Reviews for Lay Me Low
gifarlme | 2011.01.09 - 09:22AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
what a great beginning - although that last paragraph is so scary in what that could mean. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you - nothing too nefarious! |
Sampdoria | 2011.01.09 - 08:22AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
Very interesting first chapter, I liked your portraits of Sirius and Severus. What worries me is the "non-consual" sex warning; I am worried that it implies that Sirius will go to far in his chase of Hermione and I will hate the idea of Sirius getting away with raping her. What I would love to see, in view of today being Severus birthday, is that for once in his lifetime, there is someone who does not let herself being swayed by the marauders, that for once there is a female looking through Sirius shallowness. Not to mention showing us a girl with brain and hearth enough to be true to the one who deserves her faith and trust. I want the Hermione who led Umbriigde to the Centaurs. All this said, I really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful and thought provoking review. Without revealing too much, I, too, prefer a Hermione with some guts, using that formidable brain power. We are going off the AU map here, so we shall see how things develop. |
leonie | 2011.01.09 - 07:37AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
Exciting! I also like your characterization of sirius.
will this get much darker?
Author's Response: Well, I don't want to give too much away! |
SerafineSnape | 2011.01.09 - 03:05AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
Wow, great start! I always thought of Sirius in this vein. Spot on characterizaion. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm working a little outside the box here. I do like Sirius, but I hope to convey that he was once very vain and cocky about his conquests, and Hermione is bringing those feelings back. I hope I can pull this one off - it's giving me a few sleepless nights! |
Sam981 | 2011.01.09 - 02:17AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
AWESOME. Can't wait to read more. Quick updates????
Author's Response: Thank you! I will update as quickly as possible! |
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