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| aliciana | 2011.01.31 - 09:52AM | 8: Seven: No Life I Own, No Liberty | Signed |
| Communication, Teddy. That's what keeps relationships on track. That and honesty. This chapter was poignantly reminiscent of "The Prince's Tale" but at least Severus was able to ensure that totally all of his side was given. And now, that bastard, Black is, well I suppose turning the (recent) tables a bit in accusing Severus of attempting to do what he wants to do also. I.E. Hermione. You've also made things a bit creepy in your portrayal of Remus. I had sort of guessed that he too was enamoured with her (or God forbid in your story) happy to share her with Sirius. Now then I've read and enjoyed many of those threesome PWP romps but not in this situation that you have created. I think you'll agree that if YOUR Remus and Sirius were to want to go down that avenue it would just be very wrong. Not in a plotline way but more in terms of the characters' personalities and traits. I'm not sure I'm explaining myself very clearly Teddy. You've got a very mature, grown-up feel/vibe going to this story and long may it continue. But then that is your writing all over. In the words of the super-model "Me likey a lot". Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx. Author's Response: Ali, thank you for your thoughtful review. I will tell you that I have no intention of a three-way. I merely meant to convey that all three men had realised Hermione's potential, and considered each other rivals for it. Actually, Remus will be seen very little (if at all ) in this tale. This is a story about Betrayal and trust, and Hermione's coming of age. I will take a look at that part of the story, and possibly edit if this point about Remus needs to be clarified. I'm not into 3-ways in fanfic. Now, my original erotic fiction is a totally different story... hee hee | |||
| Rema | 2011.01.31 - 03:39AM | 8: Seven: No Life I Own, No Liberty | Signed |
| I could cheerfully strangle Sirius right now! Author's Response: Couldn't we all?? | |||
| crooks123 | 2011.01.31 - 12:12AM | 2: One: Not Enough Fingers To Count The Cost | Signed |
| still reading your story, only read the 1st chapter so far but i HAD to review and say i love your authors note. please keep building a better world.! lol :) <3 Author's Response: I'm doing my utmost. | |||
| Kermit 1 | 2011.01.30 - 09:19PM | 8: Seven: No Life I Own, No Liberty | Signed |
| Oh, what an emotional chapter! I have lost respect for the Dumbledore in this story. How dare he be so one-sided. And Harry... I think it's time for Hermione to burst his bubble. About Severus' and Hermione's scene- it was amazing. Great update! Author's Response: Thank you, Kermit. I hope to upload the next chapter soon! | |||
| Fizzabella | 2011.01.30 - 05:51PM | 8: Seven: No Life I Own, No Liberty | Signed |
| This was an amazing chapter. I could SMACK Dumbledore! and Sirius Black should simply be staked out on a fire-ant hill.
I'm following this story with great interest:)
warm regards,
Fizzabella Author's Response: Fizzabella - I'm so humbled that you enjoy my work. His Muggle-Born Witch is a favourite of mine. The last chapter was so exciting. When writers whose work I admire give me such encouragement, it means more than I can say. | |||
| ANNABELLE62 | 2011.01.30 - 04:25PM | 8: Seven: No Life I Own, No Liberty | Signed |
| OOOOO HE A POUND PUPPY FOR SURE!!!OOO THE LIES!!! IM GLAD SS/HG HAVE COME TOGETHER AND ARE OF ONE MIND...KICK SIRUISS ASS!!! AND TO BE KIND TO ONE ANOTHER, AND FORGET LILY SHES DEAD THEY ARE NOT. GET ON WITH LIFE. Author's Response: Hopefully things will get easier...hmmm.... | |||
| meteoritestrike | 2011.01.30 - 12:34PM | 8: Seven: No Life I Own, No Liberty | Signed |
| Chain me down! This is one of the best ships ever! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I love your story line. Keep up the fantastic work!!!! Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. | |||
| Sampdoria | 2011.01.30 - 10:56AM | 8: Seven: No Life I Own, No Liberty | Signed |
| Oh please, please let Harry, and Dubmledort, get to know a few facts about the prescious Sirus. You will have my undying thanks if we in the next chapter get a Hermione who gets all hackled up, bossy and furiously mad, telling Harry where he can put his thick head, not to mention adoration for the fleebag that has nothing better to do than tell lies to put himself in a better ligth, not to mention forcing his attentions where it is not welcome and never will be. I an almost taste the speach I want delivered to the "holyier-than-everyone-else" prats, Harry and Dumbledort, who are unable to add two and two together without getting the wrong answear because they don't want the truth. Author's Response: Oh, I think a little conversation is due... hee hee... | |||
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