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Jensteed2015.03.31 - 05:50PM14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their WingsSigned
Ugh, got dragged away by RL (the selfish prick, lmao) Poor girl, thinking Severus would ever desire or care for her less purely because of a scar. That doesn't make her vain, it's just a human fear. Girls are taught that they should be soft and pretty, but how in the hell is that all that would attract Severus Snape? She is far more than the flesh that binds her together and he craves it all, every iota that makes her who she is. These two were made for each other, thank you for bringing them together...and for sticking Pomona in at the side, I adore her, such a fantastic character. She takes absolutely no shit from anyone, and after this I'm sure she's seen everything imaginable at that school, haha.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I fear we are all victims of the ideals of perfection. Sometimes men are as well, but somehow I just don't think Severus would be.

Jensteed2015.03.26 - 10:48AM8: Seven: No Life I Own, No LibertySigned
Her strength and insight is incredible. I mean I can never resist a sweetly naive little Hermione, but her pure strength of will is incredible. Standing up to Severus in his own quarters and staring him down, refusing to be chased off. She was beautiful and inspiring, a true lioness. And ugh, once again Sirius acts the maggot. What an utterly abhorrent pillock!!

Author's Response: LOL Thank you! I was accused of making her a Manic Pixie Dream Girl in this fic by someone. I didn't agree (at the time I didn't even know what one was), but I do like her to be strong and sensible.

Jensteed2015.03.26 - 10:20AM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
"popping a very, very sweet, juicy little Hermione-flavoured cherry." *drool* I love that line, it's just so wickedly delicious, hehe ;) Sirius can piss off back to Azkaban for all I care, never liked the guy though he can be amusing in some fics. Although I suppose I should be grateful to him for being the catalyst that threw them together...*grumble-thanksSirius-grumble* lmao

Author's Response: LOL I realise I was quite hard on poor Sirius in this fic - I've since become quite fond of him in other pairings, but yes, he was a good way to bring Severus and Hermione together.

Jensteed2015.03.26 - 09:46AM6: Five: Take Me In, Tender Woman, Sighed The SnakeSigned
Oh Teddy, how did I ever get by before I read your stories??? You have the most unique style, it's simply astounding. Bloody, bloody Dumbledore! He's such a cruel, manipulative bastard. The 'greater good my arse. It's so great to see Hermione's eyes opened to his true self, and backing Severus' corner. Merlin knows he needs every little bit of support he can get. At least he has Poppy caring for him, she's always one of my favourites :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, as always Jen. I really appreciate your kind words more than I can say.

Meg5272014.09.22 - 03:16AM39: Thirty Eight: Even The Weariest River Winds Somewhere Safe To SeaSigned
This is an absolutely wonderful story! Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

snapefan19832014.08.03 - 09:48PM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
did serius manage to fuck rape her before severus saved her i mean enter her??Hermione saw black dots swimming in front of her eyes, as lack of oxygen caused her body to shut down. She could feel Sirius forcing her thighs apart, growling, snarling, snapping at her flesh, but she was too weak to fight anymore. She just wanted to pass out and be done with this… ”Expelliarmus!" Hermione heard a furious shout and a surprised yiking sound, and the crushing weight was off her back and she could raise her head and breathe. “Finite Incantatem!” She took a deep breath and released an animal howl of pain. Powerful arms gripped her and pulled her from the floor. “Please, Sirius, DON’T!” she screamed, then realised it was Severus, his eyes snapping with fire, fury warring with his fear for her. “Severus! Oh, thank the gods!” she sobbed, and tried to throw her pain-deadened arms around him, but they were lifeless and limp. To her unbounded relief, he pulled her as close to his body as he dared without rubbing against the scratches on her back. “I tried to stop him – “

Author's Response: Okay, please. I don't mean to be rude, but please don't copy and paste large sections of the story. It's not fair to readers who wish to read the reviews in order to decide whether or not to read the story. Please stop, or I will have to report this to the mods. All your questions are in the story. I will not be answering them here.

snapefan19832014.08.03 - 08:22PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
whats all this about?? Hermione was running, running down the hall, fear giving her feet the same wings as when she had spotted Severus and thought he was a Death Eater come to attack the school. She knew this outcome would be different, and she knew he was going to be furious – if she survived. Her heart was almost bursting, and she could still hear the wizard behind her, gaining ground. She almost sobbed, feeling terror and stupidity washing over her, tainting her sweat with a bitter, caustic edge, and she knew he would sense it, and use it against her. She was so close to escaping, but, as before, her fear was making her panic, and she wasn’t thinking straight… -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ALSO is hermione and severus pretenting to liking each other and love and kiss for the dark lords sake is it all fake or is it to liking each other and love and kiss for real?? His lips were warm and soft and hungry, and fit against hers perfectly, and when his tongue begged entrance and she opened herself to him, he gasped and swooped down on her with a startlingly deep, loud moan, like a man enjoying the most delectable dessert, and to Hermione, that was exactly what he was as well. Hermione had been kissed before, but never like this. No one had ever made her body ache and shiver and burn like this. She was trembling as he teased her mouth with his tongue, and as she responded with a soft sweep of her own tongue against his, she realised he was trembling, too. Her hands were sliding though his silky hair, and when he cupped her bottom in his hands and pressed her against him, she whimpered into his mouth, and she felt his erection pulse against her pelvis. They were clutching each other, mouths open, tongues battling, each drinking the moans from the other, twisting, trying to plumb every depth of each other. It was as if her entire being, heart and mind and body and soul were in her mouth, being licked and nipped and pleasured by Severus Snape. Her nipples were rock hard; she was sure he could feel them through her robes, and he smelled divine, like new mown grass, and parchment and soap. He tasted like wine, and she understood now why books called desire a hunger. She bit at his lower lip, and he growled and thrust his hips against hers, his arms sliding over her body like ropes to bind her heart, and Hermione never wanted him to stop. Slowly, he gradually eased the intensity of his kiss, until their lips parted with a soft, sucking pout, and Hermione almost cried out at the loss of his warm mouth, his soft fragrant breath. He was as breathless and flushed as she, and Severus closed his eyes and drew her against him. She could hear his strong, steady heart pounding in harmony with hers. His velvety voice slid over her like the most sensuous of garments. “I think that is enough reciprocation, lass. I’m a man before I’m a wizard, and you, witch, are a lennan si, if one ever existed.” ________________________________________

Author's Response:

snapefan19832014.08.03 - 08:21PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
whats all this about?? Hermione was running, running down the hall, fear giving her feet the same wings as when she had spotted Severus and thought he was a Death Eater come to attack the school. She knew this outcome would be different, and she knew he was going to be furious – if she survived. Her heart was almost bursting, and she could still hear the wizard behind her, gaining ground. She almost sobbed, feeling terror and stupidity washing over her, tainting her sweat with a bitter, caustic edge, and she knew he would sense it, and use it against her. She was so close to escaping, but, as before, her fear was making her panic, and she wasn’t thinking straight… -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ALSO is hermione and severus pretenting to liking each other and love and kiss for the dark lords sake is it all fake or is it to liking each other and love and kiss for real?? His lips were warm and soft and hungry, and fit against hers perfectly, and when his tongue begged entrance and she opened herself to him, he gasped and swooped down on her with a startlingly deep, loud moan, like a man enjoying the most delectable dessert, and to Hermione, that was exactly what he was as well. Hermione had been kissed before, but never like this. No one had ever made her body ache and shiver and burn like this. She was trembling as he teased her mouth with his tongue, and as she responded with a soft sweep of her own tongue against his, she realised he was trembling, too. Her hands were sliding though his silky hair, and when he cupped her bottom in his hands and pressed her against him, she whimpered into his mouth, and she felt his erection pulse against her pelvis. They were clutching each other, mouths open, tongues battling, each drinking the moans from the other, twisting, trying to plumb every depth of each other. It was as if her entire being, heart and mind and body and soul were in her mouth, being licked and nipped and pleasured by Severus Snape. Her nipples were rock hard; she was sure he could feel them through her robes, and he smelled divine, like new mown grass, and parchment and soap. He tasted like wine, and she understood now why books called desire a hunger. She bit at his lower lip, and he growled and thrust his hips against hers, his arms sliding over her body like ropes to bind her heart, and Hermione never wanted him to stop. Slowly, he gradually eased the intensity of his kiss, until their lips parted with a soft, sucking pout, and Hermione almost cried out at the loss of his warm mouth, his soft fragrant breath. He was as breathless and flushed as she, and Severus closed his eyes and drew her against him. She could hear his strong, steady heart pounding in harmony with hers. His velvety voice slid over her like the most sensuous of garments. “I think that is enough reciprocation, lass. I’m a man before I’m a wizard, and you, witch, are a lennan si, if one ever existed.” ________________________________________

Author's Response: I appreciate you would like your questions answered, but please STOP quoting large portions of the story. Some people like to read reviews before they read a story and these are spoilers. Please stop NOW. Most of your questions will be answered in the story. Please be patient.

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