These Dark Satanic MillsSigned
So Hermione had agreed to kill Dumbledore the day he gave her the bag of Galleons as a blessing for their marriage? I always did wonder what all that "insurance" talk was about.

Author's Response: Yes, they had made lots of deals that day! But Hermione couldn't allow Severus to do it. That was one bridge too far, in my opinion, and I hated Dumbledore ever after I found out what he'd forced Severus to do.

s50m2012.06.07 - 12:11PM24: Twenty Three: Revenge Is A Dish Best ServedSigned
WOW! This was - without a doubt - the most emotionally intense chapter in the story. Even after I finished reading it, my mind is still reeling from all of the revelations - Harry learning about Hermione's relationship with Severus, Albus playing "hard ball" with Severus and Hermione to get what he wants, Harry arguing with Hermione, Albus pleading for Severus's forgiveness before his death, Severus realizing that the deadly potion Albus is going to drink was created by him, and then, the biggest stunner, that Hermione killed Dumbledore! I was SO not expecting that surprise, but it makes so much sense. I am on tenterhooks in anticipation of what will happen next. Although I am sad that Hermione has cast an Unforgivable, I like the fact that she has done the one thing that might finally convince Severus of her deep love for him.

Author's Response: Thank you so much - this was a wild ride - my poor beta nearly had a nervous breakdown trying to get through it! I'm so glad you are enjoying this story. Your comments are so wonderful and encouraging - I can't tell you how much I appreciate them.

s50m2012.06.07 - 11:19AM23: Twenty Two: How To Out-Slytherin a SlytherinSigned
The "behind the scenes" glimpses that you're giving us regarding the conversations between Albus and Severus are most enlightening. Whereas the readers had to imagine Snape's mental state while reading HBP and DH, you have given us a captivating peek into what those discussions and his thoughts might have actually been. This Snape-centric point of view only makes me sadder for his character; no wonder he was so cross throughout the school years, knowing what was in store for him. My only hope for this story is that you give Snape a happy ending.

Author's Response: This story has taken on a life of its own. When I started, I had no idea what direction it would take. Now that I'm almost at the end, I have a better idea, but I don't want to give away anything yet. I will say that I'm not the sort of reader who is very happy to read this many chapters and go away unhappy about it. I hope that helps! ;)

s50m2012.06.07 - 10:49AM22: Twenty One: Heaven From OneSigned
I really liked how you inserted Hermione in the canon Sectumsempra scene with Harry and Draco. She was very clever to use that opportunity for Severus's and her advantage in their grand plot of deception. I am just so taken with your depiction of tender, loving Severus - he is so sensual and erotic. The last scene of the chapter was perfect. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's funny; these are chapters that I haven't visited in awhile, and when you speak of them, I feel a real flush of pride that I've written them. I'm so honoured that you are taking the time to read and comment on this story.

s50m2012.06.07 - 09:39AM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
I love how Severus's scars are continuously fading; that is such a special plot point that signifies his personal development leading him farther from the Dark and toward the Light. Love really is redeeming for him! Superb work, as always! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. This is a very important part of this story, and will be even more significant as time goes on. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews of this story.

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