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Reviews for Lay Me Low

braye272011.06.19 - 07:41PM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
Great lord! Teddy, you've done it again... written a most amazing chapter and the ebil cliffie at the end has just about given me heartburn! I love the way Hermione's love is healing Severus, and I think it's important because he will need all the strength of body and spirit he can muster to survive what is to come. I can't believe that Harry intended to harm Hermione when he cast Sectumsempra at Draco. I don't even know if he knew what the spell would do, but he has sure played hell by harming Hermione. It's going to take all of Severus' skill to heal both of them and to stop himself from killing Harry. I wish you good writing on your Exchange fic. I'm looking forward to reading it, and I want you to write more of this story. Well done, m'dear! Beth

Author's Response: Thank you, Beth, dear! I was so afraid everyone would be disappointed in this chapter, since it took me so long to update it after it got drowned in milk! The Exchange fic is clipping along very nicely, and hopefully I'll have the framework of Chapter 21 in shape by July. Thanks for hanging in there - I hope you will continue to enjoy it. I can't believe I've been writing this story for six months now!

la petite mule2011.06.18 - 12:10PM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
Devil, devil author ! What a way to hang your readers up. I love you more for that... Until next update. Good luck for the exchange challenge, you're the best !

Author's Response: Thank you so much, le petite - I am sorry to leave my readers in such a predicament. I promise to update as soon as I finish the exchange fic, which should be in a couple of weeks.

moonlitjune2011.06.18 - 04:25AM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
Fuck Teddy. For you I broke down and did something I never do, read a WIP. And it ends there! Her bleeding all over the bathroom!!! But, yet again you craft a tale that has me spellbound. I truly believe in their love. I do have moments where this skirts the age issue a little close for me. I have family that were sexually abused as children, and I can be a little sensitive. Which means it's strange for me to love a pairing with such an age difference, but I can usually handle it. I have stopped reading stories before because she was underage. His words in the heat of passion bothered me in this chapter. I just have to acknowledge that this Severus it's at the very edge of what I can handle. I love the scale of this, all these years building. That's the reason for her youth, I get it. I'm excited to see how this continues to blend in with the rest of the books. I will gladly go on any journey you take me on. Oh and, MORE MORE MORE!!!! ;) -violet.

Author's Response: First of all, thank you, Violet for giving the story a chance. If I am to be perfectly honest, this was a story that started out going in one direction for me, but DMuse had other plans. I realise it is a little close to the edge for many readers, and I appreciate your patience in letting the story tell itself. The fact that you said you truly believe in their love is so gratifying, because that is all that I wanted to do in this story - give them a reason to live for one another, and Severus a reason to live, period. Thank you for sticking with it, and I hope it will continue to give you pleasure. And thank you for reading a WIP against your principles - I promise that I will never abandon one of my stories - I have to see them to the end, whether bitter or sweet! ;) Right now, I'm in the middle of the LJ Exchange, which has a deadline, and as soon as that is done I will devote my full attention to completing this story.

verasuspense2011.06.17 - 09:57AM1: PrologueSigned
I was a bit puzzled by the first scene , where Severus watches Hermione sleep, since I couldn't figure out if she was in the dungeons or the Infirmary or if he was in her dormitory. This is fifth year, which makes Hermione only sixteen ( Her birthday is in September, so she is older than the rest of her year.) Sirius is a dirty dog :-)

Author's Response: He is indeed... but it isn't Sirius ;)

aliosio2011.06.17 - 01:09AM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
Ohhh that was plain evil :( I hope the bext chapter is just as good. Was definitly worth the wait!

Author's Response: Thank you - I will try not to be so long between updates, so look for Chap 21 in the next couple of weeks - as soon as I finish my exchange fic.

adelgado2011.06.16 - 11:53AM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
WOW evil chilfy. thanks for sharing . am LOVING it

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Rema2011.06.16 - 04:14AM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
Love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Aysha2011.06.15 - 11:03PM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
f***ing hell, cruelest cliff hanger ever!!!!!!!!!!!! please tell me you're going to update soon!! don't torture us like this. This was an amazing chapter. It's always good to see an author capture the depth of despair Severus must have felt during that year. Not everyone can do that this well, so congrats! ^^ It's because of writers like you that I'm sitting here at 1a.m. reading fanfiction when I should be sleeping to be able to go to my classes tomorrow morning!! bad Teddy. XD

Author's Response: I'm very sorry, I am a bad Teddy - my Muse tells me that all the time - usually right before spanking me ;) I do have an exchange fic to complete and it has a deadline, so I need to take care of that first, but Chat21 will hopefully be up in the next couple-3 weeks. Thank you for reading, and for not giving up on me!

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