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Reviews for Lay Me Low

severus492012.05.10 - 10:56PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
Lovely chapter. And now I remember how many times you had said you were having trouble writing a scene between two men. For a blink of an eye or something like that? Well, it did. Thanks to you (and Jules) the kiss turned out beautiful and organic and very, very fitting. It was fine! Thanks, Teddy!

Author's Response: Thank you so much - yes, she's a great kisser, isn't she? ;) You wouldn't believe how much time I spent on those few paragraphs. Most of the day, actually. I suffered for my art on that one, I can tell you - thank goodness I came to my senses and called on Jules to help me out. She came back in about two minutes with it. Sometimes, you just need to remember that others can help out when you're stumped. I'm really glad you liked it!

Lucretia1232012.05.10 - 09:24PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
Thanks for the update! Love the twist you put into the prophecy! Can't wait how this story turns out!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you will continue to enjoy it!

adelgado2012.05.10 - 08:48PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
the reason prophecy is silly is that usually it is so vague that there are many interpretations and possibilitys

Author's Response: Very true!

dulcemaria4132012.05.10 - 07:33PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
Exhilarating,bittersweet, heart wrenching and so perfect. The scene between Reg and Severus is beautiful but it was the last scene with Luna that brought me to tears on how respect and tenderness she felt toward Severus's body and himself. This chaper left my heart sore and I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have been surprised how much readers have responded to Luna, but I'm really, really glad the scene did what I wanted it to do. Thank you for your encouraging words!

verasuspense2012.05.10 - 06:33PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
You should have called this chapter Revelations ! There's an awful lot of info to process: Severus was dead, but he's alive, and he was a horcrux, but he isn't any more, and the prophecy was about Severus and Harry and Neville ... Whew !

Author's Response: I know, lots to digest, but as the end comes, so do all the pieces of the puzzle. It's going to get worse before it gets better!

Silvermage2012.05.10 - 04:56PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
Ah, close to tears at so many points here. Not at all what I was expecting (which is, paradoxically, what I expect from you!), but now that I've read it, I can see that it was perfectly what it needed to be. Thank you.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much. I really appreciate that. And I'm glad I can still pull out a surprise or two in this story! I hope you will continue to enjoy it!

little_rose2012.05.10 - 04:51PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
SO Beautiful! :))

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

jenidralph2012.05.10 - 04:39PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
I forgive you, Teddy... but, fuck me!! I'm tired of crying. Your stories have a tendency to make me have to stop, walk away from the computer (have a smoke), receive not just a few odd looks from my family and return to do it all over again. I love, love, LOVE that it was Reg and not that damned Lily. The scenes with the two men were so moving. My stomach swooped when Reg took all of Severus' s scars and the Mark away. Even knowing (or strongly believing) that he was coming back to her, I got all weepy with Hermione. Oh, and I NEVER would have guessed (way back then) that the Dark Caress was anything but. Well played, Teddy. Now, what can I do to bribe your Muse into getting the next chapter out post haste???

Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. I am putting together the components of the chapter, but there's so much that has to happen! I really want to get it done before the SSHG Exchange ramps up at the end of the month. My dear Muse is smiling in appreciation, and says to send him lots of chocolate! That's one of his weaknesses ;)

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