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adelgado2011.02.28 - 02:35AM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
Despair!! All is lost. Why must Albus be himself?? Well this is exciting, and how will Severus tell her, if he tells her.

Author's Response: The plot thickens...

verasuspense2011.02.28 - 01:24AM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
Oh yes, we are coming up on Book Six, and all the terrible things that happen. I have faith that Hermione and Severus' love will survive it.

Author's Response: I think they are very strong together...

Elou2011.02.27 - 10:59PM14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their WingsSigned
Yes, please share with her your heart. Oh so loving, so sweet. You made me cry tonight. I was so moved by her vulnerability, and he was her constant. Her anchor. Loving her, as she loves him. It was beautiful, and you tell it so well. Thank you for sharing~Elou

Author's Response: Thank you Elou. I figure that there is enough external conflict - they don't have time for games. This is for keeps. If they can keep it.

artemesia2011.02.27 - 07:22PM13: Twelve: My Dear SomeoneSigned
The little moments between Poppy and Minerva were just what was needed to provide a little lights to the shade of this excellent chapter.

Author's Response: :)

artemesia2011.02.27 - 06:30PM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
Woah, Sirius is one sick puppy - I can only forgive you for *that* scene because this fic is so well written. I'm hoping you will give Hermione a far more pleasant time with Severus later on, though the little hints of 'future Hermione' thinking things over in 2 years time make me worry that isn't going to happen!

Author's Response: Well, artemesia, those who know me know I'm an HEA girl all the way, so if the Muse is still happy for me to write it that way. Thank you so much for your feedback.

braye272011.02.27 - 06:29PM14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their WingsSigned
Oh, my friend, you have outdone yourself with this chapter– and that is saying a lot because I have been enchanted by this story from the very beginning. The tenderness you've written here is aas compelling as any narrative I've read before. From the funeral for her parents, to the solicitor office, to this moment between our two loves here in her new rooms, Severus has stood strong for her and she for him. When he came to her and removed his shirt so she would not have to be the first, tears came to my eyes. As much as he feared her rejection for the ugliness of his scars, he chose to offer her the opportunity to tell him no before she bared her own scar. That, darling, is love at it's most glorious. Kudos to you for your gift with the written word and yor marvelous storytelling. Thank you for making this ship one of the best!!!!! Beth

Author's Response: Beth, you are always a writer's dream review! Thank you for encouraging me, for pointing out the things that please you, and for noticing the little things so dear to a writer's heart. You are one of the people who's feedback I treasure.

artemesia2011.02.27 - 05:14PM8: Seven: No Life I Own, No LibertySigned
There are so many times whilst reading that I have meant to stop and review to praise a beautifully turned phrase or little moment of poetry, but I find I can't stop reading long enough to do so ... So let me just say that this fic is enjoyable not just because the characters are deliciously solid, or the plot enjoyably twisty, but because you have a wonderful grasp of language.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I can't tell you what your kind words mean to me. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.

adelgado2011.02.26 - 08:55PM14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their WingsSigned
WOW this story had been intense. I am really LOVING it. And am so gald I started it. Thank you for sharing it. Looking forward to the next part with great anticipation.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter 14 up soon!

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